Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and structured: begin with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, give one or two specific reasons with linking words, and avoid hesitations or repeated phrases. Use natural vocabulary (chatting vs. calling) and keep answers to at most 3–4 sentences. For example, state you prefer voice calls because they feel more personal and help you express emotions, rather than saying you feel depressed without explanation.

Exemplo: I don't really like texting or chatting online; I prefer calling my friends instead. Because voice calls let me hear tone and emotions, conversations feel more personal and clearer. For this reason, I usually choose calls when I want a meaningful conversation.

Sugestão: Provide a clear topic sentence and specific examples. Use correct tense and clearer linking words (for example, 'for instance' or 'such as'). Avoid vague or incorrect phrases like 'waste of you' and 'spend our time more good.' Keep to 2–3 sentences and give one concrete example of a recent chat topic.

Exemplo: We usually discuss politics and university life. For instance, when a classmate starts a group project, we talk about roles and deadlines to make the work more effective. These conversations help us plan and learn from each other.

Sugestão: Start with a clear opinion and give 1–2 specific reasons linked logically. Use cohesive devices like 'because' and 'for example.' Avoid unclear phrases ('it's nonetheless') and incomplete sentences. Explain what makes one-to-one talks more interesting (e.g., deeper discussion, less interruption).

Exemplo: I prefer talking with a single friend rather than a group. Because one-to-one conversations allow deeper discussion and fewer interruptions; for example, I can explore a topic in detail without conflicting opinions cutting the conversation short.

Sugestão: Answer directly and give a clear reason with an example. Reduce fillers ('uh') and be specific about benefits of face-to-face interaction (e.g., body language, immediate feedback). If criticizing social media, say why (miscommunication, lack of nonverbal cues). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can read body language and emotions, which makes conversations clearer. For example, when I haven't seen a friend for a long time, meeting in person helps us reconnect more effectively than exchanging messages online.

Sugestão: Give a clear statement about whether you argue and one or two specific details about how you handle arguments. Use linking words ('because', 'however', 'for example') and avoid unclear expressions ('they always looking forward'). Mention outcomes like resolving issues calmly to show maturity.

Exemplo: Yes, we sometimes argue because friends can have different opinions, but it's usually constructive. For example, when a disagreement arises, we discuss our points calmly and try to reach a compromise, and our friendship remains intact.

× To be honest, I don't like chatting with my friends because I think it's uh, well, guess in this moment I was. I waste my time.

✓ To be honest, I don't like chatting with my friends because I feel like I waste my time.

The original contains fragmented clauses and tense inconsistency ('guess in this moment I was') causing a sentence structure error. Combine ideas into a clear present-tense statement: use 'I feel like I waste my time' to express a general feeling. Remove filler words and unclear fragments to improve coherence.

× I prefer to talk. Yes, I prefer to call and talk with my friends like this, but I don't like chatting because it's boring.

✓ I prefer to talk on the phone with my friends instead, because chatting online is boring.

The original has repetitive and fragmented phrases. Recast into a single clear sentence: 'prefer to talk on the phone' specifies the medium, and 'chatting online' contrasts clearly. This fixes sentence structure and improves clarity.

× I feel depressed when I'm chatting and because of this, I prefer to always.

✓ I feel depressed when I chat, and because of this I prefer not to chat at all.

The sentence is incomplete and awkward ('prefer to always' lacks an object). Use the simple present 'chat' for habitual action and complete the thought with 'prefer not to chat at all' to express preference clearly.

× I usually went into communication with my friend about politics, about university life.

✓ I usually talk with my friends about politics and university life.

Using 'went into communication' is incorrect for habitual present actions; use simple present 'talk' for routines. 'Usually' requires present tense to describe typical behavior.

× And when they, for instance, create a project, they're always talking about that because it's very beneficial for us and we prefer to waste of you.

✓ When, for instance, they create a project, they always talk about it because it's very beneficial for us and we prefer to spend our time on it.

Multiple errors: verb forms should be simple present for habitual actions ('create' and 'talk'), 'talking about that' can be 'talk about it', and 'prefer to waste of you' is ungrammatical. Use 'prefer to spend our time on it' to correct verb phrase and preposition use.

× Yes, we prefer to spend our time, uh, more good.

✓ Yes, we prefer to spend our time more usefully.

'More good' is incorrect; use an adverb or adverbial phrase to modify 'spend time'. 'More usefully' or 'in better ways' is grammatical and clearer.

× I prefer to chat with the only one friend because first of all, I don't like to talk with a group of people.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because, first of all, I don't like talking with a group of people.

'The only one friend' is ungrammatical; use 'only one friend'. Also use gerund 'talking' after 'like' for general preference.

× We are talking with different opinions, ideas and it's nonetheless.

✓ We discuss different opinions and ideas, and it's not always easy to agree.

The original is awkward ('it's nonetheless' is unclear). Use 'discuss' for conversation and clarify meaning by stating a consequence: 'not always easy to agree.' This fixes sentence cohesion and clarity.

× And because of this, when I'm talking with for instance with my one friend, it's more interesting and also beneficial and I prefer talk with.

✓ Because of this, when I talk with, for example, one friend, it's more interesting and beneficial, and I prefer that.

Use simple present 'talk' for habitual actions rather than 'I'm talking'. Remove redundant 'with' and complete the clause ('I prefer that'). This corrects verb form and completes the sentence.

× Uh, I like communicate face to face because, uh, I can feel emotions or I can, for instance, if I, uh, don't see my friend a lot of time I can meet and share my opinions, ideas.

✓ I like to communicate face to face because I can feel emotions; for instance, if I don't see my friend often, I can meet them and share my opinions and ideas.

Missing 'to' after 'like' ('like to communicate'), 'a lot of time' should be 'often' or 'for a long time', and pronoun agreement ('meet them'). Reorganize clause order for clarity and correct preposition/verb usage.

× Of course, with social media, it's not interesting because it's not really, really.

✓ Of course, with social media it's not very interesting because it's not the same.

'Not really, really' is ungrammatical; use 'not very interesting' and a comparison phrase 'not the same' to convey the intended meaning. This corrects adverb usage and expression.

× Of course it's normal, uh, when you are arguing with your friends, because we are people, we have different opinions, Sometimes we are not in the same position.

✓ Of course it's normal to argue with your friends because we are people and we have different opinions; sometimes we don't see things the same way.

The original uses awkward phrasing 'when you are arguing' and inconsistent capitalization. Use 'It's normal to argue' and 'don't see things the same way' for natural expression. This corrects modal/verb patterns and sentence flow.

× They always looking forward, but it's not means that our being is very bad with the way we can discuss, we can urge, but always we will stay like friends and it's very nice.

✓ They are always looking forward, but that does not mean our relationship is bad; we can discuss and argue, but we will always remain friends, which is nice.

Missing auxiliary 'are' before 'always looking forward' and awkward noun phrases ('our being is very bad') need correction. Use 'relationship' and proper connectors. Use 'argue' instead of 'urge'. This fixes present participle usage, noun choice, and overall clarity.