Hobby— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Отвечайте более естественно и логично, избегайте повторов («I especially» дважды). Начните с прямого утверждения, затем добавьте 1–2 конкретных поддерживающих деталей. Используйте связку для плавного перехода, например «and» или «also», и разнообразьте лексику (например, «I enjoy» → «I prefer» или «I'm fascinated by»).

Exemplo: I enjoy drawing in my free time, particularly abstract and experimental pieces. I prefer oil paints because they give a rich texture and depth to the canvas, and I also like experimenting with different styles to keep my work fresh.

Sugestão: Исправьте временa и добавьте более конкретную деталь. Фраза должна использовать прошедшее время («preferred»/«liked») и быть расширена одной поддерживающей деталью. Используйте связку («and», «so», «for example») чтобы объяснить почему или как часто вы рисовали.

Exemplo: Yes, when I was a child I loved drawing and often spent hours sketching animals and cartoons. I preferred drawing to other activities and usually practiced every day after school.

Sugestão: Сформулируйте мысль грамотно и последовательно: используйте прошедшее время и точные слова (например, «more active»). Дайте чёткое ответное предложение и добавьте одно-два конкретных примера или объяснения. Избегайте слов-наполнителей («like this»).

Exemplo: Not really — although I drew as a child, I was generally more active and enjoyed sports. For example, I often played football and basketball with friends, which kept me very busy.

Sugestão: Говорите более естественно и грамотно: используйте структуру «No, I don't share hobbies with my family» и избегайте пауз («uh»). Дайте краткое пояснение и конкретный пример (кто и какое хобби имеет). Используйте связку («for example», «however») для связности.

Exemplo: No, I don't share hobbies with my family. I'm the only one who enjoys drawing; for example, my brother is passionate about making music while my parents prefer gardening.

× When I was a child, I also prefer to draw.

✓ When I was a child, I also preferred to draw.

The sentence refers to a past time ('When I was a child') so the verb should be in the past tense. 'Prefer' is present tense; change to 'preferred' to match the past context. Suggestion: use past simple for habits in the past (I preferred to draw).

× Probably not. When I was a child, I think I was more activity and productive and I prefer activity, for example football or basketball like this.

✓ Probably not. When I was a child, I think I was more active and productive, and I preferred active activities, for example football or basketball.

Multiple issues: 'activity' is a noun but an adjective 'active' is required to describe the person (adjective use). 'Prefer activity' is ungrammatical: use 'preferred active activities' or 'preferred being active'. Verb tense must match past ('preferred'). Also the phrase 'like this' is unnecessary; rephrase to list examples. Suggestion: replace nouns/adverbs with proper adjective forms and keep consistent past tense for past habits.

× No, I don't have the same hobbies with my family members.

✓ No, I don't have the same hobbies as my family members.

English uses 'have the same ... as' rather than 'with' in this context. Using 'with' is incorrect here. Suggestion: use 'the same ... as' to compare similarity between people.

× Only me uh person who like drawing uh another in my family members like another hobbies.

✓ I'm the only person who likes drawing; other members of my family have different hobbies.

The original is ungrammatical and word order is confusing. 'Only me' should be 'I'm the only person'. Verb agreement: 'who like' must be 'who likes' because the relative clause refers to 'person' (third singular). 'Another in my family members like another hobbies' is unclear; replace with 'other members of my family have different hobbies.' Suggestion: use clear subject-verb structure and correct verb agreement.

× For example my brother like to do music.

✓ For example, my brother likes to make music.

Subject-verb agreement and tense: with singular third-person subject 'my brother' the verb needs third-person singular form 'likes'. Also 'to do music' is unnatural; better 'make music' or 'play music'. Suggestion: use 'likes' and a natural verb collocation such as 'make music'.