Food— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct and clear: start with a topic sentence naming one or two favourite foods, then give one or two specific reasons. Avoid filler words (uh) and grammatical errors (agreement, tense). Use linking words like 'because' or 'and' to connect ideas. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: My favourite foods are traditional dishes from my hometown and the meals my mother cooks. I like them because they taste comforting and remind me of family gatherings, which makes me feel warm and happy.

Sugestão: Use correct grammar (past tense and subject-verb agreement) and be specific. Begin with a clear topic sentence about childhood preferences, then add one or two supporting details about occasions (e.g., birthdays) using linking words like 'for example' or 'also'. Avoid repetition.

Exemplo: When I was young, I loved sweet foods such as candies, chocolates and ice cream. For example, my parents always gave me boxes of chocolates as birthday gifts, so sweets were a big part of my childhood treats.

Sugestão: Answer the question directly and give concrete examples of seasonal changes (e.g., festivals, summer versus winter). Replace vague phrases with specific foods and situations, and use linking words like 'for instance' or 'in summer'. Avoid fillers and fragmented sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I do. For instance, in summer I eat more fresh fruits and salads, while in winter I prefer hot soups and stews. I also try new recipes during holidays, such as special festival dishes with seasonal ingredients.

Sugestão: Give a clear yes/no response and then explain briefly with specific examples and reasons. Correct grammar and avoid unclear words. Use linking words like 'however' or 'but' to show contrast if needed. Keep it concise (2–3 sentences).

Exemplo: Not really — I still enjoy many of the same foods I liked as a child, especially sweets and comfort dishes. However, I sometimes try healthier options now, such as fruit or yogurt, when I am out with friends.

× I would like to say a lot traditional cuisine like fall by me and some dishes that my mom usually cook, uh, because it make me uh, feel warm and feel happy when eating it.

✓ I would like to say a lot of traditional cuisine that I feel close to and some dishes that my mom usually cooks, because they make me feel warm and happy when I eat them.

Errors: missing 'of' after 'a lot' (quantifier), incorrect word choice 'fall by me' and awkward phrasing, verb agreement 'cook' should be 'cooks' for third person singular, 'it make' should be 'they make' to agree with plural subject, and awkward pronoun reference. According to the list, this involves present participle/verb form issues and subject-verb agreement. Suggestion: use 'a lot of', replace unclear phrase with 'that I feel close to', use 'cooks' for 'my mom', make pronouns agree ('they' for plural 'cuisine and dishes'), and use 'eat them' rather than 'eating it' for clarity.

× When I were young I loved sweet fish like candies, chocolates and ice cream and when when my birthday come in I also have a lot of sweet like case chocolate data and my parents would give me as a gift when I get a high school and.

✓ When I was young I loved sweet things like candies, chocolates and ice cream, and when my birthday came I also had a lot of sweets such as chocolate cakes that my parents would give me as gifts when I finished high school.

Errors: 'were' should be 'was' for singular past (past tense issue), 'sweet fish' is wrong word choice (should be 'sweet things'), 'come in' should be 'came', present 'have' should be past 'had', 'case chocolate data' is unintelligible and corrected to 'chocolate cakes', and the sentence end 'when I get a high school and' is unclear; corrected to 'when I finished high school'. Suggestion: use simple past consistently for past events and choose correct vocabulary ('things', 'cakes'), and keep chronological order.

× Definitely yes. I also, uh, make new food in my life, uh, because I like to uh. Create a dynamic and creative and expert in a lot of kind food.

✓ Definitely yes. I also try new foods in my life because I like to be creative and experiment with many kinds of food.

Errors: 'make new food' is incorrect—use 'try new foods' (verb choice), sentence fragments and incorrect infinitive usage 'like to uh. Create' should be 'like to be creative' or 'like to create', and 'expert in a lot of kind food' is wrong; corrected to 'experiment with many kinds of food'. This fits present participle/verb form and sentence structure issues. Suggestion: use 'try' for tasting, 'experiment with' for testing recipes, and match nouns/plurals ('foods', 'kinds of food').

× Not really because when I was OK I was Grady food and an umbrella.

✓ Not really, because when I was younger I liked greasy food and snacks.

Errors: unclear vocabulary 'OK', 'Grady food' and 'an umbrella' are incorrect; likely intended past preferences. This is a sentence structure and word choice problem linked to subject-verb agreement and tense consistency. Suggestion: clarify meaning: use 'when I was younger' for time, 'liked' for past preference, and use correct food terms such as 'greasy food' and 'snacks'.

× When I roll up like uh, I also have sweetie. It's not sometimes it's not really MMM sometimes I hang out and I will eat sweaty.

✓ When I grow up, I also like sweets. Not always, but sometimes when I hang out I will eat sweet things.

Errors: 'When I roll up' should be 'When I grow up' (incorrect verb form/phrase), 'have sweetie' should be 'like sweets' or 'eat sweets', 'It's not sometimes it's not really MMM' is unclear filler, and 'eat sweaty' is wrong word choice—correct to 'eat sweet things'. This involves incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs and sentence structure. Suggestion: use correct future/adult phrase 'grow up', use 'sweets' for candies/desserts, and avoid filler sounds; keep sentences concise and grammatical.