Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be concise and grammatical. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail. Use correct tense and pronouns, and avoid repetition.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. For example, I often tell my best friend about my day and we share both happy and difficult moments, which makes me feel supported.

Sugestão: Organize your answer: give a general topic sentence and two clear, specific examples linked with connectors. Use correct noun forms and clearer references.

Exemplo: We talk about many things. For instance, we discuss school or work experiences, and we also talk about music and celebrities, such as recent performances at Coachella.

Sugestão: Your idea is clear but make it more natural and grammatical. Start with a direct preference, then give one reason and an example, using linking words.

Exemplo: I prefer talking one-on-one because it allows me to listen more carefully and respond thoughtfully. For example, in a one-on-one conversation I can ask follow-up questions and discuss personal matters in depth.

Sugestão: Make sentences more fluent and natural. State your preference clearly, give a reason with a linking word, and mention the alternative briefly.

Exemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication because it feels more immediate and personal. However, if we are busy or far apart, I use social media to stay in touch.

Sugestão: Be more coherent and natural: answer directly, then explain with a reason and a brief example. Use correct verb forms and avoid awkward phrasing.

Exemplo: I don't argue with friends often; I usually try to deal with my feelings privately. For example, if I'm upset I might reflect on the situation first and bring it up calmly later if needed.

× Sure, I really enjoy the time when I shared the daily life to my best friend to share the happiness and sadness since in my whole life to each others bring me happy.

✓ Sure, I really enjoy the times when I share daily life with my best friend and we share happiness and sadness; being close to each other makes me happy.

Errors: incorrect tense (shared -> share) and inconsistent verb forms; wrong prepositions (to my best friend -> with my best friend); incorrect pronoun/phrase (each others -> each other). Use present simple 'share' for habitual actions. Use 'with' to indicate togetherness and 'each other' as the reciprocal pronoun. Also simplify sentence structure for clarity.

× We often share a variety of different topic for instance the school time or working time or the famous idol famous song like recently Justin Bieber go to local trailer maybe we were checked Coachella's.

✓ We often discuss a variety of different topics, for instance school or work, or popular idols and songs. For example, recently Justin Bieber went to a local trailer, and we also checked Coachella's lineup.

Errors: pluralisation needed (topic -> topics); awkward word choices and structure ('school time or working time' -> school or work); tense error (go -> went). Use 'discuss' or 'share' with 'topics'. Break into clearer sentences and use past tense for specific past events. Also use possessive or noun forms correctly ('Coachella's lineup').

× I prefer to 1 by 1 because I think it is a best way to listen carefully the other person says and to reply and share your thinking.

✓ I prefer one-on-one conversations because I think it is the best way to listen carefully to what the other person says and to reply and share your thoughts.

Errors: numeric expression should be written as 'one-on-one'; article error (a best -> the best); missing preposition 'to' before a clause ('listen carefully to what...'). 'Thinking' is better as the plural noun 'thoughts' in this context. Fix article, preposition, and form issues.

× If I have a time and also have a chance, I prefer to communicate in person than by the social media, because I think social media maybe you cannot share instantly.

✓ If I have time and the chance, I prefer to communicate in person rather than via social media, because I think you may not be able to share things instantly on social media.

Errors: unnecessary article 'a' before 'time' (have a time -> have time); comparative 'rather than' is correct instead of 'than'; use 'via' or 'on' rather than 'by the social media'; modal placement and form ('maybe you cannot' -> 'you may not be able to'). Reorder for natural English and correct prepositions.

× But if we have no time, maybe social media is a good way.

✓ But if we do not have time, social media can be a good option.

Minor tense/auxiliary issue: use 'do not have' for present simple negative. 'Can be' is more natural than 'is' with 'maybe'. Use 'option' instead of 'way' for clarity.

× Not often I used to handle by myself.

✓ Not often; I usually handle things by myself.

Errors: word order and tense ('Not often I used to' is incorrect). Use 'I usually handle things by myself' for habitual present action. 'Used to' implies past habit; remove it for present habit.

× I'm not good at sharing the bad mood to the other person because I think the best things maybe can let it go.

✓ I'm not good at sharing my bad mood with other people because I think the best thing is sometimes to let it go.

Errors: preposition and pronoun use ('sharing the bad mood to the other person' -> 'sharing my bad mood with other people'); number agreement ('best things' -> 'best thing'); modal/adverb order and choice ('maybe can' -> 'is sometimes'). Improve natural phrasing and correct prepositions and number agreement.