Part 1
Examinador
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidato
I prefer to handwriting because it can tell me about the real things.
Examinador
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidato
I'm umm, not good at typing so I don't know anything but some people said. They use desktop.
Examinador
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidato
When I was a junior high school student, I learned how to type on a keyboard, but I'm not good at type now.
Examinador
How do you improve your typing?
Candidato
I'm not good at type now, but some people said they practiced every day and they used to. Personal computer.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Pontuação: 38.0Sugestão: 回答は短く直接的にするべきです。また文法と語彙の誤りを直し、理由を具体的に述べてください。例えば「prefer to handwriting」は不自然で、“prefer handwriting”や“prefer to write by hand”が正しいです。理由を補強するために具体例(感情的な繋がり、記憶に残りやすい等)を一つか二つ付け加えてください。
Exemplo: I prefer handwriting because writing by hand helps me remember things better. For example, when I take notes in class I can recall the lesson more easily.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Pontuação: 30.0Sugestão: 質問に直接答える必要があります。まず「どちらか」を明確にし、その後に自分の状況を簡潔に説明してください。曖昧な表現("I don't know anything but some people said")は避け、短い理由や頻度を加えてください。発話の流暢さを改善するために“um”を減らしましょう。
Exemplo: I don’t type on a keyboard every day because I’m not a fast typist. Most people I know use desktop computers at home, but I usually write by hand.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Pontuação: 55.0Sugestão: 構造は良いですが文法と語順を改善してください。“learned how to type”は正しい一方で“I'm not good at type”は誤りです。“good at typing”と表現します。また一つの理由や現在の練習状況を付け加えるとより具体的です。
Exemplo: I learned how to type when I was in junior high school, but I’m not very fast now because I rarely practice. I usually type slowly when I write emails.
How do you improve your typing?
Pontuação: 28.0Sugestão: 質問は自分の改善方法を求めています。自分が実際に行っていること、または今後行う予定の具体的な方法を述べてください。短く明確にし、練習の頻度や使うツール(タイピング練習アプリ、オンラインコース)を挙げると良いです。
Exemplo: I plan to improve my typing by practicing for 15 minutes every day using an online typing program. I will focus on accuracy before speed and track my progress weekly.
× I prefer to handwriting because it can tell me about the real things.
✓ I prefer handwriting because it can tell me about real things.
The verb 'prefer' can be followed by a gerund (handwriting) or an infinitive (to write), but not 'to' plus a noun form like 'to handwriting'. Use 'prefer handwriting' or 'prefer to write'. Also, 'the real things' is unnatural here; use 'real things' without the definite article. Suggestion: say 'I prefer handwriting' or 'I prefer to write by hand.'
× I'm umm, not good at typing so I don't know anything but some people said. They use desktop.
✓ I'm not good at typing, so I don't know much, but some people said they use a desktop.
The original has disfluent filler 'umm' which should be omitted in writing. 'Don't know anything' is too strong and unnatural; use 'don't know much'. The clause 'but some people said.' is a sentence fragment; it should connect to what they said: 'but some people said they use a desktop.' Also, 'desktop' needs an article 'a desktop' when referring to a computer. Suggestion: 'I'm not good at typing, so I don't know much, but some people said they use a desktop.'
× When I was a junior high school student, I learned how to type on a keyboard, but I'm not good at type now.
✓ When I was a junior high school student, I learned how to type on a keyboard, but I'm not good at typing now.
The first clause uses past tense correctly 'learned'. The second clause should use the gerund 'typing' after 'good at', not the base form 'type'. 'Good at' requires a noun or gerund. Suggestion: use 'typing' to match the structure: 'but I'm not good at typing now.'
× I'm not good at type now, but some people said they practiced every day and they used to. Personal computer.
✓ I'm not good at typing now, but some people said they practiced every day and they used to use personal computers.
Again, 'good at' requires a gerund: 'typing' not 'type'. The clause 'they used to.' is incomplete and needs an infinitive verb after 'used to' (used to use). 'Personal computer.' is a fragment; combine it: 'used to use personal computers.' Suggestion: '...they practiced every day and they used to use personal computers.'