Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cần cải thiện sự rõ ràng và cấu trúc câu. Tránh lặp từ và cụm từ thừa (ví dụ "in my opinion" nhiều lần), hoàn thành ý với lý do cụ thể và thêm chi tiết ngắn gọn. Nên dùng 2–3 câu: câu chủ đề trả lời trực tiếp, câu bổ sung với lý do hoặc ví dụ. Chú ý phát âm và ngắt nghỉ để ý tưởng rõ ràng hơn.

Exemplo: Yes, I do enjoy taking pictures of different views. I find photography relaxing and it helps me notice small details in nature and architecture. For example, I like capturing sunrise scenes because the light makes ordinary places look dramatic and beautiful.

Sugestão: Cần sửa ngữ pháp và trôi chảy. Tránh dùng từ ngập ngừng như "uh" và lặp ý ("rural areas" nhiều lần). Nên có câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó giải thích cụ thể lý do và đưa ví dụ ngắn. Chú ý chia động từ đúng (e.g. "it makes me feel").

Exemplo: I prefer rural areas because the countryside feels peaceful and green. The abundance of trees and open fields helps me relax, especially when I go for long walks or take photos at sunset.

Sugestão: Cần sắp xếp câu rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp (ví dụ "my country has", "there aren't many buildings") và dùng chi tiết cụ thể, không mơ hồ. Tránh mâu thuẫn ("in another country" dùng sai). Nên nêu lý do cụ thể và có thể so sánh ngắn giữa hai lựa chọn.

Exemplo: I prefer the views in my own country because many areas are still unspoiled and scenic. For instance, there are forests, wide skies and few tall buildings, which makes the landscapes more natural compared with crowded cities abroad.

× So in my opinion so my personality I really like to take pictures of different views because as my in my opinion I think taking picture will have will help me to.

✓ In my opinion, I really like taking pictures of different views because I think taking pictures helps me.

The original sentence has redundant phrases ('so in my opinion', 'as my in my opinion'), incorrect verb forms ('taking picture'), and repeated modal verbs ('will have will help me to'). Simplify the structure by stating the opinion once, use the gerund 'taking pictures' after 'like', and use present simple 'helps' to express a general truth. Suggestion: remove redundancies, use correct plural 'pictures', and use 'helps me' for clarity.

× I guess I prefer rural areas more because I really love the countryside of the rural areas.

✓ I guess I prefer rural areas because I really love the countryside.

'The countryside of the rural areas' is redundant and awkward. Also using 'more' with 'prefer' is unnecessary. Use 'the countryside' to refer generally to rural scenery. Suggestion: avoid redundancy and use concise noun phrases.

× It has a lot of uh trees and it's make me feel relaxed when I saw it.

✓ It has a lot of trees and it makes me feel relaxed when I see it.

Use 'has' correctly for possession. 'It's make' should be 'it makes' (third person singular present). Use present simple 'see' to describe a habitual reaction rather than past 'saw'. Remove filler 'uh'. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement and consistent tense (present simple) for general statements.

× Well, I think I prefer views in my own country more than in other country because in my country has a lot of sceneries that really beautiful.

✓ Well, I think I prefer views in my own country more than in other countries because my country has many beautiful scenery spots.

Use plural 'other countries' when comparing, and include a subject for the clause ('my country has...'). 'Sceneries' is not natural; use 'scenery' or 'scenery spots' and place adjectives correctly ('beautiful scenery' or 'many beautiful places'). Suggestion: ensure correct noun forms and include the subject in clauses.

× It's has a lot of trees, the sky is beautiful and it's don't have a lot of building in another country.

✓ It has a lot of trees, the sky is beautiful, and there aren't many buildings in my country.

'It's has' is ungrammatical; use 'it has' or 'there are'. 'It's don't have' is incorrect; use 'there aren't' or 'it doesn't have'. 'Building' should be plural 'buildings'. Also clarify reference: likely meant 'in my country' rather than 'in another country'. Suggestion: fix auxiliary verbs and use plural nouns when needed.

× So I really love it.

✓ So I really love it.

Sentence is grammatically correct but is short; no change needed. It functions as an appropriate concluding remark. Suggestion: keep as is or expand to explain why if desired.