Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 答えが自然で伝わるが、冗長や文法的誤りがあり、構成が弱いです。最初に簡潔な主張（主題文）を述べ、その後に1〜2の具体例で裏付けると良いです。冗長な表現（"not at all actually" や "all of things"）を避け、文法的に正しいフレーズ（"not very good at memorizing things"）を使ってください。また、語彙を少し広げ（例えば "forgetful" や "struggle to remember names and passwords"）、リンク語（"for example"）は1回に留めます。発話は最大5文に抑え、明瞭に述べましょう。

Exemplo: I'm not very good at memorizing things. For example, I often forget people's names and passwords. Because of that, I usually write brief notes to help me remember.

Sugestão: 回答は具体的で良いが、語順や冠詞、前置詞の誤りがあり、冗長な表現（"at all"）や繰り返し（"to the to the"）が目立ちます。最初に明確な主題文（Yes, I have）を言った後、出来事を簡潔に時系列で説明してください。原因・結果を示すリンク語（"so"や"therefore"）を使うと論理が明瞭になります。文を短くし、過去形の一貫性を保ってください。

Exemplo: Yes, I have. Once I forgot my internet banking password, so I couldn't log in and missed an important money transfer deadline.

Sugestão: 主題は明確で具体例もあるが、語法と語順の改善が必要です（"purchase diaper of my children" → "buy diapers for my children"、"calendar apps" は単数もしくは具体名）。接続詞（"however"）は不自然なので省くか別の対比に使い、代わりに"for example"や"so"を使って理由を示してください。語彙を少し広げ（"set reminders" / "shopping list"）、文を2〜3文にまとめると流暢に聞こえます。

Exemplo: I need to remember many everyday things, especially shopping items. For example, I often forget to buy diapers for my children, so I add them to a shopping list and set reminders on my phone.

Sugestão: 方法は明確だが表現がやや混乱しており、最後が未完です（"or."で終わっている）。"also"や"and also"の多用を避け、場所や方法の説明を明確にしてください（"note in my car" は何を意味するか不明確）。リンク語（"for example", "then"）で流れを作り、完結した文で終えてください。語彙は"reminders", "calendar app", "sticky notes"などに揃えると自然です。

Exemplo: I usually set reminders on my phone and write brief notes in my calendar app. When I see these alerts or sticky notes, they help me remember important tasks.

× Well, not at all actually, because I'm not good at memorizing all of things.

✓ Well, not at all actually, because I'm not good at memorizing all things.

'all of things' is not natural English. Use 'all things' or 'everything'. Suggestion: say 'memorizing everything' or 'memorizing all things'.

× For example, I tend to forget my password or the name of the person.

✓ For example, I tend to forget my password or the person's name.

Use possessive form 'the person's name' instead of 'the name of the person' for natural spoken English. Alternatively 'someone's name' or 'a person's name'.

× Yes I have. I have forgotten the password of Internet banking so I could not access the website at all and also I couldn't transfer to the to the other bank by deadline.

✓ Yes, I have. I forgot my internet banking password, so I could not access the website at all and I couldn't transfer to the other bank before the deadline.

Use simple past 'forgot' or present perfect consistently; 'forgot' fits because specific past event is described. Use 'internet banking password' (no 'the') and 'before the deadline' for correct preposition. Remove duplicate 'the'.

× In my daily life, there are several things to remember.

✓ In my daily life, there are several things I need to remember.

Add 'I need to' to clarify who must remember; original is grammatical but sounds incomplete. This improves clarity and naturalness.

× However, in my case, I tend to forget to purchase diaper of my children, so I make a note in my calendar apps and set reminder on my phone.

✓ However, in my case, I tend to forget to buy diapers for my children, so I make a note in my calendar app and set reminders on my phone.

Use 'buy' instead of 'purchase' for natural speech. 'Diapers' needs plural and 'for my children' is correct preposition. 'Calendar app' singular or 'calendar apps' plural; use 'app' and 'set reminders' plural for consistency.

× I always set reminders on my phone and also I make a note in my car in my calendar's apps.

✓ I always set reminders on my phone and also make a note in my calendar app in my car.

'Calendar's apps' is incorrect; use 'calendar app'. Place 'in my car' after 'calendar app' or 'in my car's calendar app'. More natural: 'make a note in my car's calendar app.'

× So I remember things when I see the notes or.

✓ So I remember things when I see the notes.

Sentence fragment 'or.' is incomplete and should be removed. Complete the sentence with a second option if intended, e.g. 'or when an alarm goes off.'