Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make your answer grammatically correct, concise and varied in vocabulary. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific examples using linking words. Avoid repetition and correct singular/plural and verb forms.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photographs of different views. For example, I often capture landscapes such as forests and rivers because I love nature; I also photograph my pet at home to record its expressions.

Sugestão: Organize your response with a clear opinion first, then give specific reasons and use linking words. Correct grammar (articles, plurals, verb forms) and avoid vague phrases. Keep it within 2–4 sentences for clarity.

Exemplo: I prefer rural views because they offer unique scenes I rarely see in the city. For instance, I enjoy watching farmers working in their fields and seeing cows and buffaloes grazing, which feels peaceful and authentic.

Sugestão: Give a direct opinion, then support it with specific, well-structured reasons. Use correct grammar (articles, plural forms) and complete your sentences. Mention one clear example and a linking phrase to explain why it matters to you.

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because we have diverse cultures and colorful festivals. For example, during Diwali people decorate their homes and create rangoli patterns, which makes the streets lively and very photogenic.

× Yes I like to taking pictures of different views and mostly I love to take picture of scenery's, nature, greenery and I also love to capture a picture of my pet.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views, and mostly I love to take pictures of scenery, nature, and greenery. I also love to capture pictures of my pet.

The phrase 'like to taking' mixes infinitive and gerund forms; after 'like' both 'to do' or 'doing' are possible but 'like to taking' is incorrect. Use 'I like taking pictures' or 'I like to take pictures.' 'Take picture' needs plural 'pictures' when speaking generally. 'Scenery's' is incorrect possessive; use 'scenery' (uncountable). Also separate clauses with commas and use parallel structure 'scenery, nature, and greenery.' Improve by choosing consistent verb forms and correct countable/uncountable nouns.

× I love animal so yes I take a pictures of different views.

✓ I love animals, so yes, I take pictures of different views.

'Animal' should be plural 'animals' when speaking generally. 'A pictures' incorrectly combines singular article 'a' with plural noun 'pictures'; remove 'a'. Add commas for clarity. Suggestion: use plural nouns for general statements and match articles to noun number.

× I prefer to view a rural area because in rural area too many things we have to never seen before.

✓ I prefer rural areas because there are many things we have never seen before in rural areas.

Preposition and article usage: say 'rural areas' (plural) or 'a rural area' consistently. The clause 'we have to never seen' is ungrammatical; correct is 'we have never seen.' Also insert 'there are' to introduce 'many things.' Use natural word order 'we have never seen before.' Improve by using 'there are' for existence and correct adverb placement.

× When I'm going to rural area, some people's doing the activity in a farm, then cow and Buffalo, Buffalo in every home they taking a milk then.

✓ When I go to rural areas, some people are working on farms; there are cows and buffaloes, and many homes keep buffaloes for milk.

Pronouns and possessives: 'people's' is incorrect possessive; use 'people.' Verb tense: 'I'm going' should be simple present 'I go' or present continuous with context; better 'When I go.' Use plural nouns 'farms,' 'cows,' 'buffaloes.' 'They taking a milk' is incorrect; use 'many homes keep buffaloes for milk' or 'they milk the buffaloes.' Improve by correcting pluralization, subject-verb agreement, and more natural phrasing.

× I prefer to view in my own country because in my country too many cultures are there and celebrate the too many festival like Diwali, Holi.

✓ I prefer views in my own country because there are many cultures and many festivals, such as Diwali and Holi.

Preposition and article issues: use 'views in my own country' or 'view my own country' depending on intent; 'in my country too many cultures are there' is awkward—use 'there are many cultures.' 'Too many' implies excessive; use 'many' in neutral description. 'Celebrate the too many festival' is ungrammatical; use 'many festivals' and 'such as' before examples. Improve by using natural word order and correct quantifier usage.

× So in Diwali everyone make a rangoli in own home so I.

✓ So at Diwali everyone makes a rangoli in their own home, so I also do.

Sentence fragments and agreement: 'everyone make' is incorrect; 'everyone' takes singular verb 'makes.' 'In own home' should be 'in their own home.' The sentence ends abruptly 'so I' without completing the idea; add 'also do' to indicate the speaker participates. Improve by completing the sentence and ensuring subject-verb agreement and correct possessive pronouns.