Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve clarity and grammar, make answer more concise and natural, and add a specific detail or example. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition (e.g., "remember" used twice).

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, I often photograph sunsets at the river near my home because the colors change quickly and each photo helps me remember the exact moment. Also, I sometimes print my best shots to display at home, which brings back pleasant memories.

Sugestão: Correct sentence structure and verb forms, and make the comparison clearer and more fluent. Use linking words like "because" and "whereas" and give one specific example to support your preference. Avoid awkward phrasing like "went through the second one."

Exemplo: I prefer rural views because they feature natural elements such as flowers, fields and trees that I find calming. For example, I like photographing wildflowers in the countryside where there is little traffic noise, whereas city scenes often feel crowded and noisy.

Sugestão: Fix tenses and phrasing, break into shorter sentences, and add a clear reason and a future plan. Use linking words like "because" and "since," and provide a specific example of a place you want to photograph. Avoid run-on sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer taking photos in my own country because I haven't traveled abroad yet and China has many diverse landscapes to explore. For instance, I hope to visit the Guilin region to photograph its karst mountains and rivers when I have time.

× Yeah, I'm a big fan of taking photos. When I look back to my photos, I will remember that when I take these views and it will let me remember this fantastic time.

✓ Yeah, I'm a big fan of taking photos. When I look back at my photos, I remember taking these shots and they remind me of that fantastic time.

Issues: incorrect preposition 'look back to' (should be 'look back at') and inconsistent tense use ('will remember' and 'take' should be in present/past to match habitual or recollecting meaning). Also 'these views' is better as 'these shots' and 'it will let me remember' is awkward; use 'they remind me'. Suggestion: use 'look back at' and keep verbs in present simple for general recollection or past simple for specific events (e.g., 'I remembered taking'). Grammar problem type ID:6

× From my perspective, I went through the second one, I prefer the beautiful flowers, grass and other plants that be grown in the rural areas.

✓ From my perspective, I prefer the beautiful flowers, grass and other plants that grow in rural areas.

Errors: 'went through the second one' is unclear and unnecessary; remove it. 'that be grown' is incorrect verb form and passive construction; use active 'that grow'. Also drop 'the' before 'rural areas' when speaking generally. Suggestion: use present simple 'grow' for habitual/state descriptions and omit unclear phrases. Grammar problem type ID:11

× And in urban areas there are a lot of cars and other noises and make you can't concentrate.

✓ And in urban areas there are a lot of cars and other noises, which make it hard for you to concentrate.

Problems: sentence structure and missing subject for 'make' leading to confusion. 'Other noises' is fine but needs a relative clause 'which make' and 'you can't concentrate' should be rephrased to 'it is hard for you to concentrate' or 'you can't concentrate' after proper connector. Suggestion: use a relative clause and correct object/structure: 'which make it hard for you to concentrate.' Grammar problem type ID:26

× To be honest I haven't go to other countries so I will take photos of my own country and because of China is very huge and I have a lot of place I didn't go so if I have time and will go another places to take beautiful photos about my country.

✓ To be honest, I haven't gone to other countries, so I take photos in my own country. China is very large and there are many places I haven't visited, so if I have time I will go to other places to take beautiful photos of my country.

Multiple errors: 'haven't go' should be present perfect 'haven't gone'; tense consistency between present and future needed. 'I will take photos of my own country' is awkward when speaking currently; 'I take photos in my own country' or 'I usually take photos in my own country' works. 'China is very huge' better as 'China is very large'. 'a lot of place I didn't go' should be 'many places I haven't visited' (present perfect). 'will go another places' should be 'will go to other places'. 'take beautiful photos about my country' should be 'take beautiful photos of my country'. Suggestions: use correct participle 'gone', use present perfect for experiences, and maintain consistent tense; use preposition 'to' with 'go to places' and 'photos of' for subjects. Grammar problem type ID:6