Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 문법과 문장구조를 바로잡고 자연스럽게 말하도록 연습하세요. 현재 문장은 시제·전치사·어순 오류와 중복 표현이 많습니다. 질문에 바로 답한 뒤 간결한 주제문을 말하고, 한두 개의 구체적 예시를 연결어(예: for example, for instance)로 자연스럽게 덧붙이세요. 또한 'good at' 뒤에는 동명사 형태를 사용해야 하므로 'good at remembering'처럼 고치세요.

Exemplo: Yes, I'm quite good at remembering things. For example, I often remember people's names and phone numbers, which helps me build relationships. Also, I try to repeat details in my head to keep them in memory.

Sugestão: 응답을 명확하고 논리적으로 구성하는 연습이 필요합니다. 현재 답변은 문법 오류, 의미 불분명, 불필요한 정보가 섞여 있습니다. 과거 사건을 말할 때는 과거형을 사용하고 한 가지 사건을 분명히 설명하세요. 이유와 결과를 간단히 덧붙이되 연결어(eg. because, so, therefore)를 사용해 흐름을 매끄럽게 하세요.

Exemplo: Yes. About five years ago I forgot to submit a school project, and as a result my grade in that subject dropped. Because of that mistake, my parents were disappointed, and I learned to use reminders so it wouldn't happen again.

Sugestão: 명확한 주제문과 자연스러운 표현을 사용하세요. 'remember'의 대상과 방법을 분리해 말하고, 연결어(for example, such as)를 사용하여 구체적 예시를 제시하세요. 또한 'use my smartphone to write'처럼 올바른 동사구를 사용하세요.

Exemplo: I need to remember appointments and deadlines in my daily life. For example, I use my smartphone to note important events and set alarms, so I don't forget meetings or tasks.

Sugestão: 간결한 주제문을 말한 뒤 구체적 방법과 예시를 연결어로 설명하세요. 현재는 어순과 전치사 사용이 부자연스럽습니다. 'record'는 동사로 'record important events' 혹은 명사로 'make a record' 등으로 고쳐 쓰고, 알람 기능을 언급할 때는 'set an alarm'을 사용하세요.

Exemplo: I usually use my smartphone to remember important things. For example, I record details of events in a notes app and set alarms or calendar reminders for deadlines like college project meetings.

× Yes, I have good at memory things such as memorizing of other names or phone numbers and so on.

✓ Yes, I have a good memory for things such as other people's names or phone numbers.

The phrase 'have good at memory things' mixes verb phrases and nouns incorrectly; 'have a good memory' is the correct noun phrase. 'Memorizing of other names' is incorrect: use 'memory for other people's names'. Use possessive 'people's' and the preposition 'for' to indicate what the memory is about. Suggestion: learn fixed expressions like 'have a good memory for' and avoid extra prepositions like 'of' here.

× So it can make good relationship to others.

✓ So it helps me build good relationships with others.

The original lacks a clear subject and uses incorrect verb 'make' with 'relationship to others'. Use 'helps me build' to express facilitation and plural 'relationships' plus preposition 'with' for relationships. Suggestion: use collocations 'build relationships with' and include subject to clarify meaning.

× But it's I have good at these skills.

✓ But I am good at these skills.

'It's I have good at' is ungrammatical; you should use 'I am good at' to describe ability. Remove redundant 'it's' and 'have'. Suggestion: use 'I am good at + noun/gerund'.

× Is about five years ago I forgot to sell meats my projects, thus I have not good at great schools of mathematics subjects.

✓ About five years ago I forgot to sell my project's meat, so I was not good at mathematics at school.

The original is fragmented and confused: 'Is about' is wrong, word order 'sell meats my projects' is incorrect, and 'have not good at great schools of mathematics subjects' mixes tense and structure. Use 'About five years ago' for time, correct noun order 'my project's meat' if applicable, 'so I was not good at mathematics at school' clarifies past ability. Suggestion: put time expression first, use correct noun order, and match past tense for past events.

× Mm-hmm. So my parents have upset to me, had upset to me.

✓ My parents were upset with me.

'Have upset to me' and 'had upset to me' are incorrect verb forms and prepositions. Use past tense 'were upset' and preposition 'with' to indicate the target of the feeling. Suggestion: use 'be upset with someone' for emotional reactions.

× So it's one of the most friendly things to me.

✓ So it was one of the most embarrassing things for me.

'Most friendly things to me' doesn't make sense in context; likely intended meaning is negative reaction, so 'embarrassing' fits. Use 'for me' rather than 'to me' with 'embarrassing'. Suggestion: choose an adjective that matches context and use correct preposition.

× I think to check my smartphone is best things.

✓ I think checking my smartphone is the best thing.

Use gerund 'checking' after 'think' in this structure; 'is best things' is incorrect number and article: use singular 'the best thing'. Suggestion: use 'checking my smartphone is the best thing' or 'It's best to check my smartphone'.

× For example when I have big event or important event to me and just writing in use by my smartphone I can not forget these things.

✓ For example, when I have a big or important event, I write it down in my smartphone so I won't forget it.

Original has wrong article use, verb forms and word order: 'have big event' needs 'a', 'just writing in use by my smartphone' is ungrammatical. Use 'write it down in my smartphone' and future negation 'won't forget'. Suggestion: practice using 'write down' and 'so + will/ won't' for purpose/result.

× Using smartphone about record to my important events.

✓ I use my smartphone to record my important events.

'Using smartphone about record to' is not correct. Use subject 'I' + present simple 'use' and infinitive 'to record' or gerund 'for recording'. 'My important events' is the correct object. Suggestion: form clear subject-verb-object structures: 'I use my smartphone to record events.'

× For example when I have good events such as College Summit projects, I just only write records in my smartphone and it can alarm.

✓ For example, when I have good events such as college summit projects, I only record them on my smartphone, and it can set an alarm.

Capitalize only proper nouns; 'College Summit' may be a proper noun but 'college summit projects' is safer lowercase unless it's a formal name. 'Just only write records' is redundant; use 'only record them'. Use preposition 'on' for devices and 'set an alarm' is the correct collocation. Suggestion: avoid redundant adverbs and use common collocations like 'record on my smartphone' and 'set an alarm'.