Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant and communicates the idea, but it is slightly repetitive and contains minor grammatical issues. To improve, start with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy (e.g., "all I do is just"), and use one or two concise supporting details with a linking word. Also correct small grammar slips (e.g., "people these days" is fine but remove extra words).

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, when I travel I usually photograph landscapes and city skylines to remember the place. Moreover, taking photos is more convenient than buying souvenirs, so I often choose pictures instead.

Sugestão: Your response answers the question but is a little unfocused and has grammatical errors and repetition. Improve by giving a direct topic sentence (e.g., "I like both, depending on my mood."), then give two contrasting specific details using linking words (e.g., "In cities...; whereas in rural areas..."). Aim for concise phrasing and avoid repeating words like "also" and "love" too often.

Exemplo: I like both urban and rural views depending on my mood. In cities, I prefer to go to high viewpoints to capture the skyline and busy streets, whereas in the countryside I enjoy photographing mountains and forests for their peaceful natural scenes.

Sugestão: Your answer conveys enthusiasm but includes informal phrasing, repetition, and some incorrect word choice (e.g., "travel freak" and "exploding" instead of "exploring"). Improve by using a clear topic sentence and two brief specific reasons, using correct vocabulary. Avoid repeating "as well" and keep sentences concise.

Exemplo: I enjoy views both in my own country and abroad. At home I appreciate familiar landscapes and cultural sites, while traveling overseas I like discovering new scenery and different architectural styles.

× Well, both, it mainly depends how do I feel.

✓ Well, both; it mainly depends on how I feel.

The original sentence uses an incorrect question word order ('how do I feel') inside a statement and omits the preposition 'on'. Use declarative word order for statements ('how I feel') and include 'depends on' which is the correct verb-preposition combination. Suggestion: use 'depends on' + noun/clause and maintain statement word order.

× I love visiting cities also and whenever I visit those cities I usually like to go on a high place so that I can experience the whole city.

✓ I also love visiting cities, and whenever I visit them I usually like to go to a high place so that I can see the whole city.

Problems: 'go on a high place' uses the wrong preposition; English uses 'go to' a place. 'Experience the whole city' is awkward for viewing; 'see' is more natural here. Also punctuation and word order improved. Suggestion: use 'go to a high place' and 'see the whole city'.

× I have city views.

✓ I get city views.

The verb 'have' is grammatically possible but unnatural here; 'get' or 'enjoy' better expresses obtaining a view. Use a verb that collocates with 'views' in this context. Suggestion: use 'get city views' or 'enjoy city views'.

× I also love to go to the mountains or rural areas where I sometimes love to look at the nature also.

✓ I also love going to the mountains or rural areas, where I sometimes like to look at nature.

Issues: 'go to the mountains or rural areas' is fine but 'love to go' vs 'love going' consistency improved. 'Look at the nature' is incorrect: we usually say 'look at nature' or 'enjoy nature'. Redundant 'also' removed and 'like' used for variety. Suggestion: use 'look at nature' or 'enjoy nature' and avoid redundant words.

× Again, I am a kind of travel freak person so there are so many worth seeing places in my own country.

✓ Again, I am kind of a travel freak, so there are many worth-seeing places in my own country.

Problems: word order 'a kind of travel freak person' is awkward; 'kind of a travel freak' or 'a bit of a travel freak' is natural. 'so there are so many' is repetitive; use 'many' only. 'worth seeing places' should be hyphenated as 'worth-seeing' before a noun. Suggestion: reorder phrase and hyphenate 'worth-seeing'.

× Similarly, I have interest in exploding different parts of the world as well and I have visited quite a few countries as well so far.

✓ Similarly, I am interested in exploring different parts of the world, and I have visited quite a few countries so far.

Error: 'have interest in exploding' is incorrect word choice and form. Use the adjective 'interested in' + gerund 'exploring'. 'Exploding' is wrong meaning. Also remove redundant 'as well'. Suggestion: use 'interested in exploring'.

× So I can say I love seeing the views in both my own country and outside the country as well.

✓ So I can say I love seeing views both in my own country and in other countries.

Issues: 'in both my own country and outside the country' is wordy and uses inconsistent prepositions. Better: 'views both in my own country and in other countries.' Remove redundant 'the' before 'views' and redundant 'as well'. Suggestion: use parallel structure with 'in' before both nouns.