Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 文法と表現を自然にし、冗長な部分を削ることに注意してください。具体的には、動詞の形（"to taking" → "taking" または "to take"）を訂正し、同じ意味の語の繰り返しを避けて簡潔に答える練習をしましょう。また、主題文（topic sentence）をはっきり述べ、補足で具体的な例（桜や空）を短く説明すると良いです。さらに、接続詞（for example, and, so）を適切に使って文のつながりを自然に見せましょう。発音や流暢さも改善の余地があります。

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because it relaxes me. For example, I often photograph natural scenes such as cherry blossoms and dramatic skies, especially in spring when the colors are vivid.

Sugestão: 語彙の選択と文法（単数・複数、時制、冠詞）に注意してください。"bills"は誤りで"buildings"を使うべきです。また、"in night"→"at night"、"it was"→現在の好みを述べるなら現在形の"they are"に修正しましょう。一文目で明確に好みを示し、その後に理由を1〜2文で簡潔に述べる練習をしてください。接続語（because, so, and）を自然に使い流れを良くしましょう。

Exemplo: I prefer views in urban areas because I love city skylines. At night, the lights on the buildings create a beautiful atmosphere, and the variety of illuminated towers and streets is really impressive.

Sugestão: 時制と語順、単語の選択を直しましょう。"I like preferred"は誤りで、単純に"I prefer"または"I like"を使います。情報は具体的に述べ、"so on"のような曖昧な表現は避けましょう。例として特定の場所や季節（例：shrines in Kyoto, coastal views in Okinawa）を挙げると説得力が増します。簡潔な主題文に続けて具体例を1〜2つ述べ、理由を示す練習をしてください。

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country. For example, Japan has many beautiful shrines, like those in Kyoto, and stunning coastal scenery such as the blue waters of Okinawa, which I find very appealing.

× I like taking pictures of different views because it makes me happy to taking pictures and I like views of nature so I often take pictures of nature like cherry blossom or beautiful sky.

✓ I like taking pictures of different views because taking pictures makes me happy, and I like natural views, so I often take pictures of things like cherry blossoms or a beautiful sky.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'to taking pictures' after 'happy'; after 'happy' a noun or gerund phrase is required, so 'taking pictures' is correct. Also the sentence needs conjunctions and articles: 'cherry blossom' should be plural 'cherry blossoms' or 'a cherry blossom' depending on meaning; 'beautiful sky' is clearer as 'a beautiful sky'. Improve fluency by removing repetition and using commas and 'and' to connect clauses. Suggested improvement: use 'taking pictures makes me happy' and 'things like cherry blossoms or a beautiful sky'. Please note gerund usage and article use.

× I like bills in urban area. It's because in night I can see the lights of buildings and it was very beautiful and also many.

✓ I like buildings in urban areas. It's because at night I can see the lights of the buildings, which are very beautiful and numerous.

Several adjective/adverb errors: 'bills' is incorrect — the intended noun is 'buildings'. 'Urban area' requires plural or article: 'urban areas' or 'an urban area'. Time expression should be 'at night' not 'in night'. The phrase 'it was very beautiful and also many' is ungrammatical; use a relative clause 'which are very beautiful and numerous' to describe the lights or buildings. Also maintain present tense for habitual preference.

× I like preferred views in my country. I'm from Japan so Japan has many beautiful shrine and also sea and blue sky and so on.

✓ I prefer views in my country. I'm from Japan, so Japan has many beautiful shrines, as well as seas and blue skies, and so on.

The sentence mixes tenses and uses incorrect verb form 'like preferred'; use present simple 'prefer' to state a general preference. Nouns need plural or articles: 'shrine' -> 'shrines', 'sea' -> 'seas' or 'the sea', 'blue sky' -> 'blue skies'. Also add commas for clarity. Keep consistent present tense when stating preferences.