Building— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, correct grammar (articles, plural forms), and add one specific detail. Use a linking word if you add extra information.

Exemplo: Yes. I live in the city, so there are many tall buildings near my home. For example, there is a new luxury apartment complex two blocks away, and several office towers nearby, which makes the area feel very urban.

Sugestão: Answer directly and clearly. Remove hesitations and fix grammar. Give a reason and one clear example; use linking words like "because" or "but" to connect ideas. Avoid comparative errors (use correct comparative forms) and correct prepositions ("abroad", "in London").

Exemplo: No, I don't usually photograph buildings because I prefer the famous architecture abroad. For example, when I visit London or Dubai I take photos of iconic buildings like the Gherkin or the Burj Khalifa because their designs are more impressive.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence naming the building, correct its name, and add a specific reason why you want to visit. Use one linking word to expand and include a brief specific detail or example.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to visit the Burj Khalifa in Dubai because it is the tallest building in the world. Also, I would enjoy photographing its observation deck and comparing the modern skyscrapers with the historic architecture in Dubai's museums.

Sugestão: State your preference clearly, fix grammar and word choice, and give one specific reason using a linking word (e.g., "because" or "so"). Replace vague words like "irritation" with clearer reasons (noise, crowding, lack of privacy).

Exemplo: No, I don't want to live in a tall building. I prefer my two-storey house because it feels quieter and more private, whereas large apartment towers can be noisy and crowded.

× Yes of course I am living in city.

✓ Yes, of course. I live in the city.

Use simple present 'I live' for habitual facts or permanent situations. 'I am living' implies a temporary action; also include articles: 'the city'. Add commas for clarity.

× There are lot of buildings around my area near my house and lot of luxurious building and some other kind of buildings.

✓ There are a lot of buildings around my area near my house, many luxurious buildings, and some other kinds of buildings.

Use 'a lot of' with countable plural 'buildings'. Match plural 'buildings' with 'luxurious buildings' and 'kinds' plural. Add commas and 'many' to improve style.

× Uh, no, I don't take photos of buildings because I, I don't like, uh, this buildings, uh, is much better than London or, uh, Dubai buildings.

✓ Uh, no. I don't take photos of buildings because I don't like these buildings; they are not as impressive as London or Dubai buildings.

Use correct demonstrative 'these' with plural noun 'buildings'. Replace 'is' with 'they are' for plural agreement, and use comparative structure 'not as impressive as' to compare correctly.

× I love Dubai and London buildings.

✓ I love the buildings in Dubai and London.

Use prepositional phrase 'buildings in [city]' for natural word order and include definite article 'the' when referring to well-known groups.

× When I go to abroad in abroad, uh, London, I take photos London buildings or.

✓ When I go abroad to London, I take photos of London buildings.

Use 'go abroad' without 'to' before 'abroad', and place destination 'to London'. Include preposition 'of' after 'photos' and remove extraneous words.

× Yes, I like Burj Khalifa, Burjul herb I like so much.

✓ Yes, I like the Burj Khalifa very much.

Use correct name 'the Burj Khalifa' with definite article and idiomatic adverb 'very much'. Remove incorrect repetition and misspelling.

× When I go to abroad, I take photos of skyscraper in Dubai and the historic architecture of Dubai's museum.

✓ When I go abroad, I take photos of skyscrapers in Dubai and of the historic architecture in Dubai Museum.

Use plural 'skyscrapers' and 'go abroad' without 'to'. Use parallel structure 'photos of X and of Y' and correct name/form 'Dubai Museum' or 'Dubai's museums' depending on meaning.

× No, I don't. My home is only two stories I like so much and I happy because large buildings are so irritation irritate.

✓ No, I don't. My home has only two stories; I like it very much and I am happy because large buildings are very irritating.

Use 'has' for possession of stories. Insert 'it' as object of 'like', use 'I am happy' for verb, and correct adjective to adverb/adj: 'very irritating' describes buildings. Remove repetition and awkward words.