Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and structured: start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference (or that you like both), then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Reduce fillers (umm, I, I) and avoid repetition.

Exemplo: I enjoy both typing and handwriting. At work I type because I need to reply to 10–15 emails every morning, so typing is faster and more efficient. However, I prefer handwriting for personal journaling because it feels more expressive and helps me reflect.

Sugestão: Answer directly with a topic sentence, then give concise supporting details and use linking words (for example, 'because' or 'and'). Remove hesitation and repetitions to sound more fluent.

Exemplo: I use both a desktop and a laptop every day. At the office I use a desktop for most tasks, and in the evening I use my laptop for studying and practicing for exams because it is more convenient for portability.

Sugestão: Provide a clear, chronological topic sentence and specific details, avoiding unnecessary adjectives and hesitations. Use linking words like 'but' and 'so' to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: I first learned to type at school when I was a child. We didn't have a computer at home, but my school offered an information technology class with one scheduled hour each day, and that is where I practiced keyboarding.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer stating your method, then add a specific detail or result. Avoid vague phrases and filler words; mention the name of a resource or a practice routine if possible.

Exemplo: I improved my typing by following online tutorials on YouTube and practicing regularly. The videos taught me finger placement—my right-hand fingers cover certain keys and my left-hand fingers others—so I practiced daily exercises to increase my speed and accuracy.

× Honestly, umm I'm good with both because in office I always type I I need to reply for like almost 10 to 15 emails like every morning and umm I, I like to journaling so I just love to read everything what I feel.

✓ Honestly, I'm good with both because at the office I always type; I need to reply to almost 10 to 15 emails every morning, and I like journaling, so I just love to write down everything I feel.

Multiple issues: 'in office' should be 'at the office' (preposition) -> type 11; 'reply for' should be 'reply to' (preposition) -> type 11; 'I like to journaling' mixes infinitive and gerund; correct form is 'I like journaling' or 'I like to journal' (verb + -ing form / infinitive) -> type 8; 'read everything what I feel' is incorrect relative clause and verb choice: use 'write down everything I feel' or 'express everything I feel' (incorrect use of verbs/structure) -> type 26. Also repeated fillers and missing punctuation. Suggestion: use 'at the office', 'reply to', choose either 'like journaling' or 'like to journal', and use 'write down everything I feel'.

× Every day again, I use both because, uh, in my office hours, I, I have a desktop and evening if I want to watch umm or umm, just you know, study purpose. I'm, I'm, I'm preparing for some of my exams, so I, I do practice with my laptop keyboard yeah.

✓ Every day I use both because during my office hours I have a desktop, and in the evening, if I want to watch something or just study, I use my laptop. I'm preparing for some exams, so I practice on my laptop keyboard.

Preposition errors: 'in my office hours' should be 'during my office hours' (preposition and word choice) -> type 11; 'evening if I want to watch' needs 'in the evening, if I want to watch' (article + preposition) -> type 11; 'study purpose' is incorrect; use 'to study' or 'for studying' -> type 11/26. Also 'practice with my laptop keyboard' is better as 'practice on my laptop keyboard' (preposition) -> type 11. Suggestion: use 'during', 'in the evening', 'to study' or 'for studying', and 'practice on'. Remove fillers and repetitions.

× Uh, as a child, I grew up in a very, umm, normal family now extraordinary. So we didn't have a computer at home, but, uh, in school, yes.

✓ As a child, I grew up in a very ordinary family. We didn't have a computer at home, but at school we did.

Word choice and tense/context: 'normal family now extraordinary' is unclear; likely intended 'ordinary' (adjective correction) -> type 13. 'but, uh, in school, yes' is fragmentary; better 'but at school we did' to complete the idea and match past tense 'didn't have' -> type 5. Suggestion: choose appropriate adjective 'ordinary' and finish the contrast with a complete clause using past tense 'we did'. Remove 'now' which changes meaning.

× So we, we do have a subject information technology.

✓ We had a subject called Information Technology.

Use of auxiliary 'do' with 'have' is incorrect in this past context: 'we do have' implies present; in past narration use 'we had' -> type 3 (there/be/use of have). Also word order: 'a subject information technology' needs an article and naming: 'a subject called Information Technology' -> type 17/26. Suggestion: say 'We had a subject called Information Technology.'

× So one, one hour basically for that like every day there will be one scheduled hour for the computer learning.

✓ There was usually one scheduled hour for computer lessons every day.

Tense mismatch and awkward construction: original mixes present and habitual future 'there will be' while describing past schooling; use past tense 'there was' or 'there used to be' -> type 6. Also 'computer learning' is awkward; use 'computer lessons' or 'computer class' and avoid repetition. Suggestion: use 'There was usually one scheduled hour for computer lessons every day.'

× Umm actually basically saying I did try it one time. I just follow the instruction from YouTube.

✓ Actually, I tried it once. I just followed the instructions from YouTube.

Past event described, so verbs must be past tense: 'did try' is awkward; use 'tried' -> type 5; 'I just follow' should be past 'I just followed' -> type 6/5. Also 'instruction' should be plural 'instructions' -> type 14. Suggestion: use simple past 'tried' and 'followed' and pluralize 'instructions'.

× So in that video what I found is my right hand forefingers deal with few uh letters on the keyboard and my left hand fingers also umm follow some of the letters specifically so.

✓ In that video I found that my right-hand forefingers handle a few letters on the keyboard, and my left-hand fingers follow some other letters specifically.

Verb forms and articles: 'deal with' is informal and awkward; use 'handle' or 'are responsible for' -> type 10. 'deal with few letters' needs article 'a few' -> type 14. 'my left hand fingers also follow some of the letters' needs hyphenation 'left-hand' and better phrasing 'follow some other letters' -> type 26. Suggestion: use 'handle a few letters' and 'follow some other letters', and ensure correct hyphenation for compound adjectives.