Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve grammar and sentence structure: use present simple correctly (e.g., 'I usually chat'), avoid filler words, combine ideas concisely, and limit to 3–4 sentences. Add a clear topic sentence then 1–2 specific supporting details (how and why).

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I usually chat with my friends every day to share what I did and any interesting stories. For example, I send photos or short updates during the day, which helps us stay close even when we are far apart.

Sugestão: Be more specific and correct word choice: avoid vague phrases like 'in the in such time' and 'gossips'—say 'news' or 'events'. Use linking words to connect ideas ('also', 'for example'). Provide a concise topic sentence plus one concrete example.

Exemplo: I usually talk about my daily routine and any interesting events that happen, and we also discuss TV shows. For example, we often recommend a new Netflix series and plan to watch episodes together online.

Sugestão: Improve accuracy and fluency: use correct noun forms and articles ('a group', 'an individual'), remove fillers ('like'), and tighten the reasoning with a clear linking phrase ('because' followed by a concise reason).

Exemplo: I prefer chatting with a group because I can tell a story once and everyone hears it, which saves time. However, I also talk one-on-one when the topic is private or needs more detail.

Sugestão: Focus on clarity and correct vocabulary: say 'face-to-face' or 'in person', use 'facial expressions' and 'intonation' not 'inflection', and explain why these matter with a clear consequence. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because I can see facial expressions and hear tone of voice, which makes conversations clearer and more enjoyable. This reduces misunderstandings compared with text messages.

Sugestão: Make the response more concise and grammatical: use singular/plural correctly ('different opinions'), remove fillers, and provide a brief example of how you resolve arguments. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' appropriately.

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I think arguments are normal because we cannot agree on everything, but we usually resolve them by talking calmly and listening to each other's point of view.

× Yes, I do and I usually chatting with my friends every day.

✓ Yes, I do and I usually chat with my friends every day.

The verb 'chat' should be in base form after the auxiliary 'usually' expresses a habitual action; use simple present 'chat' not present participle 'chatting'. Use adverb 'usually' before main verb: 'usually chat'. Suggestion: Use simple present for habits: 'I usually chat with my friends every day.'

× I'm just like share my routines.

✓ I just like to share my routines.

The structure 'like share' is incorrect. After 'like' when meaning 'enjoy', use gerund ('liking sharing') or with 'just' better 'I just like to share'. Here 'I just like to share my routines' is natural. Suggestion: Use 'like to + verb' or 'like + -ing'.

× I'll share a story throughout the day with my friends.

✓ I share stories with my friends throughout the day.

The future 'I'll share' is odd for a habitual action. Use simple present to indicate routine. Also 'a story' singular conflicts with 'throughout the day' — plural 'stories' fits habitual sharing. Suggestion: Use simple present for routines: 'I share stories with my friends throughout the day.'

× It's helped me keep in touch whether like a long distance.

✓ It helps me keep in touch even when we are long-distance.

'It's helped' (present perfect) can be okay but with general statement present simple 'It helps' is clearer. 'Whether like a long distance' is ungrammatical: use 'even when we are long-distance' or 'when we live far apart'. Suggestion: Use 'even when we are long-distance' or 'when we are far apart'.

× So I usually share my routine like gossips that happened in the in such time.

✓ So I usually share my routine, like gossip about things that happened recently.

'Gossips' is incorrect plural noun; 'gossip' is uncountable. 'Happened in the in such time' is unclear — use 'happened recently'. Suggestion: Use 'gossip about things that happened recently.'

× Also shared a series on Netflix for watching together.

✓ I also share a series on Netflix to watch together.

Fragment missing subject and correct verb form. 'Also shared' (past) conflicts with present habitual. Use present simple 'I also share' and infinitive 'to watch together'. Suggestion: Include subject and use present tense for habits: 'I also share a series on Netflix to watch together.'

× If I had to choose between chatting with a group of people or with only individual, I would prefer chatting the group because I can tell the story at one time and everyone will know it, so it's not waste my time to like send the same message to.

✓ If I had to choose between chatting with a group of people or with only one individual, I would prefer chatting with the group because I can tell the story once and everyone will know it, so I don't have to waste time sending the same message.

Problems: 'only individual' should be 'one individual'; missing preposition 'with the group'; 'tell the story at one time' -> 'tell the story once'; 'it's not waste my time to like send' -> 'I don't have to waste time sending'. Also keep conditional 'would prefer' consistent. Suggestion: Use 'one individual', 'chatting with the group', and 'I don't have to waste time sending the same message.'

× Though I prefer to communicate in person because I can see other persons reaction with the conversation more enjoyable.

✓ I prefer to communicate in person because I can see the other person's reaction and the conversation is more enjoyable.

'Other persons reaction' should be 'the other person's reaction' (possessive). 'With the conversation more enjoyable' is ungrammatical; connect clauses: 'and the conversation is more enjoyable.' Suggestion: Use possessive form and combine clauses: 'the other person's reaction' and 'the conversation is more enjoyable.'

× For example when we meet fat face, I will see there I notice their facial inflection and tone so misunderstanding unless slightly.

✓ For example, when we meet face to face, I can notice their facial expressions and tone, so misunderstandings are less likely.

'Meet fat face' is a typo for 'face to face'. 'I will see there I notice' is redundant; use 'I can notice'. 'Facial inflection' -> 'facial expressions'; 'so misunderstanding unless slightly' is incorrect — intended meaning: 'so misunderstandings are less likely.' Suggestion: Use 'face to face', 'facial expressions and tone', and 'misunderstandings are less likely.'

× Yes I do. I think it's quite normal to have some argument with friends sometimes because it is impossible that we will agree on everything at the same time.

✓ Yes, I do. I think it's quite normal to have some arguments with friends sometimes because it is impossible for us to agree on everything at the same time.

Plural 'argument' needed as countable in this context: 'some arguments'. 'It is impossible that we will agree' is awkward; use 'impossible for us to agree'. Suggestion: Use plural 'arguments' and 'impossible for us to agree.'

× So maybe another person would have a different opinions so but we can like talk to each other.

✓ So maybe another person would have different opinions, but we can talk to each other.

'A different opinions' mixes singular article with plural noun; should be 'different opinions' (no 'a'). Extra fillers 'so' and 'like' are unnecessary. Suggestion: Remove filler words and match article/number: 'different opinions, but we can talk to each other.'