Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答が不自然で文法や語彙の誤りが多いです。まず質問には直接簡潔に応答すること（トピック文）、次に1〜2文で理由や具体例を述べる練習をしてください。不要な語（例："good nice beer"）や曖昧な表現（"took the picture differently"）を避け、適切な語彙（"scenery"や"scene"など）に置き換えましょう。また時制と語順を見直し、発音で意味が伝わるようにゆっくり話すと効果的です。

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I often take photos of everyday scenes as well as places I visit when I travel. For example, if I see a beautiful view or an interesting street, I’ll take a picture to remember it. I enjoy capturing different moods and lighting in those shots.

Sugestão: 主張はあるが表現が断片的で語彙選択と文法に問題があります。まず直接的なトピック文（"I prefer natural or rural views to urban ones."）を使い、理由を2つまでに絞って明確に述べましょう。接続詞（because, so, therefore, also）を正しく使い、不要なフィラー（umm, uh）を減らす練習をしてください。具体例（忙しさからの休息として自然に行く等）を加えると説得力が増します。

Exemplo: I prefer rural and natural views to urban ones. I was born and raised in a city, so I often look for nature to escape the busy urban lifestyle. For example, I like walking in the countryside on weekends because it helps me relax and feel refreshed.

Sugestão: 内容が混乱しており、単語の誤用（"slew out", "beer"）が多いです。まず明確に現在の好みを述べ（トピック文）、過去との比較を1文で示し、具体例を付け加えてください。語彙は正確に使い（"scenery"や"views"、"beautiful places"）、国名や時制をはっきりさせること。短くはっきり話す練習をして、誤った単語選択を減らしましょう。

Exemplo: I prefer the scenery of my own country now. A few years ago when I lived in Japan I enjoyed overseas views, but after moving to Australia I grew to appreciate the landscapes of my home country more. For instance, Japan has many beautiful coastal and mountain views that I really miss.

× Yes I do, I normally go to somewhere not only travel but also the daily life and if I saw a good nice beer I took the picture differently.

✓ Yes, I do. I normally go somewhere not only to travel but also for daily life, and if I see a good nice view I take the picture differently.

The sentence has multiple preposition and tense issues. Use 'go somewhere' without 'to somewhere' and 'not only to travel but also for daily life' is the correct parallel structure using prepositions; 'if I saw' should be present tense 'if I see' to match habitual action, and 'I took' should be 'I take'. Also 'beer' seems to be a misused word and likely should be 'view'. Improve by keeping consistent present tense for habitual actions and using correct prepositions 'to' before infinitive and 'for' to indicate purpose.

× I prefer to need lulo or natural than urban because I was born and raised up urban area.

✓ I prefer rural or natural areas to urban ones because I was born and raised in an urban area.

Several errors: 'need lulo' appears to be incorrect word choice; likely intended 'rural'. Use 'prefer A to B' construction, so 'prefer rural or natural areas to urban ones'. Use 'born and raised in an urban area' not 'raised up urban area'. 'Area' should be countable with article. Improve by using correct vocabulary and the proper 'prefer ... to ...' structure.

× So that's why I have kind of, umm, interested in, uh, natural And also I'm my business so and my life is so busy.

✓ So that's why I'm kind of interested in nature. Also, because of my business and busy life,

The original sentence is fragmented and has word order and filler issues. Use 'I'm interested in nature' not 'interested in natural'. 'I'm my business' is ungrammatical; correct to 'because of my business'. Break into clear clauses and remove fillers. Ensure subject-verb order 'I am interested'.

× That's why I'm looking for the nature.

✓ That's why I look for nature.

For habitual preference, simple present 'I look for nature' is more natural than present continuous 'I'm looking for the nature'. Also drop the definite article before 'nature'. Use 'look for nature' or 'seek nature'.

× When I was living in Japan, I mean like a few years ago, I preferred, uh, overseas scenes, but I slew out this experience.

✓ When I was living in Japan a few years ago, I preferred overseas scenes, but I grew out of this preference.

'Sl ew out' is incorrect; likely intended 'grew out of'. Use 'grew out of this preference' to indicate change. 'Preferred' is correct past tense for that time. Remove fillers for clarity.

× I live in, live in Australia. I love my country's scenes, uh, because there's so many nice beer in Japan.

✓ Now I live in Australia. I love the scenery in my country because there are so many nice places in Japan.

Repeating 'I live in, live in' is disfluent; use 'Now I live in Australia.' 'My country's scenes' is awkward; 'the scenery in my country' or 'my country's scenery' is natural. 'There's so many nice beer' has agreement and wrong noun: 'there are so many nice places' or 'beautiful spots' is likely intended. Use plural verb 'are' with plural noun 'places'. Improve by using correct noun and subject-verb agreement.