Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Сократите паузы и заполнители («uh», «um»), исправьте артикли и согласование, делайте предложение более связным и точным. Начните с чёткого топик‑предложения, затем добавьте 1–2 конкретных деталей и пример. Работайте над произношением слов и использованием правильных артиклей (a/an/the).

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing natural scenes. For example, I often take pictures of trees, flowers and dramatic skies because they change with the seasons and make striking images. I also try different angles and lighting to capture their beauty.

Sugestão: Исправьте грамматические ошибки (артикли, согласование глаголов), уберите повторы и используйте связующие слова для ясности. Сформулируйте прямо: назовите предпочтение, приведите 1–2 конкретных причин и завершите коротким заключением.

Exemplo: I prefer views in urban areas because cities offer a variety of modern architecture and vibrant public spaces. For instance, new museums, plazas and skyscrapers provide interesting shapes and colors for photos. Therefore, I find urban scenes more inspiring.

Sugestão: Уберите заполнители и уточните причину более естественно; избегайте абсолютных утверждений («I have seen everything»). Дайте конкретный пример того, что именно вы хотите увидеть за границей, и завершите фразой о вашем желании или плане.

Exemplo: I prefer views in other countries because I want to discover different landscapes and cultures. For example, I would love to photograph coastal villages in Portugal or mountain terraces in Asia, which are quite different from scenes at home. Traveling abroad lets me broaden my perspective and find new creative ideas.

× Yes, I like taking pictures of different views, like an nature, for example, uh, trees and flowers and a sky. And sometimes we can see a lot of uh, beauty of nature and we want to take a picture and we do it.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views, like nature, for example, trees and flowers and the sky. And sometimes we can see a lot of the beauty of nature and we want to take a picture, so we do it.

The student used incorrect articles: 'an nature' and 'a sky' are wrong. Use zero article with uncountable noun 'nature' and definite article 'the' with 'sky' when referring to the general sky. Also 'beauty of nature' requires 'the' to specify that beauty. Suggestion: omit the article before uncountable nouns (nature) and use 'the' when referring to a specific or general known item (the sky, the beauty of nature). Also add a linking word 'so' for clarity.

× I prefer a views in urban areas than rural areas because urban areas has a lot of modern things, especially buildings and new some kind of touristic zones and a rural areas doesn't doesn't don't have.

✓ I prefer views in urban areas to rural areas because urban areas have a lot of modern things, especially buildings and new tourist zones, and rural areas don't have them.

Errors: 'a views' mixes singular article with plural noun; use no article and plural noun 'views'. Use 'prefer A to B' not 'prefer A than B'. Subject-verb agreement: 'urban areas has' should be 'urban areas have' (plural subject). 'new some kind of touristic zones' is awkward; correct to 'new tourist zones'. 'a rural areas doesn't doesn't don't have' has extra articles and repeated auxiliaries; correct to 'rural areas don't have them'. Suggestion: remove incorrect article before plural noun, use 'prefer X to Y', match verb number to subject, and simplify noun phrases.

× I prefer views in other countries, uh, to my own country because I already, uh, have seen, uh, everything in my country. That's what I really want to see new views in other countries. It's my dream.

✓ I prefer views in other countries to my own country because I have already seen most places in my country. That's why I really want to see new views in other countries. It's my dream.

'I already, have seen, everything in my country' is slightly unnatural: use present perfect 'have seen' with 'already' and avoid 'everything' (too absolute); 'most places' is more natural. 'That's what I really want to see new views' is ungrammatical; use 'That's why I really want to see new views'. Suggestion: keep present perfect for life experiences, place 'already' before the past participle or after 'have', and use clear connectors like 'that's why'.