Building— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific detail. Correct singular/plural and article errors (e.g., "the first floor", "most of the buildings"). Use a linking phrase if giving extra information.

Exemplo: Yes, there are many tall buildings near my home; in fact, my apartment is in one of them on the first floor. Most of these buildings are new, so you don’t see many older buildings in the area.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer then provide a brief reason and a specific example. Fix grammar and word choice ("sceneries" -> "scenic views", "that has" is incomplete). Limit to 2–3 supporting details and use a linking word like "but" or "however".

Exemplo: Not really — I prefer photographing nature. For example, I often take pictures of landscapes, flowers and trees, although I sometimes photograph interesting old buildings when I travel.

Sugestão: This answer is clear and relevant. Improve by making the opening more natural and adding one specific reason or detail about the history. Avoid repeating the building name unnecessarily.

Exemplo: Yes — I would like to visit Big Ben in London because it has a rich history and iconic architecture. I’m especially interested in seeing the clock tower up close and learning about its role in British history.

Sugestão: Be more precise and correct vocabulary ("electric outbreak" -> "power outage", "walk in the stairs" -> "use the stairs"). Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons. Use linking words like "because" and "for example."

Exemplo: No, I wouldn’t like to live in a tall building because I worry about power outages. For example, if the elevator stops working I would have to use the stairs, which would be difficult if I lived on a very high floor.

× Most of the building are new and you cannot see old building near us.

✓ Most of the buildings are new and you cannot see old buildings near us.

The noun 'building' should be plural when referring to many items. Use 'buildings' after 'Most of the' and also 'old buildings' to match plurality. To improve, ensure noun number matches quantifiers and verbs: 'Most of the' + plural noun.

× I live in the first floor.

✓ I live on the first floor.

Use the preposition 'on' with floor levels in a building, not 'in'. Also 'the' before 'first floor' is correct. Improve by remembering common collocations: 'on the first floor' and 'in an apartment'.

× I am not a fan of photographing buildings but I do love taking pictures of nature, for example landscapes, sceneries, flowers, trees and also old buildings that has.

✓ I am not a fan of photographing buildings, but I do love taking pictures of nature, for example landscapes, scenery, flowers, trees and also old buildings that have character.

Grammatical issues: a comma is needed before 'but' for clarity. 'Sceneries' is uncountable; use 'scenery'. The clause 'old buildings that has' uses singular verb 'has' with plural 'buildings' and is incomplete; replace with a descriptive phrase like 'that have character' or 'that are interesting.' Use 'have' with plural subjects. Improve by matching verb forms to noun plurality and using correct uncountable nouns.

× The building that I would like to visit in the future is the Big Ben in London.

✓ The building that I would like to visit in the future is Big Ben in London.

Do not use the definite article 'the' before proper names like 'Big Ben.' 'Big Ben' is a specific name and stands alone. Improve by omitting 'the' when referring to named landmarks unless the name normally takes 'the' (for example, 'the Eiffel Tower').

× I find it really interesting because it has a lot of history and I'm excited to know more about Big Ben.

✓ I find it really interesting because it has a lot of history and I'm excited to learn more about Big Ben.

'To know more about' is not wrong but 'to learn more about' is a more natural collocation when referring to gaining information. The tense is present and consistent; change the verb for natural usage.

× I don't want to live in a tall building because I'm always thinking about the electricity.

✓ I don't want to live in a tall building because I'm always worried about the electricity.

'Thinking about the electricity' is grammatically possible but unnatural. Use 'worried about' to express concern. Modal/modal-related phrasing is fine; this improves naturalness and clarity.

× What if there's a electric outbreak?

✓ What if there's an electrical outage?

Use 'an' before a vowel sound: 'an electric' would be incorrect here. More importantly, the correct term is 'electrical outage' or 'power outage,' not 'electric outbreak.' 'There's' (there is) is fine with the contraction but must be followed by 'an.' Improve by using the correct collocation 'power outage' or 'electrical outage' and matching the article 'an.'

× I don't want to walk in the stairs, especially if I'm living up top.

✓ I don't want to walk on the stairs, especially if I'm living up top.

Use the preposition 'on' with 'the stairs,' not 'in.' Also consider 'if I live up top' instead of 'if I'm living up top' for a general preference; both are grammatically possible, but simple present 'live' fits habitual/wished situations better. Improve by using correct prepositions with 'stairs' and matching tense for general statements.