Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 문장이 자연스럽고 의미 전달이 잘 되지만 약간 장황하고 문장 연결이 매끄럽지 않습니다. 응답 길이를 2~4문장으로 유지하고 연결어를 사용해 간결하게 표현하세요. 또한 구체적인 예시(예: 어떤 사진이나 영상)를 하나 추가하면 더 좋습니다.

Exemplo: Yes, I often chat with my friends on Instagram, where we send photos and short videos of our daily lives. It’s convenient and fun, for example, we share pictures of meals or clips from events to stay connected.

Sugestão: 주제 문장이 분명하고 구체적인 예시를 포함하고 있어 좋습니다. 다만 'discuss about' 같은 어법 오류와 약간의 중복을 고치세요. 연결어를 사용해 문장 흐름을 더 자연스럽게 만드세요.

Exemplo: We usually talk about everyday things, such as what we ate for lunch or recent selfies, because small updates help strengthen our friendship. We also plan outings together, for example discussing cafes or parks to visit.

Sugestão: 응답이 명확하고 이유도 잘 제시되어 있습니다. 다만 첫 문장에서 'I like both' 대신 더 자연스러운 연결을 쓰고, 세부사항(예: 어떤 미래 계획)을 하나 덧붙이면 더욱 설득력 있습니다.

Exemplo: I enjoy both, but I prefer one-on-one conversations because I can discuss serious topics like university work or career plans in detail. For instance, I might ask a close friend for advice about choosing a major.

Sugestão: 의미는 전달되지만 문장에 어색한 표현('face to face concert communication')이 있어 혼란을 줍니다. 꼭 두 가지를 비교한 뒤 명확한 이유를 하나로 정리하고 자연스러운 표현을 사용하세요.

Exemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can better read emotions through tone and body language, although social media is useful for quick messages.

Sugestão: 의도는 분명하지만 문법 오류('it's make me')와 흐름상 어색함이 있습니다. 이유를 하나로 정리하고 자연스러운 문장으로 고치며 구체적 예시를 추가하세요.

Exemplo: Not really. I avoid arguments because they can damage relationships and leave me feeling exhausted, so I prefer to stay calm and discuss issues politely.

× I usually chat with my friends on Instagram messages and we also share our daily lives through sending photos and sharing videos.

✓ I usually chat with my friends in Instagram messages and we also share our daily lives by sending photos and sharing videos.

Use of preposition with 'messages' is incorrect and 'through sending' is awkward. Replace 'on Instagram messages' with 'in Instagram messages' and 'through sending' with 'by sending' for natural collocation. Suggestion: Use 'in Instagram messages' and 'by' + gerund for means.'

× We usually talk about our daily lives like what we ate for lunch or recent selfies because sharing small things helps our relationship stay strong.

✓ We usually talk about our daily lives, like what we ate for lunch or recent selfies, because sharing small things helps our relationships stay strong.

Missing commas for clarity and 'relationship' should be plural 'relationships' because talking about interactions between multiple friends. Also add commas around the example phrase. Suggestion: Use commas to set off examples and match plural noun with context.

× Sometimes we discuss about places we will go together.

✓ Sometimes we discuss places we will go to together.

The verb 'discuss' should not be followed by 'about'; use direct object. Add preposition 'to' after 'go' to indicate direction. Suggestion: Use 'discuss X' (no 'about') and 'go to somewhere'.

× Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?

✓ Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with just one friend?

'Only one friend' is grammatical but 'just one friend' is more natural in choice questions. This is a style/quantifier improvement rather than grammatical necessity. Suggestion: Use 'just' for natural spoken English.

× I particularly prefer face to face concert communication because I can read people's emotions more accurately.

✓ I particularly prefer face-to-face communication because I can read people's emotions more accurately.

Unnecessary and confusing word 'concert' inserted. 'Face-to-face' should be hyphenated when used as adjective. Remove 'concert'. Suggestion: Use 'face-to-face communication'.

× Not really, I try to avoid arguing with my friends because I can harm our relationships.

✓ Not really, I try to avoid arguing with my friends because it can harm our relationships.

Subject 'arguing' is a noun phrase; consequence is expressed by 'it' rather than 'I'. Using 'I can harm' suggests the speaker personally harms relationships in present tense; 'it can harm' correctly refers to arguing. Suggestion: Use 'it can harm' or 'because arguing can harm our relationships.'

× Also it's make me so exhausted and so I talk calmly.

✓ Also it makes me very exhausted, so I try to stay calm.

'It's make' is incorrect subject-verb agreement; should be 'it makes'. 'So exhausted and so I talk calmly' is awkward; use 'so I try to stay calm' or 'so I speak calmly.' Suggestion: Use correct verb form 'makes' and a natural consequence clause.