Travelling— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Speak more clearly and correct basic grammar and word forms. Start with a concise topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid fillers and repetition. Also correct verb forms and articles (e.g., “I feel relaxed,” “it gives me a break”).

Exemplo: Yes, I often look out of the window when I travel by bus or car, especially in a new place. For example, I enjoy watching local architecture and landscapes because they help me relax and give my eyes a rest from screens.

Sugestão: Use a clear structure: a direct answer followed by brief specific reasons. Correct grammar (e.g., “when I see scenery,” “I like to share those photos”) and avoid unnecessary phrases like “being a social butterfly.” Use linking words such as “because” or “so” to connect ideas.

Exemplo: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery outside the car window because I want to remember the view. I usually post the best pictures on Instagram to get feedback from friends.

Sugestão: Answer directly and use correct vocabulary and grammar (e.g., “sea” not “see,” “sunbathing,” “there are a lot of activities”). Give two clear, specific reasons and link them with words like “because” and “also.” Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer the sea because I enjoy activities like swimming and sunbathing. Also, there are many things to do at the beach such as scuba diving, and I like eating fresh seafood, so the seaside suits me better than the mountains.

× Definitely yes, I'll look out the window at the scenery when I am traveling by bus or car, especially if it is a new place because I feel a relax as well as a it.

✓ Definitely yes, I look out the window at the scenery when I travel by bus or car, especially if it is a new place because I feel relaxed and curious.

The answer mixes future ('I'll') and present habits; use present simple for habitual actions. 'Traveling' -> 'travel' to match simple present. 'Feel a relax' is incorrect: 'relax' is a verb/noun but here adjective 'relaxed' is needed. 'as well as a it' is ungrammatical; 'curious' or another noun/adjective should replace it. Use consistent tense and correct adjective form. Suggestion: Use present simple for habits, use correct adjective forms (relaxed), and remove extraneous words.

× It is a time pass activity.

✓ It is a way to pass the time.

'Time pass' is informal and ungrammatical in standard English; the correct idiom is 'a way to pass the time.' The original lacks idiomatic structure. Suggestion: Use established English expressions and correct noun phrase order.

× Apart from this it give me a break to my eye.

✓ Apart from this, it gives my eyes a break.

Subject 'it' requires third person singular verb 'gives' not 'give'. 'A break to my eye' is awkward; 'gives my eyes a break' is idiomatic and uses correct plural 'eyes'. Suggestion: Ensure subject-verb agreement and use natural noun phrases.

× Of course, yes, I usually capture a photo when I saw see your scenery outside the car and apart from this being a social butterfly, I like to share those photo on my social platform like Instagram in order to take a review of people.

✓ Of course, I usually take a photo when I see scenery outside the car, and since I am a social butterfly, I like to share those photos on my social platforms like Instagram to get people's feedback.

Mixed tenses and forms: 'capture a photo' is formal but acceptable; 'take a photo' is more natural. 'When I saw see' mixes past and present; use present 'see' for habitual action. 'Those photo' requires plural 'photos'. 'Social platform' should be plural or 'a social platform'. 'In order to take a review of people' is ungrammatical; use 'to get people's feedback' or 'to see what people think'. Suggestion: Use present simple for habitual actions, pluralize nouns correctly, and use idiomatic phrases for purpose.

× Definitely I prefer to see because I love sea activity like swimming and sun bathing.

✓ I definitely prefer the sea because I love sea activities like swimming and sunbathing.

'Prefer to see' is incorrect collocation; 'prefer the sea' or 'prefer the sea to the mountains' is correct. 'Sea activity' should be plural 'sea activities'. 'Sun bathing' should be 'sunbathing' as one word. Suggestion: Use correct collocations ('prefer the sea') and pluralize general activities.

× Apart from this, there are lot of activity that I can do in a sea like scuba diving.

✓ Apart from this, there are a lot of activities that I can do in the sea, like scuba diving.

Missing article 'a' in 'a lot of' and 'activity' should be plural 'activities'. 'In a sea' is unnatural; use 'in the sea' or 'at the sea'. Suggestion: Use correct quantifier phrase 'a lot of' and pluralize countable nouns; use definite article 'the' for specific natural features.

× Moreover, I love to eat seafood so that's why I prefer to see as compared to mountain.

✓ Moreover, I love to eat seafood, so I prefer the sea to the mountains.

'Prefer to see' is wrong; should be 'prefer the sea'. 'As compared to mountain' is incorrect comparison structure and missing plural 'mountains'. Use 'prefer X to Y' construction. Also add comma for clarity. Suggestion: Use correct comparative structure 'prefer X to Y' and pluralize where needed.