Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make the answer more concise, correct minor grammar errors, and add a specific example to make it more vivid. Use one clear topic sentence, one or two supporting details with linking words, and avoid repeating phrases like "look back".

Exemplo: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views wherever I go. For example, when I hike with friends I often stop to photograph a valley at sunset because the light and colours look amazing; later, I enjoy looking at those photos to remember the moment.

Sugestão: Improve accuracy and fluency by fixing grammar (plural/singular nouns), using linking words, and giving a specific activity example. Keep the response to 2–3 sentences and replace vague phrases like "plucking the agriculture field" with correct expressions.

Exemplo: I prefer rural views because of the lush greenery and the presence of farm animals like goats and cows. In addition, the fresh air and lower pollution make outdoor activities such as walking through fields or picking seasonal fruits much more enjoyable.

Sugestão: Make the answer grammatically correct and more concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific comparison with linking words (e.g. "however", "for example"). Avoid repetition and awkward phrasing like "I am originally I am" and "in the Canada".

Exemplo: I have lived in Canada but I was born in India, so I can compare both. Overall, Canadian rural areas tend to be greener and less polluted than many rural areas in India; for example, here I can easily find wide, uncrowded hiking trails and dense forests.

× Yes, I love taking picture of different views wherever I go.

✓ Yes, I love taking pictures of different views wherever I go.

The noun 'picture' should be plural ('pictures') because 'taking' implies multiple instances or general activity. Use the plural to match the context of taking photos regularly. Suggestion: Use 'pictures' for general activities or multiple items.

× I often take photos when I travel, when I am cooking or when I am out hiking with friends because I like to capture special moments and look back on them later so I can look back and feel nostalgic.

✓ I often take photos when I travel, when I am cooking, or when I am out hiking with friends because I like to capture special moments and look back on them later to feel nostalgic.

The sentence is wordy and repeats 'look back'. Using 'to feel nostalgic' is more concise and grammatically smooth. Also add a comma before 'or' in a series. Suggestion: Avoid repetition and streamline purpose clauses.

× I prefer views in rural areas because I love the lush greenery and animals like goats and cow.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because I love the lush greenery and animals like goats and cows.

The noun 'cow' should be plural ('cows') to match 'goats' and to indicate animals in general. Keep number agreement when listing multiple animal types.

× I also enjoy the fresh air and lower pollution and there are many peaceful outdoor activities to do in countryside such as plucking the agriculture field.

✓ I also enjoy the fresh air and lower pollution, and there are many peaceful outdoor activities to do in the countryside, such as working in agricultural fields.

Missing definite article 'the' before 'countryside'. The phrase 'plucking the agriculture field' is ungrammatical and unclear; 'working in agricultural fields' or 'working in the fields' conveys intended meaning. Added commas for clarity. Suggestion: Use 'the countryside' and a clearer verb/noun phrase for farm activities.

× I am currently living in Canada but I am originally I am from India so I can compare the views in a both the countries.

✓ I am currently living in Canada, but I am originally from India, so I can compare the views in both countries.

Unnecessary repetition 'I am originally I am' and incorrect use 'a both the countries'. Remove duplication and use 'both countries' without articles. Also add commas for readability.

× I can say that in the Canada rural areas are quite greener and less polluted and less congested as compared to the Indian rural areas.

✓ I can say that in Canada, rural areas are greener, less polluted, and less congested compared to rural areas in India.

Do not use the definite article 'the' before country names like Canada. 'Quieter' or 'greener' does not require 'quite' with 'greener'—simplified. Use commas in a list and rephrase for natural comparison. Suggestion: 'in Canada' and 'compared to rural areas in India' is clearer.

× I like the greenery and scenery over here.

✓ I like the greenery and scenery here.

'Over here' is informal; 'here' suffices. No preposition change necessary but 'over' is redundant. Suggestion: Use 'here' for conciseness.