Food— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make your answer grammatically correct, concise and more specific. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two supporting details using linking words. Correct verb forms and noun agreements (e.g., "it has" not "it have"). Avoid filler words like "umm."

Exemplo: My favourite food is Tom Yum Goong. I like it because it has a rich, spicy broth with fresh seafood, and I often eat it with fried egg and rice. Furthermore, the combination of sour and spicy flavours reminds me of home.

Sugestão: Organise your response: state the food you liked clearly, then give a specific reason using linking words. Use correct names and avoid long hesitations. Keep to 1–3 sentences and correct vocabulary ("mookata" or "mu kratha" and avoid unclear phrases).

Exemplo: When I was young, I really liked mookata (Thai barbecue). I liked it because families could cook together and share many kinds of meat and vegetables, although it has become more expensive in recent years.

Sugestão: Answer the question directly about seasonal variation; if you actually talk about mood, clarify that and connect it logically. Use correct grammar ("it depends on my mood") and give specific examples of seasonal foods or emotional eating with linking words.

Exemplo: Yes, I do. In winter I prefer hot, comforting soups, whereas in summer I eat lighter dishes like salads. However, my choices also depend on my mood: when I feel down I often choose comforting foods such as sushi or Korean fried chicken.

Sugestão: Be concise and clear: give a simple topic sentence saying yes or no, then explain with specific examples and a reason. Correct tense and vocabulary (e.g., "I couldn't eat spicy food" not "I cannot"). Avoid repetition.

Exemplo: Yes, it has changed. As a child I couldn't eat spicy food, but now I enjoy many spicy dishes, such as Korean stews and spicy curries, because I built up a tolerance over time.

× I like to eat Tom Yum goong because it have the seafood in their soup and I can eat with umm egg fried with the rice.

✓ I like to eat Tom Yum goong because it has seafood in its soup and I can eat it with fried egg and rice.

Errors: subject 'it' (Tom Yum goong) requires third-person singular verb 'has' not 'have'; 'their' is a plural possessive but 'it' is singular so use 'its'; 'egg fried with the rice' is awkward word order and article use. Suggestion: Use 'has' for third-person singular, 'its' for singular possessive, and rephrase to 'fried egg and rice' or 'with a fried egg and rice' for natural English.

× When I was young, I think actually I like mookata or in Tai core mookata is a build is a giant pork.

✓ When I was young, I think I liked mookata, which in Thai culture is a kind of barbecue with pork.

Errors: Talking about the past requires past tense 'liked' not present 'like'; 'in Tai core' is incorrect phrase and should be 'in Thai culture'; 'is a build is a giant pork' is ungrammatical and unclear. Suggestion: Use past tense for past preferences and replace unclear description with a concise explanation such as 'a kind of barbecue with pork'.

× But that the lesson why I like to eat mugacha because umm as the past umm 20 years, the Mughata is so expensive and.

✓ But the reason I stopped eating mookata is that in the past 20 years it has become very expensive.

Errors: Sentence fragments and redundancy ('that the lesson why'); tense and article misuse. Suggestion: Use a clear cause-effect structure: 'the reason I stopped... is that...' Use present perfect 'has become' to indicate change over a period, and avoid trailing conjunctions.

× MMM Oh yes, because it's depend on my emotion or my mental.

✓ Oh yes, because it depends on my mood or mental state.

Errors: Verb agreement: 'it depends' not 'it depend'; 'emotion or my mental' is awkward: use 'mood' or 'mental state'. Suggestion: Use third-person singular verb with 'it' and choose the correct noun 'mood' for feelings.

× When I had bad mood, I would like to eat the delicious food like sushi or the Korea food and.

✓ When I am in a bad mood, I like to eat delicious food like sushi or Korean food.

Errors: Tense mismatch: 'When I had bad mood' mixes past with habitual action; use present simple for habitual actions 'When I am in a bad mood'; 'would like to' is polite desire but here simple 'like to' is better; 'the Korea food' should be 'Korean food'. Suggestion: Use consistent tense for habitual statements and correct adjective form 'Korean'.

× Yes, when I was shy I cannot eat spicy food but now I try a lot of foods or different foods like up sometime and spicy umm Korean food and I can eat spicy.

✓ Yes, when I was young I could not eat spicy food, but now I try many different foods, such as spicy Korean food, and I can eat spicier food than when I was young.

Errors: 'shy' is likely incorrect for 'young'; modal/past ability: use 'could not' not 'cannot' for past; 'try a lot of foods or different foods' is repetitive; 'spicer' is misspelling — should be 'spicier'; comparative phrase 'more than I was young' incorrect: use 'than when I was young'. Suggestion: Use 'could' for past ability, 'many different foods' for variety, 'spicier' for comparative, and correct comparative clause 'than when I was young'.