Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and use linking words for clarity. Also correct verb forms and singular/plural agreement. For example, say you enjoy photographing scenes, mention why, and give one brief detail about technique.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photographs of different views. I like experimenting with different angles and poses because it helps me capture unique perspectives, and I often try close-ups as well as wide shots to show both details and context.

Sugestão: Give a clear direct answer first (rural or urban), then add specific reasons using linking words. Avoid filler words and correct vocabulary mistakes ("ruler" -> "rural"). Keep to two or three supporting details max.

Exemplo: I prefer rural views. For example, in the morning the air is fresh and birds are singing, and there are trees and animals that create a peaceful, picturesque scene ideal for photography.

Sugestão: Provide a clearer opinion rather than "it depends." State a preference or explain conditions, use connectors (however, also), and avoid fillers. Be specific about what is different abroad (e.g., landscapes, architecture) and give one example.

Exemplo: I appreciate views both at home and abroad, but I prefer traveling for scenery because other countries often offer different landscapes, such as dramatic mountain ranges or exotic vegetation, which provide fresh inspiration for photography.

× Whenever I used to take picture, I take from it from different angles and I make different kind of pose and I like the pictures from different views.

✓ Whenever I used to take pictures, I took them from different angles, made different kinds of poses, and I liked the pictures from different views.

This sentence mixes past habitual 'used to' with present tense verbs, and has noun form errors. Use plural 'pictures' and plural 'poses'. After 'used to' describe past habitual actions using past tense verbs (took, made, liked). Also replace 'take from it from' with 'took them from'. Grammar problem type's ID:9

× If I talk about the views I like the more the ruler ones because I belong to a rural area and when it's a morning it gives a great uh view as birds are chirping in the sky and the air is fresh.

✓ If I talk about views, I prefer the rural ones because I come from a rural area, and in the morning they give a great view: birds chirp in the sky and the air is fresh.

Errors include word choice ('ruler' -> 'rural'), awkward comparative phrasing ('I like the more the rural ones' -> 'I prefer the rural ones'), wrong pronoun/verb agreement and article use ('it's a morning' -> 'in the morning'), and tense consistency. Use present simple for habitual preferences (prefer, come), and simple present to describe habitual morning scenes (give, chirp). Grammar problem type's ID:13

× Also the trees and some animals are roaming.

✓ Also, the trees and some animals are roaming around.

The original sentence is grammatically acceptable but sounds incomplete; adding 'around' clarifies the action. A comma after 'Also' improves flow. The verb 'roaming' is fine as present participle describing ongoing scene. Grammar problem type's ID:12

× It depends on time.

✓ It depends on the timing or It depends on the time of year or It depends on the situation.

'It depends on time' is vague and not idiomatic. Provide clearer noun phrase: 'depends on timing','depends on the time of year', or 'depends on the situation' depending on intended meaning. Structure needs a clearer object for 'depends on'. Grammar problem type's ID:26

× Sometimes in our own country, the views are very nice, but when we travel across the, uh, other countries, uh, the views are different, The trees, the flowers, and also some mountains, uh, that kind of views are also very nice to view.

✓ Sometimes in our own country the views are very nice, but when we travel to other countries the views are different: the trees, the flowers, and some mountains are also very nice to see.

Issues: unnecessary filler words ('uh'), incorrect preposition 'travel across the other countries' -> 'travel to other countries', capitalization error after comma, and awkward phrase 'that kind of views are also very nice to view'. Use 'see' instead of repeated 'view', and simplify list with parallel structure. Also remove comma before 'the views' and unnecessary articles. Grammar problem type's ID:26