Food— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, ngắn gọn và tự nhiên hơn; sửa lỗi ngữ pháp, tránh lặp từ và thêm một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ loại salad, hương vị yêu thích) để làm câu trả lời thuyết phục hơn.

Exemplo: My favourite food is salad because I enjoy fresh vegetables and light dressings. For example, I often choose a Greek salad with tomatoes, cucumbers and feta cheese because it tastes refreshing and healthy.

Sugestão: Cần dùng thì quá khứ đúng (liked), sửa cấu trúc để diễn đạt ý rõ: tránh cụm từ không phù hợp (‘help me funny’), đưa lý do cụ thể hơn về cảm xúc hoặc thói quen, tối đa 3-4 câu.

Exemplo: When I was young, I liked eating fast food because it was convenient and tasted exciting. After school I often had fries or burgers with my friends, which helped me relax and feel happy.

Sugestão: Cần loại bỏ từ sai (‘Death’) và trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi. Nên nêu ví dụ mùa cụ thể (mùa hè/mùa đông), dùng liên từ để nối ý và cung cấp các chi tiết cụ thể về loại món ăn từng mùa.

Exemplo: Yes, I eat different foods at different times of the year. For example, in summer I prefer light dishes like salads and cold noodles, while in winter I enjoy warm soups and stews because they are comforting.

Sugestão: Cần diễn đạt rõ ràng sự thay đổi sở thích, sửa ngữ pháp và danh sách đồ ăn cho tự nhiên (ví dụ candy, squid, chocolate). Thêm nguyên nhân ngắn gọn vì sao thay đổi để làm câu trả lời đầy đủ hơn.

Exemplo: Yes, my favourite food has changed since childhood. I used to love sweets and snacks like candy and chocolate, but now I prefer healthier options such as salads because I care more about my health.

× My favorite food is salad because I really like vegetables and that is reasons why I like its salad.

✓ My favorite food is salad because I really like vegetables, and that is the reason why I like salad.

Pronoun and article errors: 'that is reasons' should be 'that is the reason' (singular) and 'its salad' is incorrect possessive use; simply 'salad' is correct. Also add a comma before coordinating conjunction for clarity.

× When I was young, I like eating fast foods because it can help me funny and reduce my stresses after school.

✓ When I was young, I liked eating fast food because it made me feel better and reduced my stress after school.

Tense and verb choice errors: The time frame 'When I was young' requires past tense 'liked'. 'Fast foods' -> uncountable 'fast food'. 'It can help me funny' is incorrect; use 'made me feel better'. 'Reduce my stresses' -> 'reduced my stress' (uncountable).

× Death. I usually eat different foods at different times of the year because I really like eating and when I eating I can feel happy. For example, after a long day I can eat too.

✓ Yes. I usually eat different foods at different times of the year because I really like eating, and when I eat I feel happy. For example, I sometimes eat more after a long day.

'Death.' is incorrect and likely 'Yes.' needed. 'When I eating' lacks correct verb form; use 'when I eat'. 'I can feel happy' -> 'I feel happy' is more natural. 'I can eat too' vague; change to 'I sometimes eat more after a long day.'

× Yes, at a time I like it squeezed like candy, squid or chocolate, but now I prefer eating healthy food like salad.

✓ Yes, I used to like sweet things like candy, chocolate, or squid prepared in that way, but now I prefer eating healthy food like salad.

Tense and word choice: 'At a time I like it squeezed' is ungrammatical; use 'I used to like' for past habits. 'Squeezed like candy, squid or chocolate' unclear—'sweet things like candy' is natural; mention squid prepared that way if intended. Also reorder items for clarity.