Reading— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be clearer and more grammatical: give a concise topic sentence, then two specific supporting details linked logically. Correct verb forms, remove fragments, and avoid repetition. Use linking words like 'because' and 'also' to show reasons.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy reading, especially in my free time, because it helps me relax and learn new things. For example, I read non-fiction books to improve my general knowledge, and I also read English novels to improve my language skills. Because of this, I feel more confident at work.

Sugestão: Fix grammatical errors and use precise vocabulary. Start with a clear preference sentence, then give two concise reasons with linking words (e.g., 'because', 'however'). Avoid unnecessary repetition and incorrect words like 'consecrate' and 'iron strain'.

Exemplo: I generally prefer reading on paper because I can concentrate better and it causes less eye strain. However, I sometimes use my phone when travelling because it is more convenient and I can carry many books in one device.

Sugestão: Provide a clear topic sentence and correct verb forms. Use linking phrases like 'for example' and 'on the other hand' and give specific examples of materials for careful reading versus casual reading. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: I read carefully when I study or when I need to follow important instructions, such as academic papers or user manuals. For example, I slow down and take notes when reading research articles. On the other hand, I skim social media posts or light articles when I'm relaxing.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence and use linking words to contrast the two modes. Improve grammar ('It depends on the purpose') and provide one concrete example for each mode to show understanding.

Exemplo: It depends on the purpose. I scan documents when I need to find specific facts quickly, for example, checking a timetable or an email. However, I use detailed reading to fully understand complex topics, such as studying a textbook chapter or a technical article.

× Yes I enjoy reading is especially when I have free time.

✓ Yes, I enjoy reading, especially when I have free time.

The sentence has an extra verb 'is' and punctuation issues; this is a sentence structure error. Remove the unnecessary 'is' and add commas after 'Yes' and 'reading' to separate the introductory words and the adverbial phrase for clarity.

× It help me relax and also improve my knowledge and workability.

✓ It helps me relax and also improves my knowledge and workability.

The subject 'It' requires third person singular verbs. Use 'helps' and 'improves' to agree with the singular subject. Also keep parallel verb forms for clarity.

× This also can. Can help me to improve my English?

✓ This can also help me improve my English.

The original is split into fragments and contains an incorrect question mark. Combine into a single declarative sentence: 'This can also help me improve my English.' Remove the unnecessary 'to' before 'improve' because 'help' is followed by the base verb.

× I generally prefer reading us on paper because it helped me to consecrate better and reduce iron strain.

✓ I generally prefer reading on paper because it helps me concentrate better and reduces eye strain.

'us' is incorrect pronoun here; remove it. Tense should be present 'helps' to match habitual preference. 'consecrate' is wrong word — correct is 'concentrate'. 'iron strain' is a spelling/word choice error; correct phrase is 'eye strain'. Also ensure subject-verb agreement with 'reduces'.

× However, for convenience I sometimes read on my phone especially when I travelling because when I was traveling I do need to bring my book or any.

✓ However, for convenience I sometimes read on my phone, especially when I am traveling, because I do not need to bring my book or anything.

Multiple issues: missing auxiliary 'am' for present continuous 'I am traveling', incorrect negation 'do need' should be 'do not need', and 'any' should be 'anything'. Add commas to separate clauses and maintain correct verb forms for the present habit.

× I will carefully when I'm study or reading something important like instruction or academic material.

✓ I read carefully when I'm studying or reading something important, like instructions or academic material.

Original lacks a main verb and mixes tenses. Change 'I will carefully' to 'I read carefully' or 'I pay attention' and use 'studying' for present participle. Use plural 'instructions' for typical documents and add commas for clarity.

× On other hand, I don't read carefully when I'm just browsing social media or reading for entertainments.

✓ On the other hand, I don't read carefully when I'm just browsing social media or reading for entertainment.

Missing article 'the' before 'other hand'. 'entertainments' is incorrect; use uncountable noun 'entertainment'. This is a conjunction/phrase usage and noun form issue.

× Is depend on the purpose.

✓ It depends on the purpose.

Sentence is missing subject and wrong verb form. Add subject 'It' and use third person singular 'depends' to make a complete sentence.

× I prefer scanning when I need to find specific information quickly.

✓ I prefer scanning when I need to find specific information quickly.

Sentence is correct; no change needed. It uses pronouns and verbs appropriately. (Included to show no error of listed types.)

× But for understanding concept deeply I prefer detailed readings when for such as I want to search about something information I need to read into detail.

✓ But to understand concepts deeply, I prefer detailed reading; for example, when I want to research something, I need to read in detail.

Original is wordy and ungrammatical: incorrect noun forms ('concept' -> 'concepts', 'readings' -> 'reading'), awkward phrasing 'when for such as' and 'search about something information'. Rephrase to 'to understand concepts deeply' and 'when I want to research something, I need to read in detail' for clarity and correct grammar.