Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is natural and enthusiastic, but it's slightly repetitive (two uses of "I love") and could be more specific about what you photograph and why. Try to include one clear topic sentence, one or two supporting details using linking words, and avoid redundancy. Also keep it to no more than 4–5 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I really enjoy photographing different views, especially in the mountains. For example, I often focus on wide landscapes at sunrise because the light brings out vibrant colors and long shadows. I also like capturing small details, such as wildflowers or textured rocks, to show the variety of life there.

Sugestão: Your main idea is clear, but the answer contains grammatical errors and some redundancy ("every people and every person"). Improve grammar (e.g., "slow-paced life of the people living there") and add a supporting reason or an example using linking words like "because" or "for example." Keep it concise and specific.

Exemplo: I prefer rural views because the scenery is calmer and less crowded. For example, I enjoy photographing quiet country roads and small farms since the slow-paced life makes scenes more peaceful and visually appealing.

Sugestão: Your response is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical mistakes (subject-verb agreement, sentence fragments). Make a clear topic sentence stating your preference or that you like both, then give specific examples and connect ideas with linking words. Correct grammar: "Views in my country vary depending on the location" and avoid fragments.

Exemplo: Views in my country vary depending on the region, so I enjoy both local and foreign scenery. For instance, at home we have beautiful coastal beaches, fertile lowlands and dramatic mountains, but I also like visiting other countries to see different landscapes and cultures.

× I love taking pictures of different views, especially when I am in the mountainside.

✓ I love taking pictures of different views, especially when I am on the mountainside.

Use 'on the mountainside' not 'in the mountainside' because people are typically located on a mountainside (surface/area) rather than inside it. Replace 'in' with 'on' to match correct preposition usage for location on a slope or mountain. Suggestion: use 'on the mountainside' or simply 'in the mountains' depending on context.

× I love the nature and how it's full of colors and full of vibrant life in many different forms.

✓ I love nature and how it is full of color and vibrant life in many different forms.

Do not use the definite article 'the' before uncountable noun 'nature' here. Use singular 'color' when speaking of color collectively, and avoid repeating 'full of'. Also replace contraction 'it's' with 'it is' for clarity if desired. Suggestion: 'I love nature and how it is full of color and vibrant life.'

× I prefer the views in the rural areas.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas.

The definite article 'the' is unnecessary before plural noun 'views' in this general preference statement. Similarly, 'the rural areas' sounds specific; use 'rural areas' for generality. Suggestion: omit 'the' when speaking generally.

× What I love the most in the rural areas are the slow paced life of every people and every person who is living in that area.

✓ What I love most about rural areas is the slow-paced life of the people who live there.

Original sentence has multiple structural problems: incorrect pluralization ('every people' is wrong), word order ('slow paced' needs a hyphen 'slow-paced' as a compound adjective), and mismatch between plural subject and verb. Rephrase to a clearer subject-verb structure: 'What I love most about rural areas is...' Use 'the people who live there' rather than 'every people' or 'every person' to sound natural. Also use singular 'is' to agree with the singular noun phrase 'What I love most'. Suggestion: keep subject-verb agreement and use natural plural nouns like 'people'.

× The views in my country varies depending on which location you are.

✓ The views in my country vary depending on which location you are in.

Subject 'The views' is plural, so the verb must be 'vary' not 'varies'. Also include the preposition 'in' at the end of the clause: 'which location you are in.' Suggestion: ensure plurality agreement and proper preposition placement.

× There are beautiful. Places in the sea, the land and even in the mountainside.

✓ There are beautiful places by the sea, on the land, and even on the mountainside.

Original has an erroneous period splitting the sentence and awkward prepositions. Combine into one sentence and use correct prepositions: 'by the sea' or 'on the coast', 'on the land' (though 'on land' may be more natural), and 'on the mountainside'. Also remove the unnecessary article before 'mountainside'. Suggestion: 'There are beautiful places by the sea, on land, and even on the mountainside.'