Library— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more direct and complete your answer. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No + frequency), avoid hesitations and repetitions, and give one or two concise reasons with linking words. Keep it within 3–4 sentences and finish the thought.

Exemplo: I don't often go to the library; I usually visit only once or twice a month. The main reason is that many libraries near me are noisy and crowded, so I can't concentrate. However, if I find a quiet library with a good collection, I would stay longer to read or study.

Sugestão: Begin with a clear topic sentence describing your typical activity, then add specific reasons or an example using a linking word (for example, because or so). Reduce filler words and keep it concise (2–4 sentences).

Exemplo: Usually I browse for books that are rare or expensive in bookstores. For example, I often look for specialized textbooks or out-of-print novels because borrowing them saves money and gives me access to materials I can't easily buy.

Sugestão: Answer directly with a clear past-tense sentence, then give one specific reason and a brief reflection. Avoid repeating phrases and hesitations and keep to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: No, I didn’t go to libraries as a child because there were very few public libraries in my hometown. I loved books, though, and I wish I had had the chance to borrow more stories when I was younger.

Sugestão: Avoid generalizations and hesitations. Answer the question directly about Chinese kids, then add a comparative or conditional point if you want to broaden the answer. Use clear linking words and be concise.

Exemplo: Some Chinese children do visit libraries, especially in cities where schools encourage reading. However, attendance varies: children who enjoy reading or whose schools promote library use are more likely to go than those who do not.

× I would love to, but I don't usually go to the libraries because I find that libraries are full of students and a group of friends that are just finding for places to hang out.

✓ I would love to, but I don't usually go to the library because I find that libraries are full of students and groups of friends who are just looking for places to hang out.

Use 'the library' for general institution reference (singular) and 'groups of friends' (plural) to match 'are full of'. Also replace 'that are just finding for places' with 'who are just looking for places' for correct verb and relative pronoun usage. Grammar problem types: singular and plural issue (1); incorrect use of pronouns/relative clause (12); incorrect verb form ('finding for' -> 'looking for') which relates to verb + -ing form (8).

× And umm, if the library is very quiet and there are too many books to browse, I would probably.

✓ If the library is very quiet and there are many books to browse, I probably would go there.

The original sentence is incomplete ('I would probably.' lacks a main verb). Reorder to complete the conditional result: 'I probably would go there.' Also 'too many books to browse' implies negative; if intended positive, use 'many books'. This fixes sentence structure error (26) and past/modal placement (4/6).

× If I go to the library, I would browse books that I haven't been able to find in bookstores because some of the books I want to read can be very expensive and uh, it can be hard to find these in bookstores as well, so it would be worth a try to find them in the libraries.

✓ If I go to the library, I would browse books that I haven't been able to find in bookstores because some of the books I want to read can be very expensive and it can be hard to find them in bookstores, so it would be worth trying to find them in libraries.

Use 'it can be hard' (singular dummy subject) and 'them' to refer back to 'books' (plural). Change 'a try to find them in the libraries' to 'worth trying to find them in libraries' and drop the definite article before 'libraries' for general reference. This addresses singular/plural (1), pronoun reference (12), and article usage (22).

× When I was a kid, I didn't go to the libraries at all because my country didn't have a lot of libraries in place.

✓ When I was a kid, I didn't go to libraries at all because my country didn't have many libraries.

For general plural noun reference, 'go to libraries' is preferable to 'go to the libraries'. 'A lot of libraries in place' is awkward — use 'many libraries'. This corrects plural usage (1) and wording style (26).

× And I would all I mean, I'm one of those people who always love books.

✓ I mean, I'm one of those people who always love books.

Remove extraneous words ('And I would all') which break the sentence. The corrected sentence maintains subject-verb agreement: 'people who always love books.' This fixes sentence structure (26) and minor cohesion issues.

× If I had a chance to go in my country, I would probably, but I didn't, sadly.

✓ If I had had a chance to go in my country, I probably would have, but I didn't, sadly.

This is a counterfactual past conditional. Use past perfect in the 'if' clause ('had had') and 'would have' in the result clause. This corrects past tense conditional formation (5).

× MMM I think all of the kids, regardless of where they are from, as long as they love MMM books, I think they would go to the libraries.

✓ I think that most kids, regardless of where they are from, as long as they love books, would go to libraries.

Use 'most kids' or 'all kids' (avoid 'all of the kids' without context). Remove extra 'the' before 'libraries' for general reference and delete filler 'MMM'. This addresses singular/plural/quantifier usage (1 and 14) and article usage (22).

× In my opinion, because I am also not Chinese, but I love the idea of going to the libraries to find something that I haven't seen before.

✓ In my opinion, even though I am not Chinese, I love the idea of going to libraries to find things I haven't seen before.

Use 'even though' for contrast and 'libraries' without 'the' for general plural reference. 'Something' is singular; 'things' matches plural 'libraries' and general meaning. This fixes pronoun/word choice (12) and article/plural issues (22/1).