Hobby— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Give a direct, concise topic sentence and reduce fillers. Use correct nouns and simple grammar: say ‘I enjoy watching movies.’ Add one specific detail and avoid repetition and hesitations.

Exemplo: I enjoy watching movies in my free time. For example, I like action and science-fiction films because they keep me entertained and help me relax after work.

Sugestão: Use past tense and clearer structure. Start with a direct statement about childhood hobby, then give one clear reason and an example. Avoid repeating words and incorrect forms like ‘hoppiest.’

Exemplo: Yes. As a child I loved watching Batman films. I admired the actor’s performance and that inspired me to watch lots of superhero movies and comics.

Sugestão: Keep tense consistent and be specific about continuity. Say you have enjoyed watching films since childhood and give a brief contrast between past and present tastes. Avoid confusing actor/character terms (Superman is a character, not an actor).

Exemplo: Yes, I have enjoyed watching films since I was a child. I used to watch Batman movies, and now I still enjoy superhero films like Superman because I like the exciting stories and special effects.

Sugestão: Answer directly and clearly: say whether you share hobbies and give a specific example of a shared activity. Use plural/singular correctly and link ideas with a connector (however, but, for example).

Exemplo: Not really — most of my family have different hobbies. However, we do sometimes watch sports together, especially football matches on weekends.

× Yes, I have a hobbyist. My hobby. My hobby is uh, watching movies and enjoying.

✓ Yes, I have a hobby. My hobby is watching movies and enjoying them.

The student used 'hobbyist' incorrectly; 'hobbyist' means a person who has a hobby, while they intended to say 'hobby' (a thing). The sentence is also fragmented and missing an object for 'enjoying.' Combine fragments into one clear sentence and add the object 'them' to show what is being enjoyed. Suggestion: say 'My hobby is watching movies and enjoying them.' Grammar problem type ID: 26

× Yes, I have a hoppiest when I was a child because I watched the Batman Batman actor because I loved him who he acted in the film.

✓ Yes, I had a hobby when I was a child because I watched the actor who played Batman and I loved his acting in the film.

Multiple issues: 'hoppiest' is not a correct word (likely meant 'hobby'); tense should be past 'had' to match 'when I was a child.' The phrase 'Batman Batman actor' is repetitive and unclear; use 'the actor who played Batman.' 'Who he acted' is incorrect word order; use 'who played' or 'whose acting I loved.' Suggestion: simplify and use past tense and correct relative clause: 'I watched the actor who played Batman and I loved his acting.' Grammar problem type ID: 5

× Yes, since I, I was a child, I love it to watch the movies because, uh, when I was child I was watching the Batman. Right now I'm watching the Superman because Superman is a very great actor.

✓ Yes, since I was a child, I have loved watching movies because when I was a child I used to watch Batman. Right now I'm watching Superman films because I think the actor who plays Superman is great.

Tense mismatch: 'since I was a child' requires a present perfect ('have loved') to show an action continuing to the present. 'I love it to watch' is ungrammatical; use 'have loved watching.' 'When I was child' needs article 'a child.' 'I was watching the Batman' is awkward; use 'I used to watch Batman.' Also 'Superman is a very great actor' is odd because Superman is a character; clarify 'the actor who plays Superman' or 'Superman films.' Suggestion: use present perfect for ongoing preferences and 'used to' for habitual past actions. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× As we have family, we are different because everybody has own hobbies, so I cannot mention it, but some of them will watch together sports.

✓ In our family we are different because everybody has their own hobbies, so I cannot name them all, but some of us watch sports together.

'As we have family' is unnatural; use 'In our family.' 'Everybody has own hobbies' is missing the possessive pronoun 'their' and should be 'everybody has their own hobbies.' 'I cannot mention it' is vague; 'name them all' is clearer. 'Some of them will watch together sports' has word order and auxiliary errors; use 'some of us watch sports together' (present simple for habitual action). Suggestion: use correct possessive pronouns, natural family expression, and correct word order for activities. Grammar problem type ID: 12}]}}