Travelling— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct and clear: start with a topic sentence that answers the question, then give one or two concise reasons using linking words. Fix grammar (use present simple or present continuous consistently) and avoid repetition. Mention both modes (car and bus) clearly and one brief specific example or reason.

Exemplo: I usually look out of the window when I travel by car, but rarely when I take the bus. For example, when the weather is sunny I enjoy watching the countryside, but if it is raining or very windy I prefer to close the window and keep my seat comfortable.

Sugestão: Answer directly and reduce repetition. Use correct tense (present simple or present perfect) and link ideas (e.g., 'if' and 'because'). Clarify practical details: where and when you stop, or how you take photos from inside the car. Keep to max 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I often take photos when the weather is nice because the scenery looks better in sunlight. If I travel by car, I usually stop at a viewpoint to take pictures, but if I must shoot from inside the vehicle I open the window to avoid reflections.

Sugestão: Begin with a clear statement of preference, then give 1–2 specific reasons or an example. Simplify phrasing and correct grammar (use 'I prefer the sea' rather than wordy constructions). Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' to structure your answer.

Exemplo: I prefer the sea because my city has many beaches and I enjoy swimming and relaxing by the water. For example, I often spend weekends at the beach where I can swim, sunbathe, and watch boats on the horizon.

× It depends on whether firstly if weather is a good and well forecasting for me I used to see outside from my window of my car, especially not by bus.

✓ It depends on the weather; if the forecast is good, I usually look out of my car window, but not when I travel by bus.

Original sentence has redundant conjunctions ('whether firstly if') and incorrect word order. 'Whether' and 'if' should not be combined; use one. 'Weather is a good and well forecasting' is ungrammatical — use 'the forecast is good'. 'I used to see outside' incorrectly uses 'used to' for habitual present; use 'usually look out'. Also clarify contrast with bus using 'but not when I travel by bus'. Suggestion: Use one conjunction, correct noun phrases ('the forecast'), and simple present for habitual actions.

× And if weather depends on better and bad conditions, so I used to close my window in my traveling time.

✓ And if the weather is bad, I close my window while traveling.

'If weather depends on better and bad conditions' is unclear and ungrammatical; 'weather' needs 'the' and a simple adjective 'bad' suffices. 'Used to close' wrongly implies past habit; use present simple 'close' for habitual current behavior. 'In my traveling time' is awkward; use 'while traveling'. Suggestion: Use 'the weather' and present simple for current habitual actions, and simpler time expressions.

× As I mentioned before that I it depends on weather conditions.

✓ As I mentioned before, it depends on the weather conditions.

The phrase contains extra words ('that I it') and missing article 'the'. Remove the redundant words and add a comma after the introductory phrase. Use 'the weather conditions' or simply 'the weather'. Suggestion: Keep introductory phrases concise and ensure correct articles.

× If weather is good, I used to stop my traveling season and I used to take pictures of outside.

✓ If the weather is good, I stop traveling and take pictures of the scenery outside.

'Used to' indicates a past habitual action, but the context is general present habits; use present simple 'stop' and 'take'. 'Traveling season' is odd here; use 'stop traveling' or 'stop briefly'. 'Pictures of outside' should be 'pictures of the scenery outside' or 'photos outside'. Suggestion: Use present simple for habitual actions and choose natural collocations like 'take pictures of the scenery'.

× It also depends if I take pictures from inside the car by opening the window and creating a better recording for myself.

✓ It also depends on whether I take pictures from inside the car by opening the window to get better shots.

Use 'depends on whether' rather than 'depends if'. 'Creating a better recording' is awkward for photos; use 'to get better shots' or 'to take better photos'. 'From inside the car by opening the window' is acceptable but rewording improves clarity. Suggestion: Use 'depends on whether' and prefer natural collocations for photography ('better shots', 'better photos').

× As I am much fond of sea because there are several water areas in my own city where I live, so I prefer to go on the beach and where water are more contained in the higher amount.

✓ I am very fond of the sea because there are several bodies of water in my city, so I prefer going to the beach, where there is more water.

The sentence mixes conjunctions unnecessarily ('because' and 'so'); choose one or restructure. 'Much fond of sea' should be 'very fond of the sea' and needs the definite article. 'Water areas' is better as 'bodies of water'. 'Where water are more contained in the higher amount' is ungrammatical; use 'where there is more water'. Suggestion: Use correct articles, simpler conjunction structure, and natural phrases like 'bodies of water' and 'there is more water'.

× So I am much delighted to going for the sea.

✓ So I am delighted to go to the sea.

'Delighted to going' mixes infinitive and -ing form; after 'delighted' use the infinitive 'to go'. 'Much delighted' is awkward; simply 'delighted' or 'very delighted' is better. Use 'go to the sea' rather than 'going for the sea'. Suggestion: Use correct verb forms after adjectives ('delighted to go') and natural prepositions ('go to the sea').