Walking— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Correct the frequent errors (work→walk), make a clear topic sentence, reduce repetition and keep within 3–4 concise sentences. Use linking words and give a specific example (how often, distance) to make it natural and informative.

Exemplo: No, I don't walk very often because I usually ride my bike for my daily commute. It is faster and more convenient, especially for short trips of about 1–2 kilometres. For example, I cycle to work three times a week instead of walking.

Sugestão: Use correct grammar (were→was, tense consistency), make a clear topic sentence, and add one specific supporting detail with a linking word. Avoid hesitations and unclear words (palace→places).

Exemplo: Yes, I walked a lot as a child because we didn't have a bicycle. As a result, I walked to school and to nearby shops almost every day, which helped me get used to being outside.

Sugestão: Good idea but make it more concise and correct grammar (people like walk→like to walk; recharge ourselves). Add one specific reason and a linking word to support your point.

Exemplo: People like to walk in parks because the natural surroundings help refresh the mind and reduce stress. For example, walking among trees and flowers can improve mood and provide a pleasant break from city noise.

Sugestão: Start with a clear direct answer naming a place, use conditional structure correctly, and give a specific reason. Avoid vague phrasing and repetition.

Exemplo: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk along a coastal trail. I would choose this because it is peaceful and different from my busy daily routine, and I could enjoy fresh sea air and scenic views.

Sugestão: Use past tense correctly (I went), correct word choices (work→walk; they it's have→it has), and give a specific time and detail about the place to make the answer natural and informative.

Exemplo: I went for a walk recently by the lake near my home. It was a quiet evening, and the area had a lovely environment with trees and a walking path, which made it very relaxing.

× No, I don't work a lot because I usually ride a bike.

✓ No, I don't walk a lot because I usually ride a bike.

The student used 'work' instead of 'walk', a word choice error rather than a tense error. Change to 'walk' to match the examiner's question about walking; present simple 'I don't walk' correctly expresses habitual action.

× I am running quick and near my home.

✓ I run quickly and near my home.

The student used progressive form 'am running' incorrectly for a habitual or general statement. Use simple present 'I run'. Also 'quick' is an adjective; the adverb 'quickly' is required to modify the verb. Suggestion: use 'I run quickly near my home' or better 'I run quickly close to my home'.

× Yes, when I were a child, at this time I don't have any bike or cycle.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, at that time I didn't have a bike or a cycle.

Subject-verb agreement in past tense: use 'was' with singular 'I' not 'were'. Also tense consistency: since describing the past, use past simple 'didn't have' rather than present 'don't have'. Include article 'a' before singular countable nouns 'bike' and 'cycle'.

× That's why when I go to school and umm other palace.

✓ That's why when I went to school and other places,

Context is past; use past tense 'went' instead of present 'go'. 'Palace' is incorrect word choice; likely 'places'. Also add plural 'places' for general locations. Ensure sentence completion: add the rest of the clause (e.g., 'I had to walk').

× I need to walk or go outside.

✓ I had to walk or go on foot.

In the past context, change present 'need' to past 'had to'. 'Go outside' is vague; 'go on foot' or 'walk' fits better. Improve clarity by matching tense and meaning.

× People like walk in parks because parks have more natural environment which refresh our mind and recharge ourself.

✓ People like to walk in parks because parks have a more natural environment, which refreshes our minds and recharges us.

Missing 'to' after 'like' for infinitive 'to walk'. Add article 'a' before 'more natural environment'. Relative clause requires comma. Verb agreement: 'refreshes' for singular noun 'environment'. Pronoun usage: 'ourselves' or 'us'—use 'us' here. 'Recharge ourselves' is reflexive but 'recharges us' is simpler and correct.

× That's why people like to walk in parks.

✓ That's why people like to walk in parks.

This sentence is grammatically correct. It uses present simple to state a general truth and matches context, so no change needed.

× Yes, if I get a chance to take a long walk, I definitely I go because most of the time we are busy in our daily task or we get some time to work really.

✓ If I had the chance to take a long walk, I would definitely go because most of the time we are busy with our daily tasks and rarely get time to do so.

Conditional structure is incorrect: for a hypothetical situation use second conditional 'If I had..., I would...'. Remove duplicate 'I'. Use 'busy with' plus plural 'tasks'. 'We get some time to work really' is unclear; 'rarely get time to do so' expresses the intended meaning clearly.

× I go for a work lately in front of our lake and they it's have a amazing environment.

✓ I went for a walk recently in front of our lake; it has an amazing environment.

Use past simple 'went' to answer 'Where did you go for a walk lately?'. 'For a walk' not 'for a work'. 'Lately' pairs with present perfect but in spoken answers past simple 'recently' is natural. 'They it's have a amazing environment' contains multiple errors: replace with 'it has an amazing environment'. Use 'an' before vowel sound 'amazing'.