Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve grammar and clarity: use correct verb forms, avoid repetition, and keep answers concise (max 5 sentences). Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words like "because" or "so" correctly.

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing landscapes and sunsets when I travel because they capture the mood of a place and remind me of the experience. For example, I often take photos of coastal sunsets to remember holiday evenings by the sea.

Sugestão: Correct unclear phrases and avoid unrelated or nonsensical words. Keep one clear reason, then add a specific example. Use linking words such as "because", "for example", or "especially" appropriately.

Exemplo: I prefer urban views because the buildings and skylines can look dramatic, especially at night. For example, I like photographing illuminated skyscrapers and busy streets because the lights create a lively atmosphere.

Sugestão: Fix grammar and sentence structure: begin with a clear statement, then give specific comparisons and examples. Use linking words such as "although" or "however" to contrast ideas, and avoid repeating words like "views" too often.

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country, although I also enjoy famous sights abroad like Seoul or Paris. For instance, I love photographing the Great Wall, mountain landscapes, and coastal scenes at home because they feel familiar and meaningful to me.

× Yes, I love taking pictures of different views while travel or go to some place with beautiful views.

✓ Yes, I love taking pictures of different views while traveling or when I go to places with beautiful views.

The sentence misuses base verb forms after 'while' and 'go to'. Use the gerund 'traveling' after 'while' to show simultaneous action (verb + -ing). For the second clause, use 'when I go to places' to form a correct subordinate clause with a subject and verb. Also pluralize 'place' to 'places' for general reference. Suggestion: Use gerunds after 'while' and ensure subordinate clauses have a subject and correct verb form.

× I always photograph landscapes and the sunsets always likely because they always remind me of the experience.

✓ I always photograph landscapes and I particularly like sunsets because they always remind me of the experience.

The phrase 'the sunsets always likely' is ungrammatical; 'likely' is an adjective that does not fit here. Use an adverbial or a verb phrase such as 'I particularly like' or 'I am particularly fond of' to express preference. Also include a clear subject for the second clause ('I'). Suggestion: Replace 'likely' with 'like' or 'am fond of' and ensure each clause has a subject.

× I prefer views in urban areas because buildings and skyline are often dramatic and visually striking.

✓ I prefer views in urban areas because buildings and skylines are often dramatic and visually striking.

The noun 'skyline' should be plural 'skylines' to match the plural subject 'buildings' when speaking generally about many cities, or keep it singular with an article if referring to one skyline. This is a noun number/consistency issue related to present-tense general statements. Suggestion: Use plural 'skylines' when speaking generally or 'the skyline' when referring to a specific city.

× Eye planters diseases kept waiting, especially at night when the lights create a vibrant atmosphere.

✓ The lights and signs are especially impressive at night, especially when the lights create a vibrant atmosphere.

The original fragment 'Eye planters diseases kept waiting' is nonsensical and likely a severe transcription error. I provided a coherent sentence that fits the context of urban views at night. The correction replaces the garbled phrase with a meaningful clause describing urban visuals. Suggestion: Ensure transcription accuracy; when repairing, keep meaning consistent with context (urban night visuals).

× High prefer views in my own country though I love other countries views like Seoul or Paris but reviews in my country like the Great Wall and some famous mountains and lakes and a beautiful sea are the best for me.

✓ I prefer views in my own country. Although I love views in other countries like Seoul or Paris, views in my country, such as the Great Wall, some famous mountains and lakes, and its beautiful coastline, are the best for me.

Multiple problems: 'High' is a typo for 'I'. 'Other countries views' should be 'views in other countries' (preposition and word order). Run-on sentence: needs splitting and connectors ('Although...'). 'Reviews' is a typo for 'views'. 'A beautiful sea' is awkward; 'its beautiful coastline' or 'a beautiful sea' should be made concise. Pronouns and possessives ('my country' and 'its') must be used correctly. Suggestion: Correct typos, use proper prepositions ('views in other countries'), split into clearer sentences or use subordinating conjunctions, and use appropriate nouns for natural phrasing.