Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise, correct grammar, finish your example, and avoid irrelevant phrases. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific reason and a brief example. Use a linking word to connect the reason and the example.

Exemplo: I prefer handwriting because it helps me concentrate and remember information better. For example, when I take class notes by hand, I review them later and recall key points more easily than when I type, which makes studying more effective.

Sugestão: Correct verb forms and sentence structure; answer directly then give a concise supporting detail. Avoid vague phrases like “some videos.” Use a linking word to show contrast.

Exemplo: No, I don’t type daily on a desktop or laptop. I mainly use my phone to chat with friends, and I only use my laptop occasionally to watch films, so I rarely type long messages on a keyboard.

Sugestão: Fix tense and sentence boundaries. Give a clear time reference, then one or two specific details about how you learned. Use linking words to organize the answer.

Exemplo: I learned to type at primary school when I was about nine years old. At that time we had a computer class where the teacher showed us basic typing techniques and simple typing games to practice.

Sugestão: Be slightly more specific and vary vocabulary. Start with a topic sentence, then give two clear methods with a linking word and an example of frequency or result.

Exemplo: I improve my typing mainly by playing online typing games and by chatting with friends on my laptop. For instance, I practice with a typing app for 15 minutes a day, which has helped increase my speed and accuracy.

× For example, when I take notes by hand, I remember information better than when I.

✓ For example, when I take notes by hand, I remember information better than when I type.

The student omitted the verb in the comparison clause, creating an incomplete sentence and unclear reference. Replace the implied verb with 'I type' to complete the comparison and clarify the meaning. Use parallel structure in comparisons (remember ... better than when I + verb).

× Personally, I prefer handwriting because it helps me concentrate more and I also love some fancy pants and new notebooks.

✓ Personally, I prefer handwriting because it helps me concentrate more, and I also love fancy pens and new notebooks.

The phrase 'fancy pants' is incorrect and 'pants' is the wrong word; likely intended 'pens.' Also 'some' is unnecessary before a plural noun in this context. Correcting the noun to 'pens' and removing 'some' makes the sentence natural and grammatically correct. Comma before 'and' improves sentence flow.

× No, I usually just using phone to chat with my friends every day so I just use the laptop for watching movies or some videos.

✓ No, I usually just use my phone to chat with my friends every day, so I only use my laptop to watch movies or videos.

The original has a nonfinite verb form 'using' where a finite verb 'use' is required and missing possessive 'my' before 'phone.' 'For watching' should be 'to watch' to match purpose construction. Replace 'some videos' with 'videos' and add a comma before 'so' for clarity.

× I've learned how to type on the keyboard on in my primary school we have a computer class and also teacher taught us how to use the keyboard and play some game.

✓ I learned how to type on the keyboard in primary school. We had a computer class, and the teacher taught us how to use the keyboard and play some games.

The sentence is a run-on with incorrect tense and article usage. Use simple past 'learned' for a finished past event. Remove the extra 'on' and split into two sentences. Use past tense 'had' and 'taught.' Add the article 'the' before 'teacher' and plural 'games' for natural expression.

× I improve it by playing some typing games or chatting with my friends by using the keyboard on the laptop and I practice it regularly.

✓ I improve it by playing typing games or chatting with my friends using the keyboard on my laptop, and I practice regularly.

The phrase 'by using' is redundant and awkward; combine 'chatting with my friends using the keyboard' for clarity. Remove 'some' before 'typing games' (optional) and 'it' after 'practice' to avoid repetition. Add possessive 'my' before 'laptop' and a comma before 'and' to separate clauses.