Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and fluent: start with a clear topic sentence, reduce filler words (uh, umm), and add one specific example with a linking phrase. Aim for 2–4 sentences total. Also replace repetitive words (images/pictures) with varied vocabulary like 'photos' or 'shots'.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views. For example, I often take landscape photos at sunset because the warm light creates dramatic colours, and I sometimes experiment with unusual angles to make ordinary scenes look more interesting.

Sugestão: Give a direct topic sentence that answers the choice, then support it with a reason and a contrasting point using linking words (however, although). Be specific about what you like in each setting. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: I enjoy both urban and rural views, but I usually prefer rural scenery because it feels peaceful and offers wide, natural landscapes. However, I also appreciate urban views for their striking architecture and lively street scenes when I travel abroad.

Sugestão: Answer directly and clearly: choose one preference or say you like both with reasons. Remove hesitations and give specific examples (places, costs, cultural interest). Use linking words (because, while, although) and keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: It depends, but I generally prefer views in my own country because I feel a stronger connection to familiar places and visiting them is cheaper. While abroad I enjoy unique landmarks and different cultures, I usually travel overseas less often due to time and cost constraints.

× I love taking images of different views, uh, such as, uh, sometimes I take pictures of landscapes, uh, sometime I take pictures from different angles and it gives me umm, a, a relaxation and it's like really.

✓ I love taking images of different views. For example, I sometimes take pictures of landscapes or from different angles, and it gives me relaxation; it feels really calming.

Errors: run-on sentence, inconsistent use of 'sometimes' and 'sometime', and awkward phrase 'a relaxation'. Correction breaks into clearer clauses and uses 'sometimes' (adverb) consistently and the noun 'relaxation' without an article where a general noun is intended; 'it feels really calming' is a natural expression. Suggestion: split long sentences, use 'sometimes' for frequency, and choose natural collocations (feel calming).

× Well, I like views in both local and urban areas because sometimes I feel more connected to my local places and it's much easier and cheaper to explore local views.

✓ Well, I like views in both rural and urban areas because sometimes I feel more connected to my local places, and it's much easier and cheaper to explore local views.

Error: 'local' vs 'rural' — context asks urban or rural; using 'local and urban' is incorrect pairing. Correction replaces 'local' with 'rural' to match the question. Suggestion: make sure your prepositions and noun choices match the question vocabulary; use 'rural' for countryside areas and 'urban' for cities.

× But sometimes I prefer to explore foreign countries.

✓ But sometimes I prefer exploring foreign countries.

Error: slight awkwardness with infinitive 'to explore' after 'prefer' — both forms can be correct, but 'prefer' followed by gerund is more natural when speaking generally. Suggestion: use 'prefer doing' for general preferences.

× Well, it depends on time.

✓ Well, it depends on the time.

Error: missing definite article; 'depends on time' is unnatural. Correction adds 'the' to indicate specific context. Suggestion: use 'it depends on the time' or better 'it depends on the situation' to sound natural.

× Sometimes I prefer to umm I prefer views in my own home country because I feel more connected to places and it's really affordable to visit UMM in local umm hometown as compared to uh cities.

✓ Sometimes I prefer views in my own country because I feel more connected to those places, and it's much more affordable to visit my local hometown compared to cities.

Errors: repetition 'prefer to... I prefer', unnecessary filler 'UMM', awkward word order 'in local... hometown', and comparative phrasing. Correction removes repetition and fillers, uses 'much more affordable' and 'compared to cities'. Suggestion: avoid fillers, don't repeat verbs, and use clear comparative structures.

× Sometimes I like to umm prefer.

✓ Sometimes I like to, um, prefer exploring places abroad.

Error: incomplete sentence — 'like to prefer' is ungrammatical and lacks an object. Correction completes the thought by specifying what is preferred. Suggestion: always provide a clear object or clause after verbs like 'prefer' or 'like to' and avoid redundant verb combinations.