Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and avoid filler words (e.g., "uh"). Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Vary vocabulary (e.g., "snap photos", "scenery", "sunrise/sunset") and correct minor grammar ("take picture" → "take pictures"). Keep to 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I like taking pictures of different views. For example, I often snap photos from a bus or car when there is a beautiful sunrise or sunset because the colours look stunning. I also take photos of tall buildings when I find their architecture interesting.

Sugestão: Give a direct topic sentence (state preference), then explain with contrasting details using linking words like "while" or "whereas". Fix grammar ("which looks" → "which look") and avoid repeating words. Be specific about what you like in each setting.

Exemplo: I prefer both urban and rural views. In urban areas I enjoy the skyline and interesting architecture, whereas in rural areas I appreciate the wide open spaces and fresh greenery that feel peaceful.

Sugestão: Make the response more direct and grammatical. Start with a clear statement, then give specific reasons using linking words like "because" and "also". Avoid informal shorthand ("1st") and unnecessary repetition. Provide a concrete example of what you learn or enjoy abroad.

Exemplo: I enjoy views in both my own country and in other countries. Exploring my country helps me appreciate its landscapes and culture, and visiting other countries lets me see different scenery and learn about new traditions and architecture.

× Yes, sometimes I take pictures when I'm traveling through bus or car uh, when the view is very beautiful like sometimes when it's sunrise or sunset, which look absolutely beautiful.

✓ Yes, sometimes I take pictures when I'm traveling by bus or car, when the view is very beautiful, for example at sunrise or sunset, which looks absolutely beautiful.

Use 'by bus or car' (correct preposition and noun phrase) and remove filler 'uh'. 'Which looks' must agree with 'the view' (singular), so use singular verb 'looks'. 'Like sometimes when it's sunrise or sunset' is awkward; use 'for example at sunrise or sunset' for clarity.

× So I take take picture of those.

✓ So I take pictures of those.

Plural noun 'pictures' is needed because 'take' implies multiple images; also correct duplicated word 'take take' to single 'take'. Use plural to match context.

× Sometimes I take picture of tall buildings also.

✓ Sometimes I take pictures of tall buildings as well.

Use plural 'pictures' and natural phrase 'as well' instead of 'also' at sentence end. 'Take pictures of tall buildings' is the correct collocation.

× I prefer views in both urban areas or rural areas because in urban areas we see tall buildings which looks absolutely amazing, while in rural areas it's fresh air and greenery all around.

✓ I prefer views in both urban and rural areas because in urban areas we see tall buildings, which look absolutely amazing, while in rural areas there is fresh air and greenery all around.

Use 'both urban and rural areas' (parallel structure). 'Which look' must agree with 'tall buildings' (plural), so use 'look'. Also 'it's fresh air' is incorrect; use 'there is fresh air' to describe existence. Commas improve clarity.

× I prefer views in my own country and in other countries because in it's very important to explore our country 1st and it is also very important to visit the other countries so we can learn something new from there.

✓ I prefer views in my own country and in other countries because it is very important to explore our country first, and it is also important to visit other countries so we can learn something new from them.

Remove incorrect 'in' before 'it's' and use 'it is' rather than contraction for clarity. Use 'first' instead of '1st' and change 'the other countries' to 'other countries' (no article). Use 'from them' to refer back to countries. Also combine clauses with 'and' for proper coordination.