Reading— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cevap doğal ancak biraz dağınık ve dilbilgisi hataları içeriyor; daha akıcı ve kısa bir konu cümlesi kullanın, ardından 1-2 destekleyici cümle ekleyin. Örneğin zaman ifadelerini ve tekrar etme nedenini netleştirin (neden aynı kitabı tekrar okumayı sevdiğinizi belirtin) ve gereksiz tekrarları azaltın.

Exemplo: Yes, I love reading. I often reread my favourite books because I enjoy the comfort and the familiar characters, and sometimes I notice new details I missed before.

Sugestão: Cümleler tekrarlayıcı ve bazı ifadeler doğal değil. Tekrarları kaldırın, nedenleri açık ve kısa olarak bağlaçlarla verin (ör. because, so). "Healthy" yerine daha uygun kelimeler kullanın (easier on my eyes, more tactile).

Exemplo: I prefer reading on paper because it's easier on my eyes and I like the tactile feel of pages, so I find it more comfortable than reading on a screen.

Sugestão: Cevap karışık ve dil bilgisi hataları fazla; iki zıt durumu net ayırın (ciddi görev vs hobi) ve bağlaçlarla açıklayın. Gereksiz dolgu kelimelerini çıkarın ve örnekler verin (sınav, iş raporu).

Exemplo: I need to read very carefully when I'm preparing for an exam or doing work-related reading, because details matter. However, when I'm reading for pleasure I skim more and don't worry about every detail.

Sugestão: Cümle yapısı ve kelime seçimi hatalı; açık bir konu cümlesi kurun ve nedenlerini mantıklı bağlaçlarla verin. Dil öğrenimiyle ilgili spesifik örnekler ve doğru ifadeler kullanın (e.g. improve vocabulary, understand grammar).

Exemplo: I prefer detailed reading, especially when reading in a foreign language, because it helps me learn vocabulary and understand grammar. For example, I read English texts slowly and note down new words to review later.

× Yes, I like reading, actually reading to my favorite books like my hobby and this is never changed.

✓ Yes, I like reading. Actually, reading my favorite books is my hobby and this has never changed.

The sentence uses incorrect word forms and word order. 'reading to my favorite books' is wrong; use 'reading my favorite books'. 'this is never changed' should be 'this has never changed' to use the present perfect to indicate a state that began in the past and continues now. Suggestion: split into two clear sentences and use correct verb forms and word order.

× I like to read my favorite books again since when I was a child, so sometimes I can read some books 3 or 4 times.

✓ I have liked reading my favorite books since I was a child, so sometimes I read some books three or four times.

The combination 'since when I was a child' and simple present 'I like' is awkward. Use present perfect 'have liked' with 'since I was a child' to show continuity. Also use simple present 'read' for habitual action and write numbers as words in formal speech. Suggestion: use present perfect with 'since' and consistent tense for habitual actions.

× Now I always prefer to read on paper because this sounds more healthy and more useful.

✓ Now I always prefer to read on paper because it seems healthier and more useful.

'sounds more healthy' is incorrect collocation; use 'seems healthier'. 'Healthy' should be comparative 'healthier' and adjective choice matters. 'This' is unnatural; use 'it'. Suggestion: use 'seems' and comparative adjective 'healthier'.

× I always want to touch on a paper because sometimes I try to read on a screen, but this is not healthy for me and this is not necessary.

✓ I always want to touch paper because sometimes I try to read on a screen, but that is not healthy for me and not necessary.

Use 'touch paper' or 'touch a piece of paper' instead of 'touch on a paper'. 'Read on a screen' is correct but avoid repeating 'this'; use 'that' or 'it'. Suggestion: remove unnecessary prepositions and use appropriate demonstratives.

× I always prefer to read on paper.

✓ I always prefer reading on paper.

'Prefer to read' is acceptable but in context 'prefer reading' sounds more natural and keeps parallel structure. Not a major grammar error but pronoun/verb form consistency improved. Suggestion: use gerund after 'prefer' when stating general preference.

× If if I have a. Job or if I have an example if I have a exam in next day, probably I need to read more carefully than normally because this is my study, but I if I do this like hobby.

✓ If I have a job or if I have, for example, an exam the next day, I probably need to read more carefully than usual because it is for my studies; but if I do it as a hobby, I do not.

Many sentence structure issues: duplicated 'if', misplaced periods, 'a exam' should be 'an exam', 'in next day' should be 'the next day', and awkward clause 'this is my study' should be 'it is for my studies'. Also clarify contrasting idea. Suggestion: remove duplicates, correct articles and word order, and split into clearer parts.

× No, I always to prefer detailed reading, especially if I read other language than my first language.

✓ No, I always prefer detailed reading, especially if I am reading a language other than my first language.

'always to prefer' is incorrect; use 'always prefer'. 'Read other language' needs article and preposition: 'reading a language other than my first language' or 'reading in a language other than my first'. Suggestion: correct infinitive usage and use 'other than' structure.

× I always read to the Italian reading for example English.

✓ I always read in Italian and, for example, in English.

'read to the Italian reading' is ungrammatical. Use 'read in Italian' or 'read Italian texts'. Also parallel example 'for example English' should be 'for example, in English'. Suggestion: use 'in + language' for language reading.

× When I start to read English reading, I especially prefer to the talent reading, can learn new vocabulary from book.

✓ When I start reading in English, I especially prefer detailed reading; I can learn new vocabulary from books.

Problems: 'start to read English reading' is redundant—use 'start reading in English'. 'prefer to the talent reading' is nonsensical; likely 'prefer detailed reading'. 'can learn' needs subject 'I', and 'book' should be plural 'books' or 'a book'. Suggestion: remove redundancy, choose correct adjective 'detailed', include subject and pluralize nouns as needed.