Part 1
Examinador
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Candidato
Yes, certainly, I always do that. I like taking pictures of the splendid buildings and I like take pictures of myself. Yes, I like selfie and with my friend.
Examinador
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Candidato
Actually, I prefer views in rural areas because it's more natural. Yes, it's more natural and is has always has uh, green grass, beautiful flowers and uh, house.
Examinador
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Candidato
I think I prefer views in my own country because I'm I'm came from China and it's traditional culture is deep inside of my heart. The AR architecture of our buildings and the people.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Pontuação: 68.0Sugestão: 注意语法和句子流畅性,避免重复。回答时先用一句主题句直接回应问题,然后用一到两句话具体说明喜好并举例。可以把“selfie”表述得更自然,并修正动词形式和冠词错误。
Exemplo: Yes, I do. I especially enjoy photographing impressive buildings and interesting city scenes. I also like taking selfies with friends when we visit new places, because those photos capture memories and the atmosphere of the trip.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Pontuação: 62.0Sugestão: 提高连贯性并修正语法错误,避免口头语“uh”。先给出明确答案,然后用清晰有条理的细节支持,如具体景物或感受,注意动词和冠词形式。
Exemplo: I prefer rural views because they feel more peaceful and natural. For example, I enjoy scenes with green fields, colourful flowers and traditional houses, which make me feel relaxed and connected to nature.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Pontuação: 58.0Sugestão: 纠正语法和表达错误,避免重复词和不完整句子。先直接回答,再说明原因并举具体例子(如传统建筑、节日或风俗),不要使用不明确的缩写(如“AR”)。
Exemplo: I prefer the views in my own country because I feel a strong connection to its traditions and landscapes. For instance, I appreciate the traditional Chinese architecture and local festivals, which reflect our history and community spirit.
× I like taking pictures of the splendid buildings and I like take pictures of myself.
✓ I like taking pictures of the splendid buildings and I like taking pictures of myself.
句中兩次表達“喜歡”時,應保持結構一致。英語中動詞 like 後面接動名詞(-ing)表示習慣性或喜好,因此第二處應為 taking 而不是不定式 take。建議多練習 like + 動名詞的用法。 (對應類型ID:8)
× Yes, I like selfie and with my friend.
✓ Yes, I like taking selfies with my friends.
原句中 selfie 是名詞,但單數搭配不定詞片語不自然,且缺少動詞。正確表達喜歡“自拍”和“與朋友一起”應使用動名詞短語 taking selfies,並根據語境將 friend 改為複數或明確數量。建議使用 taking selfies with my friends。 (對應類型ID:12)
× Actually, I prefer views in rural areas because it's more natural.
✓ Actually, I prefer views in rural areas because they are more natural.
原句中先提到複數名詞 views,之後用 it 的單數形式不一致,且形容詞 more natural 應修飾複數主語。應使用 they are 或 the views are。建議注意代詞與先行詞在數上的一致。 (對應類型ID:6)
× Yes, it's more natural and is has always has uh, green grass, beautiful flowers and uh, house.
✓ Yes, they're more natural and there has always been green grass, beautiful flowers, and houses.
句中存在多處錯誤:1) 與上文 views 對應應用複數代詞 they,而非 it;2) “is has always has” 是重複和形態錯誤,表達“過去到現在一直有”應用 there has always been;3) 列舉項目如 house 應用複數 houses 或加冠詞。建議理清主語,使用正確的現在完成式結構 there has always been + 單數/複數名詞。 (對應類型ID:12)
× The AR architecture of our buildings and the people.
✓ The architecture and the people.
原句不完整且 AR 可能為誤寫或不必要縮寫,且表達應簡潔明確。若要說“我們建築的風格和人們”,可直接用 The architecture of our buildings and the people(更自然為 The architecture and the people)。注意名詞搭配和數的一致,並避免不明縮寫。 (對應類型ID:1)
× I think I prefer views in my own country because I'm I'm came from China and it's traditional culture is deep inside of my heart.
✓ I think I prefer views in my own country because I came from China and its traditional culture is deep in my heart.
原句中 I'm came 結構錯誤:從中國來應用簡單過去 I came from China,或現在完成 I have come from China,但不能用主系表結合過去分詞。另有所有格錯誤:it's 應為 its 表示“它的”。最後常用短語為 deep in my heart 而非 deep inside of my heart。建議學習過去式與現在完成式的正確用法及 its/it's 區別。 (對應類型ID:9)