Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Give a slightly longer, natural response with a clear topic sentence and one supporting detail. Avoid very short answers; add a reason or brief example. Use linking words if you expand.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because it helps me remember places and moods. For example, I like photographing sunsets at the beach since the colours change quickly and each shot feels unique.

Sugestão: Improve grammatical accuracy and coherence. Start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give specific supporting details using linking words (for example, because, such as). Avoid mixed or contradictory terms (e.g. "urban" vs "village, river").

Exemplo: I prefer views in urban areas because cities offer a variety of scenes and activities. For example, I enjoy photographing street markets, modern architecture and riverside promenades, which provide diverse colours and human interactions.

Sugestão: Make your answer grammatically correct and complete. State your preference clearly, give a reason and a brief example. Use correct tense and avoid unfinished sentences. Include linking words such as because and for example.

Exemplo: I prefer views in other countries because they offer landscapes and cultures I haven't experienced at home. For example, when I visited Japan I was amazed by the contrast between tranquil temples and neon cityscapes, which inspired many of my photos.

× Well, maybe I would like to say that I prefer whilst in urban areas because in urban there are many different kind of people and beautiful village, river and mountains.

✓ Well, maybe I would like to say that I prefer urban areas because in urban areas there are many different kinds of people and beautiful villages, rivers, and mountains.

Problems: incorrect conjunction/preposition 'whilst' is unnecessary and unnatural here; missing article/plural forms and incorrect noun forms. Corrections: remove 'whilst' to make the sentence natural; use 'in urban areas' consistently; 'different kind of' should be 'different kinds of' or 'different kinds of people'; 'village, river and mountains' should be pluralized and parallel: 'villages, rivers, and mountains'. Suggestion: keep consistent pluralization and parallel structure and avoid unnecessary archaic connectors like 'whilst' in this context.

× Well, I prefer we will in other countries because I think in other countries there are so many different views that I had had not seen before.

✓ Well, I prefer to travel to other countries because I think there are so many different views in other countries that I have not seen before.

Problems: incorrect use of future construction 'we will' after 'prefer', awkward verb choice; incorrect past perfect 'had had' and negative order 'had had not seen' is wrong. Corrections: use correct verb phrase 'prefer to travel to other countries' to express preference; replace 'that I had had not seen before' with present perfect 'that I have not seen before' to indicate experiences up to now. Suggestion: after 'prefer' use an infinitive or noun phrase (prefer to do something); use present perfect for experiences up to the present rather than past perfect unless referring to an earlier past time.

× So I'm really.

✓ So I'm really interested.

Problems: sentence fragment 'So I'm really.' lacks a complement and is incomplete. Correction: add an adjective or clause that completes the thought, e.g., 'interested' or 'excited'. Suggestion: always ensure sentences contain both subject and predicate and complete the idea; avoid leaving trailing unfinished sentences.