Travelling— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Shorten and organize the answer: start with a clear topic sentence (Yes, I usually look out the window), then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition ("sea" and "ocean" both used repeatedly) and unnecessary words like "used to" unless you mean you no longer do this. Aim for 2–3 concise sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually look out the window when travelling by bus. For example, when I travel to a coastal city I enjoy seeing the beach and the sea because the views are very relaxing and colourful.

Sugestão: Make the response more coherent and natural by combining related ideas and using linking words. Be specific about what you photograph and why. Avoid filler phrases and correct small grammar issues ("take it out" is unclear, and avoid repeating words like "on on"). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I often take photos of coastal scenery, especially sunsets and waves, because I find them calming. I usually share the best shots with my family and post some on Instagram to show friends where I have been.

Sugestão: Clarify your preference and give a clear reason using appropriate vocabulary and polite language. Avoid vague or awkward phrases like "prefer to see" and unnecessary references to clothing that may sound informal. Use linking words to connect preference and reason, and keep the answer to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer the sea because I enjoy the relaxed atmosphere and the photo opportunities it offers. For instance, I like wearing comfortable summer clothes and taking pictures on the beach, which makes the trip more enjoyable.

× Yes, when I used to travel to another city by bus, I looked out the window at the scenery because it's a city by the sea, so I can see the scenery of the sea, the ocean and the beach is so charming and attractive.

✓ Yes. When I traveled to another city by bus, I looked out the window at the scenery because it was a city by the sea, so I could see the sea and the beach, which were very charming and attractive.

The sentence mixes past and present tenses. The context describes a past habit, so use past tense consistently: 'used to travel' or simple past 'traveled' and change present 'it's' and 'can see' to past 'it was' and 'could see'. Also make nouns parallel and use a relative clause 'which were' to describe the beach. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× Yes, I take many photos because it's so relaxing and it's beautiful. I want to share with my friends and my family so I take it out and I also want to post on on my YouTube or Instagram to share with others.

✓ Yes, I take many photos because it is so relaxing and beautiful. I want to share them with my friends and my family, so I take my camera out and I also want to post them on my YouTube or Instagram to share with others.

Errors include incorrect pronoun reference and redundancy: 'it' is singular but refers to 'photos' (plural), so use 'them'. 'Take it out' is unclear; idiomatic is 'take my camera out'. Remove duplicate 'on'. Ensure consistent pronouns and plural agreement. Grammar problem type ID: 12

× I prefer to see because when I went to the sea, I can wear my clothes, wear some sexy clothes or some dresses. I like it it and also I can take many beautiful photos.

✓ I prefer the sea because when I go to the sea I can wear different clothes, such as dresses. I like it, and I can also take many beautiful photos.

The sentence mixes present and past: 'I prefer' is present, so use present 'go' instead of past 'went'. 'Prefer to see' is unidiomatic; say 'prefer the sea'. Remove repeated 'it'. 'Can' is fine in present. Use clearer phrasing 'different clothes, such as dresses' instead of 'sexy clothes'. Grammar problem type ID: 6