Building— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct common pronunciation and grammar errors (e.g., 'tall building(s)', 'there are a lot of', avoid filler words). Use one or two specific supporting details and linking words to improve coherence.

Exemplo: Yes. There are many tall buildings near my home because I live in a big city. For example, our apartment block is one of the taller buildings in the area, and most nearby commercial centres are high-rise, so the skyline looks very modern.

Sugestão: Answer directly and avoid repetition. Use a clear topic sentence and one or two specific details about when and why you take photos. Use linking words (e.g., 'because', 'for example') and finish the sentence fully (mention where you upload if relevant).

Exemplo: Yes, I often take photos of buildings in my free time because I enjoy architecture. For example, I usually take pictures from my balcony since it offers a great view, and I sometimes upload the best shots to my social media.

Sugestão: Provide a clear topic sentence naming the building or type, then give specific reasons or details (history, architecture, location). Use linking words like 'because' or 'for example' and avoid repeated hesitations.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to visit the Ahsan Manzil in Dhaka because it is an important historical palace with beautiful architecture. I am interested in its history and I hope to go there one day to see its exhibits and learn more about the past.

Sugestão: Give a clear present-tense opinion and specific reasons. Correct grammar (e.g., 'Yes, I want to live in a tall building' not 'Yay I wanted'), avoid unclear phrases, and include one or two concrete reasons (views, facilities, convenience). Keep it concise and coherent.

Exemplo: Yes, I want to live in a tall building because it offers great views and modern facilities. For instance, high-rise apartments here often have security, a gym and a rooftop terrace, which is why my family and I hope to live in one someday.

× Yes, there are lots of tail building near my home because, uh, actually I live in a city.

✓ Yes, there are lots of tall buildings near my home because, actually I live in a city.

The student used singular 'building' after 'lots of', which requires a plural noun. Also 'tail' is a spelling error; it should be 'tall'. Suggestion: use 'lots of' + plural noun and check spelling (tall buildings).

× So, you know, in our country is a lots of almost every city is had has, uh, tall building.

✓ So, you know, in our country, almost every city has tall buildings.

Multiple errors: word order and verb form. 'There is a lots of' is incorrect; 'lots of' needs a plural noun and the subject-verb should be 'every city has'. Remove unnecessary words and use simple present 'has' for habitual fact. Suggestion: use 'almost every city has' + plural noun.

× Uh, actually our building is a tail building in our city.

✓ Actually, our building is a tall building in our city.

Used 'tail' instead of 'tall' (spelling). The structure 'our building is a tall building' is acceptable but repetitive; could say 'Our building is one of the tall buildings in the city.' Suggestion: correct spelling and consider reducing repetition.

× Yes, when I when I spend the free time, I take photos of my buildings, especially our top on the building, sometimes uh, in our balconies and uh, balconies is the best view, view for taking photos and uploading my.

✓ Yes, when I have free time, I take photos of buildings, especially the top of our building; sometimes I take photos from our balcony because the balcony has the best view for taking and uploading photos.

Several tense and structure errors: use 'have free time' (present simple), 'take photos of buildings' (no possessive 'my buildings' unless intended), 'top on the building' should be 'top of the building', 'in our balconies' -> 'from our balcony', and 'balconies is' should be 'balcony has' (subject-verb agreement). Also finish 'uploading my' to 'uploading photos'. Suggestion: simplify sentences, use correct prepositions ('from', 'of'), and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× I would like to visit an historical building.

✓ I would like to visit a historic building.

Both 'a historic' and 'an historic' are used in English; modern usage prefers 'a historic'. Additionally, 'an historical' is not incorrect in some dialects, but 'a historic' is clearer. Suggestion: use 'a historic building'.

× It is, uh, it is from Dhaka and it is very old building in our country.

✓ It is in Dhaka and it is a very old building in our country.

Use 'in Dhaka' for location (preposition), and include the indefinite article 'a' before 'very old building'. Suggestion: use correct prepositions and articles.

× So I will, I will, uh, go there one day hopefully.

✓ So I will go there one day, hopefully.

Repetition 'I will, I will' is unnecessary; keep a single future tense 'I will go'. Suggestion: use single future construction and place 'hopefully' at sentence end or set off by commas.

× Yay I wanted to live in a telville because it is my dream.

✓ Yes, I want to live in a tall building because it is my dream.

Tense and word choice errors: 'wanted' (past) should be present 'want' to match current desire; 'telville' is incorrect spelling and likely 'tall building'. Also 'Yay' should be 'Yes'. Suggestion: use present simple for current preferences and check spelling.

× It is not only my dream but also my parents dream, my SI siblings dreams.

✓ It is not only my dream but also my parents' dream and my siblings' dreams.

Possessive apostrophes are missing: 'parents' and 'siblings' should be possessive. 'SI' is extraneous. Also plural agreement: 'siblings' already plural so use 'siblings' dreams' or better 'my siblings' dreams'. Suggestion: use correct possessive forms and remove extraneous words.

× He everyone wanted to live in a tall building so I will be build a tall building hopefully.

✓ Everyone wants to live in a tall building, so I hope to build one someday.

The original mixes pronouns and tenses: 'He everyone' is incorrect; use 'Everyone'. 'Wanted' (past) vs present general statement should be 'wants'. 'I will be build' is ungrammatical; correct forms are 'I will build' or 'I hope to build'. Suggestion: use 'everyone wants' for general truth and 'I hope to build one someday' for future ambition.