Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn đã rõ ràng và diễn đạt được ý thích, nhưng còn lặp từ và câu quá dài. Hãy rút ngắn câu chủ đề, tránh lặp từ (ví dụ: "I can" nhiều lần), dùng linking words ngắn gọn và thêm một chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: loại phong cảnh bạn thích chụp hoặc thiết bị bạn dùng).

Exemplo: I enjoy photographing landscapes because they capture special moments. For example, I like taking sunrise photos at the seaside with my phone; the warm light and calm water always make me feel peaceful when I look back at the images.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời có ý chính rõ ràng nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp, lặp lời và thiếu liên kết mạch lạc. Hãy sửa ngữ pháp (plural/singular: "rural areas"), loại bỏ lặp "there will be", dùng linking words như "because" và "especially" đúng vị trí, và kết thúc câu bằng một kết luận ngắn gọn.

Exemplo: I prefer views in rural areas because they often have trees and rivers that create beautiful scenery. For example, I love watching sunrises over a river: the light reflecting on the water makes the scene very peaceful.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời chứa nhiều lỗi (nhầm "fruits" thay vì "views", lặp từ, tên địa danh sai và cấu trúc câu lủng củng). Hãy trả lời trực tiếp ("I prefer views in my own country"), sửa ngữ pháp (Vietnam has, not which have), dùng ví dụ cụ thể và đúng tên địa danh (e.g., Ha Long Bay). Giữ câu ngắn gọn, tối đa 3-4 câu.

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because I'm proud of Vietnam's scenery. For example, Ha Long Bay and the terraced fields in Sapa attract many visitors with their dramatic coastlines and mountain views.

× Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because I can capture a beautiful landscape and I can see it later like a memorable moment and I can relive it when I see this picture that made me feel happy.

✓ Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because I can capture a beautiful landscape and see it later as a memorable moment, and I can relive it when I see the picture, which makes me feel happy.

The sentence uses repetitive modal verbs and inconsistent verb forms. 'I can capture... and I can see it later' is redundant; coordinate verbs can share the auxiliary so use 'and see it later'. Use 'as a memorable moment' instead of 'like a memorable moment' for clarity. Replace 'that made me feel happy' with 'which makes me feel happy' to match the present-time general truth expressed earlier and to use a non-restrictive relative clause. Suggestions: combine repeated auxiliaries, maintain consistent tense (present simple), and use appropriate relative pronoun 'which' for extra information. Grammar problem type ID:10

× I prefer views in rural area because there will be there will have a lot of trees and rivers there that make a beautiful scenery especially when the sunrise or sun sunset and I think that.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because there are a lot of trees and rivers that create a beautiful scenery, especially at sunrise or sunset.

Errors include wrong preposition/number 'rural area' should be plural 'rural areas' when speaking generally, and awkward phrasing 'there will be there will have' is ungrammatical. Use 'there are' for existence in present simple. Use 'create' (or 'make') with 'a beautiful scenery' but typically 'beautiful scenery' is uncountable so omit 'a' or say 'a beautiful scene'; here 'beautiful scenery' is fine. Use 'at sunrise or sunset' not 'when the sunrise or sun sunset'. Suggestions: use 'there are' for present existence, pluralize 'rural areas' for general preference, and use 'at sunrise/sunset' for times of day. Grammar problem type ID:11

× I prefer fruits in my own country because I'm so very I'm very proud of Vietnam, which have many beautiful destinations and stunning landscapes such as Harum Bay or Sabah. Displays attract many visitors who come to explore our coastline and mountain scenery.

✓ I prefer places in my own country because I'm very proud of Vietnam, which has many beautiful destinations and stunning landscapes such as Ha Long Bay and Sa Pa. These attract many visitors who come to explore our coastline and mountain scenery.

Multiple issues: 'I prefer fruits' is likely wrong noun; context asks about views so 'places' or 'views' fits. Repetition 'I'm so very I'm very' is redundant. 'Vietnam, which have' is wrong: 'Vietnam' is singular so use 'has'. 'Harum Bay or Sabah' are incorrect names; likely intended 'Ha Long Bay' and 'Sa Pa' (or 'Sapa'); 'Displays attract' is ungrammatical—use 'These attract' or 'They attract' referring to the destinations. Suggestions: choose the correct noun to match context, remove redundant words, ensure subject-pronoun agreement ('Vietnam has'), and use a clear demonstrative ('These') to refer back to plural noun. Grammar problem type ID:12