Walking— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question (e.g., “No, I don’t walk a lot”), then give one or two specific reasons using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid irrelevant phrasing and keep to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: No, I don't walk a lot. I’m usually busy with work and studies, and there aren’t many safe walking areas near where I live, so I rarely go for walks these days.

Sugestão: Provide a clear topic sentence and add one specific supporting detail. Use correct tense consistency and linking words to make it coherent, and avoid repetition. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, definitely. When I was a child I often went out with my friends, and we spent most afternoons playing at the local playground because there were many slides and swings to enjoy.

Sugestão: Begin with a clear reason and use linking words to list benefits. Use accurate grammar (verbs and articles) and give one specific example to support your points. Keep it concise and avoid filler words like “I guess.”

Exemplo: People like walking in parks because it offers fresh air and a peaceful environment. For example, walking among trees improves mood and helps digestion, while also serving as a simple form of exercise.

Sugestão: Answer directly then give 1–2 specific reasons. Use correct relative clauses and clearer vocabulary (e.g., “I would like to walk in the mountains or a forest”). Avoid awkward phrases like “makes eyes really fresh.”

Exemplo: I would like to take a long walk in the mountains or in a dense forest, because the fresh air and natural scenery relax me and give me more energy.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer naming the place and one clear detail about the experience. Use past tense consistently and avoid hesitations. Keep it to 2–3 sentences and finish the thought clearly.

Exemplo: Recently I walked along the coast in Malta. The sea was peaceful and beautiful, and walking by the water helped me relax and enjoy the scenery.

× Did they know I didn't have a much time and energy to work a lot?

✓ Did they know I didn't have much time or energy to work a lot?

The original uses 'a much time' which is ungrammatical; 'much' before uncountable nouns should not take 'a'. Also 'and' between 'time and energy' is acceptable but 'or' is more natural when indicating either resource is lacking. Suggest using 'much time or energy'. Keep past tense 'didn't have' consistent.

× And then also in Philippine, I don't think they have a place we can walk or like take a walk.

✓ And also in the Philippines, I don't think there are places where we can take a walk.

Country name needs plural form 'the Philippines' (article + plural). 'Place we can walk' is awkward; use 'places where we can take a walk' or 'places to walk'. Use present tense 'don't think there are' to express a general statement. 'And then' is unnecessary; 'And also' or 'Also' suffices.

× So these days I didn't do exercise.

✓ So these days I don't exercise.

'These days' refers to the present period, so present tense should be used: 'don't exercise'. 'Didn’t do exercise' incorrectly mixes a past form with a present time expression.

× When I was younger, I often used to go outside to hang out with my friends.

✓ When I was younger, I often used to go out to hang out with my friends.

'Go outside' is not wrong but 'go out' is the more natural collocation for social activities. Tense 'used to' correctly indicates past habitual action; no change needed in tense.

× So actually the most, uh, interesting part of our life was going playground.

✓ So actually the most interesting part of our life was going to the playground.

Missing preposition 'to' and missing article 'the' before 'playground'. Also 'going playground' is ungrammatical; correct structure is 'going to the playground'.

× So there are a lot, there were a lot of playgrounds, so we often go there to.

✓ There used to be a lot of playgrounds, so we often went there.

Mixed tenses and redundant phrasing. Use past tense 'used to be' or 'were' and 'went' for past habitual action. Remove dangling 'to' at the end. Also avoid mixing 'there are' (present) with 'there were' (past).

× I suppose there are a lot of benefits when we usually taking a walk, we can digest or like we can get fresh air.

✓ I suppose there are a lot of benefits when we usually take a walk: we can digest food better and get fresh air.

After 'we' use base verb 'take' not 'taking' in this clause. 'Digest' should be 'digest food' or 'aid digestion'; clarified to 'digest food better'. Replace filler 'or like' with clear phrasing. Use a colon or conjunction to connect clauses properly.

× It makes our feeling better.

✓ It makes us feel better.

'Makes our feeling better' is awkward; idiomatic expression is 'makes us feel better'. Use verb 'feel' with object 'us' rather than noun 'feeling' here.

× At the same time we can do exercise.

✓ At the same time, we can get some exercise.

'Do exercise' is understandable but 'get some exercise' or 'exercise' is more natural. Add comma for clarity.

× So that's why usually people go outside to walk I guess.

✓ So that's why people usually go outside to walk, I guess.

Word order: put 'usually' after 'people' for natural adverb placement. Add comma before 'I guess'. Maintain present simple for general truth.

× If I can, I want to go somewhere which I can observe with some nature such as mountain or like very many forests because when we get breeze inhale fresh air, it makes eyes really fresh and energetic.

✓ If I could, I would like to go somewhere where I can enjoy nature, such as mountains or large forests, because when we feel the breeze and inhale fresh air, it makes us feel refreshed and energetic.

Conditional should be 'If I could, I would like' for hypothetical. 'Which I can observe with some nature' is ungrammatical; use 'where I can enjoy nature'. Use plural 'mountains' and 'large forests' rather than 'very many forests'. 'When we get breeze inhale fresh air' lacks articles and verbs; correct to 'feel the breeze and inhale fresh air'. 'It makes eyes really fresh' is wrong pronoun/object; use 'makes us feel refreshed'.

× Uh, yes, I have a very noticeable memory, which was when I was in Malta, there are very peaceful and beautiful stunning sea.

✓ I have a very vivid memory from when I was in Malta: the sea was very peaceful and stunningly beautiful.

Mixed clauses and tenses. 'Noticeable memory' is odd; 'vivid memory' is natural. Combine into one past-tense description: 'the sea was...'. Use correct adjective order 'stunningly beautiful' or 'stunning' + 'beautiful'"}]}