Food— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Говорите более связно и уверенно: убирайте паузы с «uh/umm», используйте связные фразы и более точную лексику. Начните с темы, затем добавьте 1–2 конкретных примера и причину. Также исправьте грамматику (например, «My favourite foods are…»).

Exemplo: My favourite foods are fast-food items such as fried chicken, pizza and sushi. I like them because they are flavorful and convenient, and I often enjoy pizza with friends at the weekend.

Sugestão: Исправьте грамматику времени и уточняйте слова: используйте прошедшее время и точные названия (например, ‘pizza’ not ‘pieces’). Добавьте связку и подробность, объясняя, почему родители покупали его и как часто вы его ели.

Exemplo: When I was young, I liked pizza and crispy fried chicken. My parents often bought them as a treat, so I associated those foods with special family meals.

Sugestão: Улучшите ясность и грамматику: объясняйте сезонность более корректно, избегайте бессмысленных фраз. Используйте связующие слова (for example, because, in winter) и приведите 1–2 примера сезонных блюд с причинами.

Exemplo: Yes. For example, we eat a lot of watermelon in summer because it is refreshing and widely available, while in winter we prefer warm soups and stews to stay warm.

Sugestão: Проясните мысль и исправьте структуру: используйте корректное сравнение прошлого и настоящего (My favourite food has changed a little). Не повторяйте слова бессмысленно; объясните конкретно, как и почему вкус изменился.

Exemplo: Yes, my tastes have changed a little. When I was a child my favourite food was pizza, but now I prefer a wider range of dishes, including sushi and grilled chicken, because I enjoy trying different flavours.

× My favorite food it's too much uh, I love fast food.

✓ My favorite food is hard to choose; I love fast food.

The original sentence omits the article/structure and uses 'it's too much' incorrectly. Use a clear subject-verb structure 'My favorite food is...' or 'My favorite foods are...'. Also 'too much' is inappropriate here. Suggest using 'is hard to choose' or 'I have many favorites'.

× Umm, for example, chicken, pizzas, sushi and donut.

✓ For example, chicken, pizza, sushi, and donuts.

Mixes singular and plural forms inconsistently. Use consistent noun forms in a list: either all singular uncountable (chicken, pizza, sushi, donut) or plural where appropriate (chickens is unusual). 'Pizza' can be uncountable when listing types; 'donuts' should be plural.

× I like this food because uh, they are very tasty and I think uh, everyone like this fast food.

✓ I like this food because it is very tasty, and I think everyone likes this fast food.

Pronoun agreement error: 'this food' is singular, so use 'it' and 'is'. Also subject-verb agreement: 'everyone' is singular and takes 'likes'. Maintain consistent singular pronouns and verb forms.

× I like pieces and crispy chicken when I was young because my parents buy it for me and it's very crispy and delicious.

✓ I liked fries and crispy chicken when I was young because my parents bought them for me, and they were very crispy and delicious.

Tense consistency: question asks about past, so use past tense 'liked' and 'bought'. 'Pieces' is incorrect—likely 'fries' or 'pieces of pizza'; 'it' should match plural 'them' for multiple items. Adjectives describing past should be in past tense context ('were').

× Yes, For example, we eat watermelon in summer because in winter watermelon is don't don't know.

✓ Yes. For example, we eat watermelon in summer because in winter watermelons are not available.

Incorrect verb phrase and article usage. 'Watermelon is don't don't know' is ungrammatical. Use plural 'watermelons' or uncountable 'watermelon' and correct negative: 'are not available' or 'is not in season'. Also capitalize and punctuation adjusted.

× Yes, but I think is changed little bit because my favorite food when I was a child it's pizza and now it's two pizza.

✓ Yes, but I think it has changed a little bit because my favorite food when I was a child was pizza, and now it is different kinds of pizza.

Tense and structure errors: 'is changed' is incorrect; use present perfect 'has changed' to describe change over time. Maintain past tense 'was' for childhood. 'It's two pizza' is unclear—likely 'two pizzas' or 'different kinds of pizza'. Use 'a little bit' for correct phrasing.