Travelling— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan kelancaran kalimat dengan fokus pada struktur sederhana dan penghubung yang tepat. Hindari pengulangan dan gunakan bentuk kata yang benar (mis. 'I'm traveling' → 'when I travel', 'it's never feel' → 'it never feels'). Susun jawaban menjadi 2–3 kalimat yang jelas: satu kalimat topik dan satu atau dua kalimat penjelas dengan kata penghubung seperti 'because' atau 'for example'.

Exemplo: Yes, I do. When I travel by bus or car I often look out of the window because the scenery keeps changing and it helps me relax. For example, I enjoy watching busy streets, quiet neighborhoods, and sometimes mountains or fields on longer trips.

Sugestão: Perbaiki pilihan kata kecil dan kepaduan. Hindari frasa yang tidak tepat seperti 'I do check' — gunakan 'I do' atau 'I often' saja. Struktur jawaban sudah baik; pertahankan topik kalimat diikuti alasan dan contoh singkat. Tambahkan kata penghubung seperti 'because' atau 'so' untuk membuat hubungan sebab-akibat lebih jelas.

Exemplo: Yes, I often take photos when I travel, especially of scenes that look unique or memorable because it helps me preserve those memories. I don't take too many pictures though, as I also want to enjoy the moment.

Sugestão: Perbaiki kejelasan dan tata bahasa besar-besaran. Gunakan satu kalimat topik jelas (I prefer the sea) diikuti alasan yang terstruktur dengan kata penghubung seperti 'because' dan contoh konkret. Hindari kata-kata filler ('uh', 'like') dan kesalahan kata ('ways' → 'waves', 'my feel' → 'me feel', 'Auto' → 'Although', 'erase' → 'relax'). Latih pengucapan dan pilih kosakata yang relevan dan sederhana.

Exemplo: I prefer the sea because I find it very relaxing. The sound of the waves and the fresh air help me feel calm. Although mountains are beautiful and great for hiking, I usually choose the seaside when I want to rest and enjoy peaceful scenery.

× Yes I do, probably more than anything else.

✓ Yes, I do, probably more than anything else.

Missing comma after yes affects clarity but not core grammar; keep present simple 'do' to match question about habitual action.

× Yes, I'm traveling by bus or car, looking out the window.

✓ Yes, I travel by bus or car and look out the window.

Use simple present to describe habitual actions. Present progressive 'I'm traveling' suggests a current action, but the question asks about general habits, so use 'I travel' and 'look' for agreement with habitual meaning.

× It's kind of the best part.

✓ It's kind of the best part of the trip.

Add object 'of the trip' to complete the idea; original sentence is short but can be improved for clarity and completeness.

× The scenery keeps changing so it's never feel boring.

✓ The scenery keeps changing so it never feels boring.

Subject-verb agreement and tense: 'it never feels' is required (third-person singular 'feels') to agree with 'it'. Also maintain present simple for habitual state.

× Sometimes it's a busy St. sometimes great neighborhood or even mountains and field is a longer trip.

✓ Sometimes it's a busy street, sometimes a great neighborhood, or even mountains and fields if it's a longer trip.

Sentence had missing articles and conjunctions and incorrect nouns. Correct with 'street', add articles 'a' before countable nouns, make 'fields' plural, and use 'if it's a longer trip' for conditional meaning.

× It'll give me a time to relax and just thinking especially.

✓ It gives me time to relax and just to think, especially.

Match tense and form: use present simple 'gives' for habitual effect; 'think' should be in base form with 'to' or gerund 'thinking' requires different structure. Also 'a time' unnecessary; use 'time'.

× When I'm traveling, I do check.

✓ When I'm traveling, I do check (the view).

Original is brief and vague; keep present continuous for actions during travel but add object 'the view' for clarity. 'Do check' is acceptable for emphasis.

× When I travel, I usually take a picture of the scenery of anything that looks unique or memorable.

✓ When I travel, I usually take pictures of anything in the scenery that looks unique or memorable.

Pluralize 'picture' to match general habit, move 'scenery' to modify the noun, and adjust word order for natural English.

× I think it's a great way to keep memories and enjoy looking back at them later.

✓ I think it's a great way to keep memories and to enjoy looking back at them later.

Add 'to' for parallel infinitive structure 'to keep' and 'to enjoy', improving formality and parallelism.

× However, I try not to take too many photos because I also want to enjoy the moment.

✓ However, I try not to take too many photos because I also want to enjoy the moment.

Sentence is correct; present simple is appropriate for habitual preference.

× I prefer the sea because I find it much most relaxing.

✓ I prefer the sea because I find it much more relaxing.

Use 'more' for comparative, not 'most' with 'much'; 'much more relaxing' expresses degree correctly.

× I really enjoy the sound of ways and the fresh air which helps my feel calm.

✓ I really enjoy the sound of waves and the fresh air, which helps me feel calm.

Spelling: 'ways' -> 'waves'. Pronoun error 'my' -> 'me'. Add comma before nonrestrictive clause; 'helps me feel' is correct subject-object order.

× Auto mountains are beautiful.

✓ Also, mountains are beautiful.

Likely intended 'also' not 'auto'. Replace with 'Also,' to connect ideas; sentence then grammatically correct.

× They usually involve more physical activity like hiking or maybe like uh, I was choosing the sea especially when I want to erase an enjoyable and uh scenery.

✓ They usually involve more physical activity like hiking. I would choose the sea, especially when I want to relax and enjoy the scenery.

Original had multiple errors: run-on, filler words, wrong verb 'erase', and awkward phrasing. Split into two sentences, use conditional 'would choose' or 'I choose', use 'relax' not 'erase', and 'enjoy the scenery' is the correct phrase.