Hobby— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make the response more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, then give 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words. Correct grammar (articles, verb forms) and reduce repetition.

Exemplo: I enjoy listening to music. In particular, Punjabi music is closest to my heart — I like traditional folk songs and modern Punjabi hip‑hop. I listen to music every day because it relaxes me and helps me focus.

Sugestão: Give a clear past‑tense topic sentence and specific supporting details. Use correct past tense and avoid unclear phrases. Keep it to 2–3 sentences and use linking words to explain why you liked it.

Exemplo: Yes. One of my favourite childhood hobbies was riding my bicycle. I loved it because it made me feel free and curious, and I used to ride around the neighbourhood every afternoon with my friends.

Sugestão: Answer directly and use present perfect/simple present correctly to show continuity. Remove filler sounds and make supporting details specific (when, where, who).

Exemplo: Yes, I still enjoy riding a bicycle. I often cycle to the nearby park at weekends with friends or family, which helps me exercise and relax.

Sugestão: Give a clear direct answer and then explain with specific examples. Use linking words (however, for example) and avoid repetition.

Exemplo: No, my hobbies are different from my family's. For example, I like travelling and exploring new places, whereas my parents prefer gardening and cooking, so our interests don't really match.

× Yeah, I do have a hobby. My personal favorite hobby is to listen music.

✓ Yeah, I do have a hobby. My personal favorite hobby is listening to music.

Verb + -ing form (ID 8) and incorrect use of prepositions (ID 11): 'listen' should be followed by the -ing form 'listening' when used as a noun (gerund). Also the verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' before its object, so use 'listening to music'.

× I listen a different kinds of music, but especially when it comes to my which music is close to my heart, it is obviously Punjabi music, all kind of Punjabi folk music, the classical ones and especially the hip Hop 1.

✓ I listen to different kinds of music, but when it comes to the music that is closest to my heart, it is obviously Punjabi music, including Punjabi folk, classical, and especially hip hop.

Singular and plural issue (ID 1), incorrect use of prepositions (ID 11), sentence structure errors (ID 26), and incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs (ID 13): 'a different kinds' should be 'different kinds' (remove 'a'). 'listen' needs 'to'. 'my which music is close to my heart' is ungrammatical; use 'the music that is closest to my heart'. Use parallel structure for listing genres and 'hip hop' is not capitalized as a common noun.

× And I often listen music every day in my life.

✓ And I often listen to music every day.

Incorrect use of prepositions (ID 11) and sentence structure errors (ID 26): 'listen' requires 'to'. 'every day in my life' is redundant; 'every day' is sufficient and more natural.

× Yeah, I do have many hobbies, but I personally, which is very close to my heart was to ride a bicycle.

✓ Yes, I had many hobbies, but the one that was closest to my heart was riding a bicycle.

Past tense issue (ID 5), sentence structure errors (ID 26), and verb + -ing form (ID 8): The question asks about childhood, so use past tense 'had' and 'was'. Use 'the one that was closest to my heart' for clarity and use the gerund 'riding' as the noun form.

× Like at that time I was very curious about it and I wish that I can grow faster in a day.

✓ At that time I was very curious about it and I wished that I could grow faster.

Past tense issue (ID 5) and modal verb usage (ID 4): When describing past wishes, use past tense 'wished' and the past-modal 'could' rather than 'can'. 'In a day' is unnatural and unnecessary, so remove it.

× So I I'll totally enough to ride a bicycle and which was my one of the best hobby at that time.

✓ So I rode my bicycle a lot; it was one of my favorite hobbies at that time.

Sentence structure errors (ID 26), tense issue (ID 5), and incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs (ID 13): 'I'll totally enough' is ungrammatical. Use past tense 'rode' and express frequency with 'a lot'. 'one of my favorite hobbies' is the correct phrase.

× Yeah, as I mentioned before, I do have a hobby by riding a bicycle that time and still, uh, it's the same.

✓ Yeah, as I mentioned before, I had the hobby of riding a bicycle then, and it's still the same now.

Past tense issue (ID 5) and sentence structure errors (ID 26): For a hobby that started in childhood and continues, use 'had' for the past part and 'it's still the same now' for the present continuation. 'I do have a hobby by riding a bicycle that time' is unnatural; use 'I had the hobby of riding a bicycle then'.

× I love to ride bicycle and I often, uh, visited, uh, visit nearby my parks on weekend on my bicycle with my friends or with my close ones.

✓ I love to ride my bicycle and I often visit nearby parks on weekends with my friends or close ones.

Incorrect use of articles (ID 22), verb tense issue (ID 6), incorrect use of prepositions (ID 11), and sentence structure errors (ID 26): Use the possessive 'my bicycle' or 'ride a bicycle' and present simple 'visit' for habitual actions. 'nearby my parks' should be 'nearby parks'. Use 'on weekends' (plural) and 'with my friends or close ones' is simplified to 'with my friends or close ones'.

× No I don't think so. I do have the different hobbies because my hobbies it's too.

✓ No, I don't think so. I have different hobbies.

Sentence structure errors (ID 26), incorrect use of articles (ID 22), and redundancy: 'I do have the different hobbies because my hobbies it's too' is ungrammatical and redundant. Use the simple, natural statement 'I have different hobbies.' If you want to add contrast, add a clause such as 'compared to my family'.

× My hobbies are to explore world, see different places, visit visit different places.

✓ My hobbies are exploring the world, seeing different places, and visiting new places.

Verb + -ing form (ID 8), incorrect use of articles (ID 22), and repetition: Use gerunds for a list of hobbies ('exploring,' 'seeing,' 'visiting') and include 'the' in 'the world.' Remove repeated words and make the list parallel.

× And I'm not sure about my parents hobbies, their hobbies are very much different.

✓ And I'm not sure about my parents' hobbies; their hobbies are quite different.

Incorrect use of the definite article or possessive (ID 17/22) and punctuation/sentence structure (ID 26): Use the possessive form 'parents'' or 'parents' hobbies'. Use a semicolon or period to separate sentences and 'quite different' is more natural than 'very much different'.