Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be careful with grammar (singular/plural agreement) and keep sentences concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and slightly awkward phrasing.

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I love photographing places I visit because photos help me remember the atmosphere. For example, I often capture sunset colors over mountain ridges and the lights of a city at night, which let me relive a trip later.

Sugestão: Good structure and specific imagery; improve coherence by using clearer linking words and correcting minor article and plural usage. Keep responses within four sentences and avoid mixed metaphors (e.g., 'electrifying energy' is fine but keep parallel structure).

Exemplo: I prefer rural views because they immerse me in nature. For example, I enjoy photographing rolling hills and vivid sunsets, which feel peaceful. That said, I also like city views for their bright lights and lively streets, so I appreciate both.

Sugestão: Avoid awkward or unnatural expressions (e.g., 'foreign visa') and refine coherence: start with direct answer, then add specific reasons and an example. Use natural collocations (e.g., 'travel abroad' or 'foreign countries') and correct minor grammar ('scenery I grew up with').

Exemplo: I like both, but I usually prefer views abroad when I want something new. At home, familiar landscapes are comforting and easy to visit, but I travel abroad for unique architecture and cultures that inspire different photographic ideas.

× I find that taking pictures of landscapes are unique.

✓ I find that taking pictures of landscapes is unique.

The subject of the clause 'taking pictures of landscapes' is a gerund phrase (singular), so it requires a singular verb 'is'. Use subject-verb agreement: singular gerund phrase + singular verb. Improve by identifying the main subject (taking) and matching the verb accordingly.

× Cityscapes allows me to preserve atmosphere of a moment which I often look back on to relive the memories.

✓ Cityscapes allow me to preserve the atmosphere of a moment, which I often look back on to relive the memories.

The noun 'cityscapes' is plural and should take the plural verb 'allow' (third person plural). Also, the phrase needs the definite article 'the' before 'atmosphere' and a comma before the nonrestrictive clause 'which...'. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement and include necessary articles and punctuation.

× Think rolling hills, lush landscape and breathtaking sunsets, while I do appreciate the vibrant, electrifying energy of urban city escapes.

✓ Think rolling hills, lush landscapes and breathtaking sunsets, while I do appreciate the vibrant, electrifying energy of urban city escapes.

The list uses plural nouns for multiple items; 'landscape' should be plural ('landscapes') to match 'rolling hills' and 'sunsets'. Maintain consistent noun forms in lists for parallelism.

× However, that's not to undermine the beauty in my own country.

✓ However, that's not to undermine the beauty of my own country.

Use the preposition 'of' with 'the beauty' to indicate possession or association ('the beauty of my country'), not 'in'. 'Beauty in my country' is not ungrammatical but 'beauty of my country' is more natural here.

× I often find comfort in the scenery I grew up, particularly because I can appreciate it without the hassle of travel.

✓ I often find comfort in the scenery I grew up in, particularly because I can appreciate it without the hassle of travel.

The phrasal verb 'grew up' requires the preposition 'in' to indicate location: 'grew up in (a place)'. Omitting 'in' leaves the verb stranded and makes the sentence ungrammatical. Place the preposition after the clause.

× But if I'm seeking an unforgettable experience and a fresh artistic perspective of photography, I'll always opt for the thrill of a foreign visa.

✓ But if I'm seeking an unforgettable experience and a fresh artistic perspective on photography, I'll always opt for the thrill of visiting a foreign country.

'Perspective on photography' is the correct prepositional choice. 'Foreign visa' is a wrong collocation for seeking travel experiences; 'visiting a foreign country' more clearly expresses the idea. Although 'word choice' is not in the provided list, this correction improves clarity and naturalness.