Reading— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 문장이 자연스럽고 명확하게 들리도록 발음과 문장구조를 교정하세요. 특히 불필요한 반복(예: "I I")을 없애고, 'expect' 대신 정확한 표현을 사용하세요. 시작 문장은 질문에 직접 답하는 주제문(예: "Yes, I enjoy reading.")으로 하고, 그 다음에 이유를 한두 문장으로 구체적으로 덧붙이세요. 예: 독서를 통해 얻는 감정이나 구체적 상황(휴식할 때, 잠자기 전 등)을 언급하면 더 설득력 있습니다.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy reading. I especially like reading essays because they help me relax and feel peaceful after a busy day.

Sugestão: 어휘 선택과 문장 흐름을 개선하세요. 'Paper' 대신 'paper'나 'on paper'처럼 정확한 전치사를 사용하고, 이유를 말할 때는 간결한 문장으로 연결어(so, because)를 사용하세요. 눈에 피로를 주는 이유를 명확히 설명하고 반복을 제거하세요.

Exemplo: I prefer reading on paper because it's more comfortable. Screens glare and strain my eyes, so I usually choose printed books.

Sugestão: 문법과 시제, 어순을 바로잡으세요. 질문에 바로 답하는 주제문을 사용하고, 'when'에 대한 구체적 상황(예: 연구할 때 vs 가벼운 기사 읽을 때)을 비교해서 설명하세요. 연결어(when, because, so)를 사용해 논리적 흐름을 만드세요.

Exemplo: I need to read carefully when I'm researching for a project because the information is complex. For casual reading, like news or short articles, I don't read as carefully.

Sugestão: 의도를 명확히 표현하세요. 'Scanning'과 'detailed reading'의 차이를 설명하고 언제 각각을 사용하는지 구체적인 예를 드세요. 문장은 간결하게 유지하고 중복을 제거하세요.

Exemplo: I prefer scanning when I'm looking for the best information quickly, for example when searching online. However, if I need to fully understand a topic, I read in detail.

× Yes, I like reading expect especially I I lead a essay because reading makes me peaceful and relaxed.

✓ Yes, I like reading, especially essays, because reading makes me feel peaceful and relaxed.

'expect' is incorrect here; likely meant 'especially'. 'I I lead a essay' has multiple errors: repeated 'I', wrong verb 'lead' instead of 'read', and article+noun form error 'a essay' should be 'an essay' or plural 'essays'. Also add 'feel' to describe the state 'peaceful and relaxed'. Suggested improvements: remove duplicated words, choose correct verbs (read), use correct article or plural form, and include 'feel' for states. Grammar problem type ID:13

× I prefer a paper because it it is more more convenient. Screen is a screen shining. Signing screen is shining so my eyes sick so I usually read the paper.

✓ I prefer paper because it is more convenient. Screens are bright and make my eyes sore, so I usually read on paper.

'a paper' is unnatural here; use 'paper' (reading on paper) or 'a paper' only for a specific document. Duplicated words 'it it' and 'more more' should be removed. 'Screen is a screen shining. Signing screen is shining' is ungrammatical; use 'Screens are bright' or 'The screen is bright'. 'my eyes sick' is incorrect collocation; use 'make my eyes sore' or 'hurt my eyes'. Also use 'read on paper' not 'read the paper' unless referring to a specific newspaper. Suggested improvements: remove duplicates, use correct collocations ('make my eyes sore'), and use correct preposition 'on' with 'paper'. Grammar problem type ID:22

× I working in a piece. Sometimes I research uh an information for my project. It is very difficult, so I carefully read a book or some paper.

✓ I am working on a piece. Sometimes I research information for my project. If it is very difficult, I read books or some papers carefully.

'I working' lacks auxiliary verb 'am' for present continuous. 'in a piece' is wrong preposition and article; use 'on a piece' or better 'on a piece of writing' or 'on a paper'. 'research an information' is wrong because 'information' is uncountable and does not take 'an'; use 'research information' or 'gather information'. 'I carefully read a book or some paper' word order and article/plural use are awkward; use 'I read books or some papers carefully' and place adverb 'carefully' after verb phrase or before verb appropriately. Suggested improvements: add correct auxiliary verbs, use correct prepositions, handle uncountable nouns, and adjust word order. Grammar problem type ID:26

× I prefer scanning because I want to searching best so I need I first I ask I I'm a scanning and in detail I lead carefully.

✓ I prefer scanning because I want to search for the best information, so first I scan, and for detailed reading I read carefully.

'want to searching' is incorrect; after 'want to' use base verb 'search'. 'searching best' needs 'search for the best information'. 'I need I first I ask I I'm a scanning' is fragmented and ungrammatical; replace with 'so first I scan'. 'lead carefully' uses wrong verb; use 'read carefully'. Suggested improvements: use base verb after 'want to', avoid fragments, and use correct verbs ('scan', 'read'). Grammar problem type ID:8}]} (Note: Grammar problem type IDs provided in explanations for reference.)