Walking— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No + frequency), correct grammar (use 'walk' as verb form and articles), avoid odd words ('Bob') and unnecessary filler. Keep within 3–4 sentences and give one specific detail (how often, duration, reason).

Exemplo: Yes, I walk to work almost every day because my office is close to my home. It takes me about 15 minutes to get there by foot, which I find convenient and healthy. Walking helps me save money on transport and gives me some exercise.

Sugestão: Use correct past tense consistently and avoid repetition. Begin with a direct past statement, then give a clear reason and a specific detail about where you walked. Replace unclear phrases ('home in a blaze') with precise descriptions. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I often walked outside when I was a child because I lived in a neighbourhood with many parks. I used to stroll around the local park with my family, which was a cheap and healthy way to spend time outdoors.

Sugestão: Answer directly and give two clear, specific reasons using linking words (because, and, also). Avoid filler and unclear phrases ('Safeway'). Use vocabulary relevant to parks (fresh air, scenery, quiet). Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: People like to walk in parks because the fresh air and greenery are relaxing and good for health. Also, parks provide a safe and pleasant environment for walking away from road traffic.

Sugestão: Use conditional structure correctly and be specific about the location and reasons. Start with a clear conditional sentence, then add details (distance, features) using linking words. Correct grammar (e.g., 'too far' → 'far' or 'quite far'). Limit to 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk to the large community park that is about a 30-minute walk from my home. It has long trails and a lake, which would be ideal for a peaceful, restorative walk that benefits both my mental and physical health.

Sugestão: Use simple past correctly and avoid hesitation. Start with a clear past-tense sentence saying when and where you walked, then give 1–2 specific details about the park (features, who you went with). Remove fillers and repeated words. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: I went for a walk recently in the community park near my home. It was about a 15-minute walk, and the park is beautiful with many trees and a small pond, which made the walk very relaxing.

× Honestly I work a lot.

✓ Honestly, I work a lot.

Add a comma after 'Honestly' to separate the introductory adverb from the main clause for correct punctuation; tense is correct.

× I go to my work by walk because it's a near my home.

✓ I walk to work because it's near my home.

Use 'walk' as the verb (not 'by walk'), omit 'my' before 'work' (common collocation is 'go to work' or 'walk to work'), and use 'near my home' without 'a'. This fixes preposition and article misuse.

× It takes me 15 minutes to reach at work.

✓ It takes me 15 minutes to get to work.

Do not use 'reach at'; use 'get to' or 'reach' without 'at'. This corrects the preposition and verb collocation.

× I think Bob is a healthy option and.

✓ I think walking is a healthy option.

Original mixes 'Bob' and 'option' — likely intended 'walking'. Remove the trailing 'and' and use a clear subject 'walking' with complement 'a healthy option'.

× Yes, I often go outside to have a walk when I was uh, was a child because I lived lived in the home in a blaze and there was a.

✓ Yes, I often went outside for a walk when I was a child because I lived in a house in a village.

Mix of present and past tense: the clause 'when I was a child' requires past tense 'went'. Also use 'for a walk' (idiomatic) and correct repeated word 'lived lived', use 'house' not 'home in a blaze' and 'village' likely intended. Fixes tense and word choice.

× Walking is a healthier and cheapest option.

✓ Walking is a healthier and cheaper option.

Do not mix comparative forms incorrectly. Use 'healthier' and 'cheaper' (comparative for both) or use 'the healthiest and cheapest' if comparing among many; keep parallel adjective forms.

× People like to walk in the parks because, umm, it's a good, it is good for health and it's also a Safeway to Safeway for walking.

✓ People like to walk in parks because it is good for their health and it is a safe way to walk.

Omit 'the' before plural 'parks' when speaking generally. Use 'good for their health' and 'a safe way' (not 'Safeway'). Correct word order 'safe way to walk' and capitalization.

× If I got a chance in my life for a long walk, I would like to go a community park which is located too far from my home.

✓ If I had the chance, I would like to go to a community park that is located far from my home.

Use second conditional 'If I had the chance' (not 'got a chance in my life'), use 'go to a park', use 'that' for defining relative clause, and 'far from my home' instead of 'too far' unless you mean 'excessively far'.

× Uh, it will be uh 30 minutes walk from my home.

✓ It would be a 30-minute walk from my home.

In the conditional sentence use 'would be' not simple future 'will be', and use the compound adjective '30-minute' with singular 'walk'.

× I believe walk is a good for mental and physical health.

✓ I believe walking is good for mental and physical health.

Use gerund 'walking' as subject, remove extra article 'a', and place 'good for' before the objects 'mental and physical health'.

× I bent a walk in, uh, in the community park, uh, which is located, uh, nearby my home.

✓ I went for a walk in the community park near my home.

Use past tense 'went' (not 'bent'), 'go for a walk' is idiomatic, and 'near my home' is correct instead of 'nearby my home'.

× It was about 15 minute walk from my home and the the park is very beautiful and there is lot of uh.

✓ It was about a 15-minute walk from my home, and the park is very beautiful and there are a lot of trees.

Use 'a 15-minute walk' (singular with hyphenated adjective), fix duplicate 'the', use 'there are' with plural 'a lot of trees' rather than 'there is lot of'. Added plausible noun 'trees' to complete sentence.