Reading— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve grammar (tense, articles, singular/plural), simplify phrasing, and make answer more concise and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and keep under five sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I do. Reading is my favourite hobby because it helps me relax after a long day. For example, I enjoy fiction and self-help books; fiction lets me escape into different worlds while self-help gives practical tips I can apply. As a result, I often finish a book feeling refreshed and a little wiser.

Sugestão: Correct word choice and grammar, use a clear topic sentence, and provide two specific reasons with linking words. Replace unclear words ("radial") and fix tense and comparative forms. Keep sentences concise and logical.

Exemplo: I prefer reading on a screen because it is very convenient and portable. For instance, I can carry thousands of books on my phone, so I always have something to read when I am out. Moreover, e-readers let me look up unfamiliar words and search for specific information quickly.

Sugestão: Improve sentence structure, verb forms and vocabulary. Begin with a direct topic sentence, then contrast the two situations using linking words ("however", "whereas"). Be specific about what "reading carefully" involves (taking notes, highlighting). Avoid extra words and keep it within five sentences.

Exemplo: It depends on the purpose: I read carefully when the material is for exams or schoolwork because I need to remember details and often take notes. However, when I read for pleasure—such as novels or blogs—I usually skim to get the main idea quickly and enjoy the story without focusing on every detail.

Sugestão: Avoid repetition and correct grammar (articles, verb forms, pronouns). Use a clear topic sentence and provide two contrasting conditions with linking words like "for example" and "on the other hand." Be specific about what you do when reading in detail (annotate, summarise).

Exemplo: It depends on the material. For important texts like exam materials or assignments, I read in detail and make notes or summaries to ensure I understand key points. On the other hand, when I read for pleasure I usually skim to follow the plot and get the main idea quickly.

× Absolutely, reading is my favorite hobby because it helped me to relax and rewind after a long day work.

✓ Absolutely, reading is my favorite hobby because it helps me to relax and unwind after a long day at work.

The original mixes past tense 'helped' with present-tense statement 'is my favorite hobby.' Use present tense 'helps' to match. Also 'rewind' is unnatural in this context; use 'unwind.' Add the preposition 'at' before 'work.' Suggestion: keep tense consistent and use natural collocations ('unwind', 'at work').

× I enjoy fictions and self help books.

✓ I enjoy fiction and self-help books.

'Fiction' is an uncountable noun here, so use singular form; 'fictions' is incorrect. 'Self-help' is a compound adjective and needs a hyphen. Suggestion: use 'fiction' and hyphenate 'self-help.'

× Every time I read these books I found to learn new things and to expanding my knowledge.

✓ Every time I read these books I find I learn new things and expand my knowledge.

The sentence mixes past 'found' and incorrect 'to expanding.' Use present tense 'find' to match 'Every time I read.' Remove unnecessary 'to' before 'expanding' and use base form 'expand.' Also restructure to 'I find I learn' or 'I find new things to learn.' Suggestion: keep verbs in the same tense and use correct verb forms.

× Prefer radial screens because I felt it so convenient and I can store thousands of books when I was out.

✓ I prefer radial screens because I feel they are so convenient and I can store thousands of books when I am out.

Subject 'I' was missing at start. Tense inconsistency: 'felt' and 'was' are past; use present 'feel' and 'am' to state habitual preference. 'It' should agree with 'screens' (plural), so use 'they are.' Suggestion: include the subject, keep present tense for habits, and match pronoun number.

× I always have something to read.

✓ I always have something to read.

Sentence is grammatically correct; no change needed. Explanation: This is a correct present-tense habitual statement. (Included to show it's fine.)

× Furthermore, it's so portable than paper books and I can search easy to search unfamiliar words or the specific knowledge.

✓ Furthermore, it's much more portable than paper books, and I can easily search for unfamiliar words or specific information.

Comparative structure needs 'more' or 'much more' with 'portable' when comparing to paper books. 'So portable than' is incorrect. 'Easy to search' should be adverb 'easily,' and include preposition 'for' before the object. 'Specific knowledge' is better as 'specific information.' Suggestion: use correct comparative form and adverb/adposition forms.

× It depends on the purpose, if the material will be under exam or part of my schoolwork, I will study so hard and to read every single details.

✓ It depends on the purpose: if the material will be on an exam or part of my schoolwork, I will study hard and read every single detail.

Run-on and mixed structures: use a colon or conjunction to connect clauses. 'Under exam' is incorrect; use 'on an exam.' Remove 'to' before 'read' and use base verb 'read.' 'Every single details' has plural mismatch; use singular 'detail.' 'So hard' is informal; 'study hard' is correct. Suggestion: fix preposition, verb forms, and noun number.

× If I'm just waiting for the recreations like novel blog, I'll just read it quickly or just skim without scanning it on every details.

✓ If I'm just reading for recreation, like a novel or a blog, I'll read it quickly or just skim without focusing on every detail.

'Waiting for the recreations' is incorrect phrase; use 'reading for recreation.' 'Novel blog' is unclear; separate into 'novel or a blog.' 'Scanning it on every details' is incorrect: use 'focusing on every detail.' Remove extra 'just' for conciseness. Suggestion: use correct collocations and singular 'detail.'

× It depends, For important materials such as exams or schoolwork, I read in every detail that make notes to make sure that I don't miss anything important.

✓ It depends. For important materials such as exams or schoolwork, I read every detail and take notes to make sure that I don't miss anything important.

Capitalization after a comma is wrong; split into sentences. 'Read in every detail' should be 'read every detail.' 'That make notes' is wrong; subject-verb missing and tense: use 'and take notes.' Suggestion: use parallel verbs and correct clause linking.

× But if just reading for recreations I'll usually just skim quickly to skim for the whole stories and get the me idea.

✓ But if I'm just reading for recreation, I'll usually skim quickly to get the whole story and understand the main idea.

Missing subject 'I'm.' 'Recreations' should be singular 'recreation.' Redundant 'just skim quickly to skim' is repetitive; use single 'skim.' 'Whole stories' should be 'whole story' and 'get the me idea' is incorrect; use 'understand the main idea.' Suggestion: remove redundancy, fix pronouns, and use correct nouns.