Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more fluent and organised: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (uh, umm), use correct verbs and nouns, and give one or two specific details. Keep responses concise (max 5 sentences) and use linking words for coherence.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views when I travel. For example, I often photograph breathtaking landscapes like mountains or seascapes, and I also capture interesting scenes with people to show local culture. Because photos help me remember places, I usually take several shots at different times of day to get the best light.

Sugestão: Answer directly, correct grammar, and provide a clear reason with a specific example. Use linking words (because, so) and avoid repetition and fillers.

Exemplo: I prefer views in rural areas rather than urban ones because there is much more green space and quiet. For example, I enjoy photographing rice fields and forests where the natural light and open space create peaceful compositions.

Sugestão: Make one clear choice or explain balance with specific examples. Use correct grammar (every country has, views), avoid unfinished sentences, and complete your example by contrasting with another country. Keep to 2–4 sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer both views in my own country and abroad because each place offers something unique. For instance, in my country I love photographing Borobudur for its ancient architecture and morning mist, while in Japan I enjoy capturing serene temple gardens and cherry blossoms for their delicate colours.

× Yes, of course I like uh taking picture when I, uh, traveling, for example, I pack a breathtaking fuse umm, also, uh, some people that attract my attention. Besides that, I also attack picture for.

✓ Yes, of course I like taking pictures when I travel. For example, I take photos of breathtaking views and also of people who attract my attention. Besides that, I also take pictures for memories.

Errors: incorrect use of noun form 'picture' (singular) after like + -ing; incorrect verb forms 'traveling' used with auxiliary fillers and 'pack a breathtaking fuse' and 'attack picture' are wrong verbs/phrases; run-on sentence. Corrections: use the gerund phrase 'taking pictures' (plural) because 'pictures' is countable and plural when speaking generally; use simple present 'travel' after 'when' for habitual action; replace incorrect verbs with 'take photos/take pictures' and the noun 'views' and 'people who attract my attention'; add 'for memories' to clarify intent. Suggestion: break long run-on sentences into shorter sentences, use correct collocations (take pictures, breathtaking views), and keep verb forms consistent (simple present for habits).

× Of course, I prefer a few in the rural area compared rather than urban area because there are so many green space that I can, uh, see in the rural area and also I like.

✓ Of course, I prefer rural areas rather than urban areas because there is so much green space to see in rural areas, and I like the quieter environment.

Errors: wrong phrase 'a few in the rural area compared rather than urban area' and incorrect prepositions/articles; 'green space' should be uncountable 'green space' or 'green spaces' and subject-verb agreement needs fixing. Corrections: use 'prefer rural areas rather than urban areas' and 'there is so much green space to see' which is the correct preposition and quantifier usage for uncountable nouns; repeat 'in rural areas' or use 'there' for clarity. Suggestion: use correct prepositions 'in' and comparative structure 'prefer X rather than Y'; use 'so much' for uncountable nouns and ensure plural forms for 'areas'.

× I think that every country have their unique, umm, few. So I prefer uh, both my country and also another country.

✓ I think that every country has its unique features. So I prefer both my country and other countries.

Errors: 'every country have' is incorrect subject-verb agreement; 'every' with a singular noun requires singular verb 'has'. 'Their' is a plural possessive; for singular 'every country' use 'its'. 'few' is incorrect word; 'features' or 'views' fits context. Corrections: change to 'has its unique features' and 'both my country and other countries' for clarity. Suggestion: remember 'every' takes singular verb and singular possessive ('its'), and choose the correct noun ('views/features') for meaning.

× For example, in my country I can see umm Borobudur at uh, interesting place that I can see. However, when I go to Japan.

✓ For example, in my country I can see Borobudur, which is an interesting place to visit. However, when I went to Japan, I also enjoyed many different sights.

Errors: sentence fragments and repetition: 'an interesting place that I can see' is awkward and 'However, when I go to Japan.' is a fragment lacking a main clause. Corrections: make a relative clause 'which is an interesting place to visit' and complete the contrasting clause by adding what happened when visiting Japan. Suggestion: avoid sentence fragments by ensuring each sentence has a subject and verb; use clearer relative clauses and maintain consistent tense (simple past or present) according to context.