Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be clear and natural: start with a direct topic sentence, avoid repetition and pronunciation errors, and complete your sentences. Use one or two specific supporting details and a linking word. Also correct vocabulary mistakes (e.g., "steak" → "I" or remove).

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I often take photos when I travel because I enjoy capturing different landscapes. For example, I like driving along the beach and photographing the sea and sky from the car window, which helps me relax and remember the trip.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence, reduce hesitation, and use linking words to organize supporting details. Provide specific examples and avoid repeating words. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer rural areas. I find natural scenery more appealing because of the mix of trees, lakes and wildflowers. For example, a clear sunrise over a lake or a colorful sunset in the countryside creates a very relaxing atmosphere for me.

Sugestão: Answer directly and correct wording and grammar. Use a linking phrase to explain reasons and give a specific example of what you photograph abroad. Finish your sentence with a clear object (e.g., buildings, streets).

Exemplo: I prefer views in other countries because I am used to the scenery at home and it feels less exciting. For example, when I visit a new city I enjoy photographing unique architecture, such as historic churches or colorful street scenes, which are different from what I see at home.

× Yeah, I do really like steak likes to take photos.

✓ Yeah, I really like to take photos.

The sentence uses 'steak' and 'likes' incorrectly; 'steak' is a noun unrelated to the context and 'likes' is a third-person singular verb but the subject is 'I'. Replace with 'I really like to take photos' to use the correct pronoun and verb form. Suggestion: use subject 'I' with base verb 'like' for first person present ('I like').

× For example, I likes to drive along the beach, so I took the I took the photos of scenery from the car windows.

✓ For example, I like to drive along the beach, so I took photos of the scenery from the car window.

'I likes' incorrectly uses third-person singular '-s' with the first-person subject 'I' (use 'I like'). Also the original repeats 'I took' and uses plural 'photos of scenery' awkwardly; 'photos of the scenery' and 'car window' are clearer. Suggestion: do not add '-s' to verbs after 'I', avoid repetition, and use articles ('the') before 'scenery' for specificity.

× This just a relaxing and.

✓ This is just relaxing.

The sentence fragment lacks a main verb and ends abruptly. Adding the verb 'is' forms a complete clause ('This is just relaxing'). Also 'and' is unnecessary without a following element. Suggestion: ensure each sentence has a subject and verb and complete thought.

× Umm, in my case, I prefer uh, rural area because the beauty, the nature is more beautiful and for example, like the mixture of trees, lake and flowers and a good sunset and sunrise gives me, gives me relaxing, uh, atmosphere and very.

✓ Umm, in my case, I prefer rural areas because the natural beauty is greater; for example, the mix of trees, lakes, and flowers and a good sunset or sunrise gives me a relaxing atmosphere.

'Rural area' should be plural 'rural areas' to match general preference. 'The nature is more beautiful' is awkward; use 'natural beauty is greater'. 'Mixture of trees, lake and flowers' needs plural agreement ('lakes') and commas. 'Gives me, gives me relaxing, uh, atmosphere and very' is repetitive and incomplete; simplify to 'gives me a relaxing atmosphere'. Suggestion: use plural nouns for general statements, avoid repetition, and include articles ('a') before singular countable nouns like 'atmosphere'.

× I prefer a bill I abuse in other country 'cause I get used to the scenery of my own country, so no longer exciting for me.

✓ I prefer being abroad in other countries because I am used to the scenery of my own country, so it is no longer exciting for me.

The phrase 'a bill I abuse' is unintelligible and likely a mispronunciation; replace with 'being abroad'. 'In other country' needs plural or article: 'in other countries' or 'in another country'; here 'in other countries' fits context. 'I get used to' should be present perfect or present: 'I am used to' to indicate a current state. Add 'it is' before 'no longer exciting' to form a complete clause. Suggestion: use 'being abroad' or 'in other countries', use 'I am used to' for habituation, and include subject for adjectives like 'it is no longer exciting'.

× So whenever I travel abroad I enjoy taking the architecture of.

✓ So whenever I travel abroad, I enjoy photographing architecture.

'Taking the architecture of' is ungrammatical; the correct collocation is 'photographing architecture' or 'taking photos of buildings/architecture'. Also the sentence lacks a proper object; 'architecture' without 'photographing' or 'photos of' is incomplete. Suggestion: use correct verb phrases ('photograph architecture' or 'take photos of buildings') and include necessary prepositions or verb forms.